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Twilightsparkle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#661

hello anu ji kise ho aap

it was my 1st ff that i was reading from you it was awesome yaar

the story you choosen was just too speechless tosay anithing

i really like it

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Twilightsparkle

@Twilightsparkle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#662

and about the bandhan

u know i want to write a story named bandhan but the story was diff

that's why iam reading this

but it was too good trust me

you are doing awesome work just perfect

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Twilightsparkle

@Twilightsparkle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#663

and the story flow was good keep writing it

i will read all works chup chup ke so will give comments dialy at least will try for that

kk ise mat deak i was helpless

and do u know mai writer bangaya

so now i know what cpmments meaant for writers so will definitely give u comments

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Twilightsparkle

@Twilightsparkle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#664

but one thing anu ji

+2 means maan has to be 17 or 16 na

exactly 17

so geet is child labour but maan was not able to tolerate that

but y he dont know per muje batha hai

anu ji usa no hai tho muje do will give him some piece of mind 😆

kk i stopped my bukbuk

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Twilightsparkle

@Twilightsparkle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#665

wow uksi bonding was good anu ji

the way he is protecting every thing was just looking like fiary just like fantacy

aur ha geet ki dad ko kuch karo devel hai wo

dev ki intensions were right or wrong ye batha do

maan was concern about that also

nana possissive hai wo dev gaya kaam se

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Twilightsparkle

@Twilightsparkle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#666

being 17 0r 16 he should know what is physical relation right

i am just asking it muje isa faces mat dikhavo ji

chalo waiting for next plz update soon

i was dying for update so jaldi plz

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ahsaaspyarka

@ahsaaspyarka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#667

very nice update...feeling so proud of maan that he is doing so much for geet, in his innocence, he is not realizing that slowly slowly he is falling for her and geet, she feels the time as her best moment when she is with her chote thakur.

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#668

awesome upd.
loved it.
fab.
Loved maaneet's scene...

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prati

@Luvforever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#669

aww... maan care 4 geet so much... bt will things change at all 4 her...??atlst she gttng basic study 4rm maan & he is even trying to protect her 4rm physcial abuses... bt i realy hate her father... cont d nxt part soon di will be waiting...

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maanshi

@maanshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#670

hii...
i read all 6 part
n it's very heart touching 😭

very sensitive issue u took for this story n u did full justice to the story
great job
👏👏👏
felt very bad for geet condition n same time being her safe here made some relief too

maan is very good heart person n felt bad for geet...
he himself taking good care of geet n also teaching her ... so nice of him