ABODH#2 UPDATED Pt 33/Pg 120 @ 17 jan - Page 31

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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for next part dearcont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update buddy
hehehe geet loves him nd maan teasing her
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update buddy
finally maan confessed it was very sweet
scary precap
do cont soon buddy
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it yaar...Geet is so inncoent and Maan though in love is still a devil...hope he doesn't hurt her and understand her...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update,scary precap.
eagerly waiting for next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg so maan confessed his love to her yipeee
y geet said she doesnt trust maan
do update soon
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This part is for my Somu & Livu ... love you sooo much 😳

Part 26



She had lost her everything. She was detached when, She felt a hand on her waist. She couldn't open her eyes. She felt , hand was slipping toward her stomach. She dint open eyes. Hand pushed her, back. She tucked on a hard form. She moved her eyes, inside closed eyelids, wandering. She felt, warm breath on her shoulder. She pressed her eyes tighter. She realized, someone is covering her fragile form, to his hard, big feature. She was going to open her eyes when stopped, hearing..



"I Love You Geet'' and a lip, touched her cheek...



She shivered. She felt a touch which always she dreamed in night. She had been living in this moment since , she welcomed Special Guest, in her heart. But today, now, when her love walked in her life, she could not believe. She did not believe its happening, after what had happened. She had heard her love, did not love her, how it can be real then ? ''



" Geet ! I Love You '' she again, been touched by same breath. Same voice dropped in her ear but why her heart was not dancing why !, she wandered.



Maan turned her, toward him getting no response of his confession. He saw, her eyes were closed. Her face was wet with millions of salty drop trails. Her lips, were trembling, quivering. She was, Indeed, not happy. But why ? He frowned. He was sure she loved him only. He had heard her talk with Adi then what went wrong?



" Geet, open your eyes '' he spoke, requested a bit



She did and stared his eyes. It was same, as hers. It had same emotion what she had been carrying then why, she was not powering to accept, what he confessed. Seemed, his words had left deep scar on her love-sick feeble heart.



"What happened Geet'' Maan asked, cupping her face.



"Nothing'' She replied. She removed his hand from her face and turned " Nothing happened me Maan. I am fine, perfectly fine. You go please. Its not right for you to be here at this time ''



" I wont. I wont go and I know, you are not fine. I can see something is bothering you Geet and I know what''



She tightened her eyelids.



" I know Geet what you are thinking what is bothering you. you are hurt because of what you heard in Adi' home. But that was only a drama Geet nothing else. I was just teasing you cause have already heard what you had talked with Adi. And was just enjoying your restlessness, which was for me only. I know I was wrong, I did wrong and never knew, it would pain you like this . Please forgive me Geet but don't go away. Shout on me Geet, do anger any much you want but don't be silent. I want you to show your right on me. I have no one in my life besides you. Geet look me , say something, Mishty ''





Now her heart started dancing. Yes, she was happy. She was very happy Maan loved her only, on one else. She smiled, hiding from Maan. Her love, her maan was confessing his love. She could believe. She could see truths in his broken, sadden voice. She was wanting to run and hug him tight. She was wanting to spend her whole life, in this moment. Fast n fast, she was wishing to do everything, she had dreamed, since years. Her dream to kiss him, hug him till infinity, spend her days wandering with him, in shops and everywhere. Her dream to cook food for him, give him clothes when he would be ready for office, his wallet, his hanky, his watch and a sweet goodbye kiss. Her dreams were so special yet so simple. She started living in her real dream, forgot, Maan was waiting for her reply.



She came back from dreamworld. She made face. No way this easily she would let him became happy. She had had enough and now, it was his turn. She composed herself



" I don't trust you Maan'' she said



" You will '' Maan said



" No I wont, I cant. I would not ever . You cant force me ''



" I wont Geet, I have no need of forcing you because I know, you love me and you trust me, as well ''



"And How? If you are thinking about those letters then let me tell you Maan, it all was just infatuation, don't think its Love ''



" I wont. And I dont need your any word to understand your love for me. I have seen love in your eyes, in your talk , in your every postures. The way you look me hiding. The way you caress your strands while talking me. The way your eyes shine when you see me. The way you look down, shy when I be near you. I know its only love Geet and you cant deny it. I know you are hiding your confession. Want me to give same pain which you got, unknowingly from me. You want me to suffer as you are being don't know from when then ok, ok Geet am ready. I am ready for whatever punishment you like for me. I will bear all for you, for your love but pls Geet, please accept my only request''



" Don't ever say you don't trust me '' it hurts '' and he left. He left her room leaving her drawn in her tears. Her happy tears which was making its own way, out of her life, for ever. She turned, saw his going. She run out, to stairs, in entire hall but he was no where. She run back her room, her balcony and saw, he was there. Going, leaving with heavy heart and she, could not bear this sight. She took up her phone and dialed.



Maan phone rung. He pick from passenger seat of his car and saw, " Geet''. He fearing, with beating heart kept phone on ears and then, his heart skipped a beat



" I love you Maan''



He was unable to move. He was keeping phone on ear like it had glued tight. He did not believe but when heard more he jumped from his seat



" I love you so much Maan. I trust you more than anything''



he came out of car and lifted his gaze, up. She was there, standing, holding her phone in hand, clutching near heart. He smiled. He wanted to go inside but she stopped, shaking her head, pleading. It was to morning and she promised, to meet next day...




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Hope You All Liking This ----
Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love the update and the letter part is very touching... Maan teased her...grrr mann kar raha hai ek lagau use ... Gadha kahi ka pata nahi kab sudhrega :@
anyways superbbb dear luking forwrd how he handles now
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Posted: 12 years ago
haila yea part mere aur livu k liye...awww...i love u so much lovu...hugsss🤗 &muaaahhh...😭...kar de na fir se mujhe emo...😊

wowww...superbbb duperbbb updateee lovu👏...

aa haaa...maan ne finally confess kar diya😊...geet ne jo acting ki jaane k baat that maan loves her...uske wajha se maan aur v fass gaya aur dil ki baat puri tarha zuban pe aa gaya well done geet...😉👍🏼😊


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