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Posted: 12 years ago


TEASER


"What I do Krishna ji, see how maan sir moaning in pain and I can't even go near him but why? He is in sleep when all this happen and he don't know anything so why m I hesitating right now this is my duty to take care of maan sir and mansi" geet thought but this is difficult for her to come out from her shell which maan created last night in his sleep

"ahh paani (water) 'pani" maan moan in pain again and asked for water also in his sleep

what will geet do now? me also thinking 😆


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CHAPTER 1







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Posted: 12 years ago
aww poor maan,yar lovely but sad teaser.
waiting for update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome teaser di
cnt wait 4 the update
jaldi dedo di
waiting eagerly
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc teaser
ab geetu kya karegi
bechara maan ko pyas lagi h
waiting to knowww
jaldi doo dii😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely teaser waiting for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
ofcouse she will do me dam sure n jaldi do na n wan long updt plzzz !!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice n awesome teaser
now let see if geet come out of her shelf
will she help maan or not.
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Posted: 12 years ago



I am not talking to u...

still u have given only teaser...

no update...😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for the update
Edited by valli30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


CHAPTER 13

RECAP: Maan geet come closer physically in their sleep and geet find herself in compromising position with maan.

Mansi is playing with duppata

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"mansi bacha come I will change ur cloth and give u a bath also" geet said, who is coming out from washroom with mansi clothe.

"nee 'aaa ..neee" mansi said and run in under bed with geet duptta and show geet her tongue.



Geet mouth is hanged open to see mansi mischievous and above all that this little rabbit showing her little cute pink tongue.

"hawww u naughty girl come out now" geet said with a little frown and sat down in front of bed.



"nee haa neee" mansi said and laugh on geet plight.



But their little moment broke by maan moan. Who is moaning in pain and stirring in his sleep. Geet hesitated to go near maan and comfort him. All night memory comes in front of her eye. First time she doesn't want to come in front of maan.

"ahh 'haa" maan is moaning in pain continuously and turning on bed which making geet restless.

"What I do Krishna ji, see how maan sir moaning in pain and I can't even go near him but why? He is in sleep when all this happen and he don't know anything so why m I hesitating right now this is my duty to take care of maan sir and mansi" geet thought but this is difficult for her to come out from her shell which maan created last night in his sleep

"ahh paani (water) 'pani" maan moan in pain again and asked for water also in his sleep.

That is, his moan at last broke geet last string of patience. She just goes near maan and takes his head on her lap. Geet take water and start to feed him feed spoon bcoz maan is not in consciousness.

Maan open his eye slowly and adjust his eye in light and see he is laying on geet lap. He startled to see this and get up from geet lap in jiffy.

"ahh..geet I m sorry I think I come on ur lap in sleep by mistake" maan said hesitantly and advert his gaze fom geet.

Geet also lower her eye and think "what if maan sir comes to know about last night, he will be in guilt I will not tell anything to anyone like nothing happen".

"it's ok maan sir"said geet and left from there.

"maan see in ur sleep u come to her lap and made her uncomfortable again with u, maan u have to control till ur mission is not complete u know ur future is dependent on that only" maan thought and adjust himself on bed in sitting position.

Geet went in kitchen for clam her breathe. She clutched her suit above her heart, she is feeling different and above all that they r alone here in this lonely room after sometime geet feel better and start to prepare khada for maan again so he feel better and she has to face maan or else maan will start his enquire which is not good for them as she doesn't want maan feel guilt bcoz of her.

"Geet 'geet" maan shouted.

" what happen maan sir r u ok" geet asked who is come in room from kitchen in hurry.

"Where is mansi'I saw every where she is not in the room" maan asked his face clearly showed his worried for mansi.

"Don't ask maan sir"geet said and kept her hand on her waist.

"huh" maan said and watching geet for a proper answer.

"I m trying to catch her that little devil from morning and she is not ready to come and even showing me her tongue and laughing on me" geet complain to maan in baby tone for some time she forget everything and she doesn't has any idea she is standing in front of maan without dupatta and her cleavage is visible for maan eyes.

"Not coming out'.but where is she?" maan asked with a frown.

"aur kaha her favourite hide out under bed" geet said in complaining tone.

"haa 'hehehe'hehe I amazed she is my daughter or some rat daughter she always do that with everyone" maan said between her laughter.

"R u laughing she is not giving my duppta also" geet with making baby face but reality hit her instantly and she turn and kept her hand on her chest in crossing position.

"mansi come out bacha see dada want to play with his princess" maan said, he knows mansi will come out to listened he is calling her.



Our mansi crawl and come out from her favourite place and shouted to see maan awaken "ahhaahh'hehhehe".

"aao" maan said with smile and give his one hand to mansi which she hold instantly she is longing for maan every morning she make his life hell with her antic after that maan take her with him in jim and made her sit in boker (a sit with wheel which is used for small child to make them walk with support) so she run in whole jim and clap to see maan and yash doing exercise for her this is a type of dance bcoz whenever annie is practice and dance in front of mansi she gave same expression and maan and yash enjoy that little time with their doll.

Mansi hold maan and before pic her up she stand to hold maan hand maan is shocked to see his little doll is standing on her cute little feet. Maan just come out of shocked and kiss mansi whole face.

"ohh my doll u stand on ur feet first time now I will celebrate my baby first walk and kiss her whole" maan said in over enthusiasm.



Mansi is laughing to see her dada is kissing her and loving her so much. Maan just forget his pain but he is carrying mansi on another shoulder which is perfectly all right maan bend and put mansi on floor and held her little palm in his hand and made her walk 2-3 steps after that she sit on floor with a thud and see maan with baby face.

"arre geet come see my bacha is stand first time u will arrange a party when we reach delhi" maan said who is trying to make mansi walk.

Geet come out from kitchen when she listened maan voice and became witness of beautiful moment of father and daughter. Geet is amazed to see THE GREAT MSK is now sitting on floor to make his doll walk and kissing on mansi toes in happiness and making her tickle.

"Why r u standing there, come here see how mansi is walking with support of my finger" maan said to see geet who is lost somewhere.



"haa maan sir I m coming" geet said and wash her hand and come near maan and mansi.

She takes mansi on her lap and kiss her cheek and asked to maan "maan sir which sweet mansi like so much I made for her today as today is so important day for her".

"kheer geet" he said and searching something in wardrobe.

"What r u searching maan sir" geet asked who is confused.

"arre camera geet I want to capture this moment for my whole life" maan said with over enthusiasm.

Geet smile to an over enthusiasm father who want to tell whole world that her doll take first step today.

Geet kept mansi on floor and go near maan and said "I will search u go and sit with mansi".

"no geet, ok we both search, u search that side and me on that side" maan said.



Maan and geet both r busy in searching camera suddenly geet foot slip on slipper carpet and she land on maan and maan hold her tight with in his hand and they r on floor geet is laying beneath maan and their eye mat and they lost each other.

Somewhere mansi first step cover the distance which come in last night between maan and geet.

Precap: maan geet hot moment and maan's gift for mansi first step.


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