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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Hey great work buddy,tho u said this was ur first attempt to write intimate scenes,but i really liked it.And of course we want more 😉

Anywas,i can understand how geet must've felt after waking up in a compromising position wid Maan.May be slowly she realises her feelings.

Loved d update.

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queenbee001

@queenbee001

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

hot hot passionate 😊 good Geet ki neendh kuli at the right time .. let her not mistake Maan for what happened..

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dolly10

@dolly10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Nice update

Loved it

Waiting for next update

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

wow lovely update dear.. te way my maan touching his geet no no wants to claim his geet and geet accepting it was so lovely, but wen she realize it she is feeling its a mistake, oh god.. my maaneet in they sleep too , they heart know were they belongs...te way geet is feeling worried and seeing my maan sleeping and naughty mansi woke up and sulking te thumb so lovely scenes..i love te update dear

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usha

@ushankitvc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

fab updt...loved it...simply pure...geet started feeling fr maan...loved ur way of describibg their relation...funtabulous!!!!! continue soon...

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Sia

@lovesia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

fab

agar geet ko sense nahi aata toh pata nahi kya kya ho jata

geet was not feeling disgusted when maan touch her awesome

yeh toh hona hi tha

do dil mil rahe hai magar chupke chupke😆

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seemamary

@seemamary

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

I hope maan too remembers the passionate moments.

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maaneetmaahi

@maaneetmaahi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

loved the update dear..nicely written.
the intimate scene between Maaneet was superbly written..with no awkwardness..and with full passion ..
i think Maaneet have some past..may be Geet have forgotten Their past..
and she didn't feel disgust about that but she is happy..and she is also dreaming about Maan..hayee Geet tho gayi..
but dear you have mentioned that 'after this day every thing will be changed ' i am too scared..
Geet is really sweet she didn't once thought otherwise about Maan after that incident.. loved her respect for him ..
maansi's cute sa part was awesome.. she is not living Geet's dupatta, ha ha naughty angel..
interesting precap,.