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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#561

part 5
awesome...
hope Geet starts to trust Maan soon...
his love is genuine...
cont soon dear...

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allibr

@allibr

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#562

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Deelight

@Deelight

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Posted: 12 years ago

#563

thnx fa d lovely update !!!

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Zahran

@Zahran.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#564

hello bulbul di...!

Waitng for the 'Lots of Masti' part...!

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prati

@Luvforever

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#565

Amazing & lovely updt dear... I jst luved dat over possive father & daughter duo adorable... Maan wil take geet out 4rm her past wid his luv, care & patience... Cont soon dear...

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maanshi

@maanshi

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#566

superb 👏update
mitu is adorable😃 child
maan n mitu chemistry is amazing ... n mitu's possessiveness towards maan ...love it
mitu shoved dadi's hand 😆n not came to geet also😆
dadi is darling 😃... made maaneet do aarti
lovely part

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#567

Great update...I had already gone thorough this as tonite but sorry for late reply Going great..ur language skills r improving it is good ll wait for u

Edited by Jass.KN - 12 years ago

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Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#568

Originally posted by: Jass.KN
Great update...I had already gone thorough this as tonite but sorry for late reply Going great..ur language skills r improving it is good ll wait for u

thank god someone notice

about my language skill

i m dying to read about it

as i changed my style

maan- haa kya hua

now i will write

"haa kya hua" maan said

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#569

Originally posted by: BULBUL.A

thank god someone notice

about my language skill

i m dying to read about it

as i changed my style

maan- haa kya hua

now i will write

"haa kya hua" maan said

😳

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#570

Originally posted by: BULBUL.A

thank god someone notice

about my language skill

i m dying to read about it

as i changed my style

maan- haa kya hua

now i will write

"haa kya hua" maan said

it doesn't matter what u use Maan:...or ' ...' Maan said ...but way to convey should be good ...Maan : ... that is drama style and '...' novel narration...I was telling about ur tense formation Shakespeare's first style and Tolstoy's second one both attracted mass 😃