FEAR,LOVE&HATRED updated PART 4

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giaa5678

@giaa5678

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Posted: 13 years ago

concept

GEET HANDA is a 18 year old girl daughter of well known businessman in india . currently she is studying but her family is forcing her to marry a guy named DEV SINGH KHURANA who issweet & fun loving onlyfor outsiders but no one knows his real face he hates his brother MAAN SINGH KHURANA a little rude but kind hearted man he is a MD of khurana construction loves his family alot.

let me know if i should continue this or not.😊

Part 1

A girl is standing in the kitchen of khurana mansion thinking how can god so cruel to her remembering the incidents happened in her life speacially how her life turned up side down just in 6 months.

flashback

she was coming from her college,when she reached her house she got the biggest suprise in her life:

Mohinder handa(her dad):you came i have to tell you very important thing kal ladke walle aa rahe hai tumhe dekhne.

she:but dad ihave to study how can u do this to me.

dad:listen u GEET HANDA u r my daughter i hav every right on u.

geet:but dad

withsudden sound she came back to her present

man:hey geet what are u thinking

she smiled at d person standing in front of her who is d only a good thing in her life.

geet:aap yaha kya kar rahe hai kuch kaam tha.

man:kyu mai maan singh khurana aapne ghar ke kitchen me nahi aa sakta waise tum bana kya rahi ho.

geet:aap bhi na maan maine kab mana kia aapko yaha aane ke liye.waise mai breakfast bana rahi thi sab ke liye.

maan:tum bhi na yaha itne saare naukar hai aur tum ho ki chodotum se toh baat karna bekar hai(with that he started cribing her a little that she can hear it)

geet:maan aap toh jaante hai wo dev.

(with the mention of his brother dev singh khurana his face became stern & said)

maan:how can u do this u don't hav to bear him.

geet :i know. maan u know what aap jab tak mere saath hai mai thik hu dev mera pati hai.

(with he took her in her embrace.)

geet :thanku meri life me aane ke liye.

maan:tumhe bhi aur thanku muje smile krane ke liye.

precap:more scenes of past& dev's entry

sorry for d short update& will clear d confusion in next part.

sorry fr the mistakes

PART 2- PG 2

part 3 - pg 3https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/77406704

part 4-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3251786/fear-love-and-hatred-updated-part-4

Edited by giaa5678 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

Sounds Nice !! :) !!

Cont Soon !! :) !!

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disha

@Conqueror212

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Posted: 13 years ago

great...
nice concept...😊
congrats... ang good luck for ur new ff...
update sooonnn...

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Dona

@Donnaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

when will u update this???

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Zariya

@zariya123

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Posted: 12 years ago

it is awesome
maaneet are married or not dev is hubby or not
confusing???????????????????????????

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Infinity.

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Posted: 12 years ago

intresting concept

do continue soon n pm me

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Angel

@amita5

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome update

waiting for the next oart

please update soon

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giaa5678

@giaa5678

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Posted: 12 years ago

part 2

Dev:geet where were u i was calling u from so and u r coming now

Geet :woh i was in kitchen.what do u want tell me

Dev: where are those files which i kept on the table last night

Geet:u go i will search it

dev:fast i don't have much like u(with that his phn rings)

dev:hey sweety how r u

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dev:c'mon let's party tonight.tonight i will come to ur house.don't forget to wear that sexy dress i gifted u last time.after the money i spent on u till u have to fullfill my desire . so meet u at 11 at night at ur home...bye make sure u make me happy tonight or u don't know me be ready make me happy sweetheart.(with this he called someone)

dev:i have to go on a trip next week make sure ihave superhot model with me(with this he kept the phone on the bed came near geet.

geet:(who had heard each and every word was in tears)

dev:(brought her in front of him and started kissing her)

dev:u bitch stop this drama of urs let me kiss u

geet:why r u doing this sob if u don't love me leave me plz

dev:what to do geet ur so sexy and sweet to taste without relishing u my desire does'nt stop

geet:why can't u stop going to them.dev she to whom ur going tonight she is ur 15th girlfriend after marriage and top of that and after our marrige u have gone 3 times to trip of 1-1 week and whenever u go u take one of the super model with u.see maan he is unmarried but thaen also he does'nt uses girls like u.

dev:stop ur lecture u bitch (with that hethrow her on the bed and hovers her)ihave many other works to do.and stop wriggling this is not the first time and don't forget that i don't have any problem with ur wriggling i can force only u will hurt in it

geet:like like u have forced me on our first wedding night uknow what dev ur a rapiest.

(they hear a knock on the door )

dev opens it and says : here comes ur saviour

geet:maan

dev:i m going to office

with that maan comes near her and take her in his embrace

geet:maan i have to go from hear hell will be better than this plz maan

maan:first stop crying.and eat some thing and i m here na i will take u away from this world but u know if i wil go from her dev will make every one's life hell but don't worry from tomorrow u will not face any thing that ur facing from last six months go and fresh up then we will do breakfast

with that geet goes in to washroom

flashback

geet who was sitting on her bed and someone was applying mehendi on her her hand as tommorrow is her wedding girls around her were talking and giggling but geet was silent as she knew that to a monster she was going marry.

(day of the marriage)

girl:geet ur menendi is so dark u husband will love u are where is dev name's first letter hey i didn't found d but here it is letter M

geet;ya the girl who was applying mendi told me that its her mistake

with a knock she came back to present

PRECAP:flashback

geet:plz i want some time i am not ready for this

dev:that does'nt matter to me because i am ready and as u r my wife i have full right on u with this...her screams where all over the room...

manneet's first meeting

present

maan:pack ur bags now geet we have to leave

I KNOW THAT I POSTED THIS PART SO LATE AND IT IS SHORT ALSO BUT FROM NOW ON I WILL POST IT ON EVERY WEEKEND

SORRY FOR THE MISTAKES

PLZ LIKE AND DO LEAVE COMMENTS

Edited by giaa5678 - 12 years ago

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harshithaaaaaaa

@harshithaaaaaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice part

dev and geet are married

dev forced geet and also having many relations even after marriage

maan is geet's saviour

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#10

congrats for ur ff

nice parts

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