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Posted: 12 years ago

Best Storm...!!!

Best Putul's Birthday...!!!

Best Small Accident...!!!

First I thought what will happen with his accident on putul's birthday...I was scared how he will reach home as geet could go and find out due to putul...thnak god he is safe...

He realised the importance of geet & putul in his life...what if something happened with him...how they will live without him...very good geet...you made him realise how both are imp in his life...

He could not hold back his feelings for her...

Happy for their cute moment...

I am sad that they could not celebrate putul's birthday...

Best part in my POV is...

"Why were you so much worried about me???"he asked.

"Why do you always question my affection,maan???"She replied with another question.He caressed his fingers over the dry tear streaks on her cheeks.."Say it,geet.."he whispered touching his forehead to hers.."I don't want to run from this feeling anymore..I want to feel it..just say it once geet..."

"I don't know,what you want to hear,maan..My last answer had brought much distance between us"She said,clutching the back of couch with her one hand.Fear of loosing him was evident in her tone.

"Just say,what your heart feels...I just want to hear that geet"

She closed her eyes and a fresh wave of tears spilled out.Her heart was unable to bear more,as she found it bursting with emotions.Words were lost somewhere in thin air around and betweem them.Mere three words"I love you" felt superficial at that moment,still she tried to utter them but it resulted in an increase in trembling of her lips.

."Say it,please.."he almost pleaded this time..She knew,her tongue would not help her anymore,so she did that which could convey him,a tiniest part of the love which she had in her heart only and only for him.She brushed her lips on his"

Palin make him confess the way she confessed 😉😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow what a great part dear

loved it

thank GOD maan is save

wow geet confess her love

please cont soon

thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank you so much dear for such a mind blowing update
it was so emotional
maan and geet moments were truly blissful
the way maan only wanted to receive geet's love was too good
as if wants to feel the bliss totally each and every moment of it to compensate for all the moments when he was resisting geet's love
the way he kept his eyes closed was tooo good
and geet's condition stumbling in the darkness , her not being able to utter those three words everything was so very heart touching
what a wonderful piece of writing👏👏👏👏👏
though putul could not celebrate her birthday but she got the best birthday gift
her mum and dad together
next morning when she will open her eyes to step into her second yr she will begin her day with her mum and dad's love
will be nice to see maan's love for putul without any restriction now
once again👏👏👏👏👏👏
for such a brilliant update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finallly he decideed to have love in his life...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 31
awesome part...
Putul and Geet's love is really so beautiful...
and Maan has now learnt his lesson to not distance himself from Putul...
and Geet he has confessed in his own way...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
every time i think this is the best update but u prove me wrong and am happy that am wrong again... this was just the awesomesttt part...

You don't know what next minute is going to bring for you ... how true... every man is behind their future but what future beholds for us is a matter which no one knows... so better do things which is possible for us to do and in maans case its truly cherishing the gifts which god has bestowed on him, putul and geet ... and am happy that now he accepts it too...

"thanks For not stopping me from loving you..."... i just loved this line... a big hug for u 🤗

and last but not at all the least i just love how u describe putuls activities ... her bonding... her talk... her pink sandals with the whistling doub
t... her every detail u describe i feel as if am watching her in real ...in this part where she abandoned her balloon and was going after what geet was having in her hand... its so true to a kids character... 👏

continue soon



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Diva7

my gosh...it was a standing ovation update👏 it touched my heart

"I don't want to run from this feeling anymore..I want to feel it..just say it once geet..."....u know u bring tears of joy in my eyes sachchi, i cnt tell u how happy i m fr him, its lyk storm has washed away all his miseries...n he's in bliss of her arms n m feeling blessed dat m witnessing dis serene love.

n wat a fantastic work on detailing...lyk tying one more yellow balloon in d bunch of four other balloons,Wax had messed the icing of the cake, putuls fvrt yellow balloon, her pink whistling sandals... aww how cute n how realistic

"She needed putul near her more than little girl needed her"...wow so true
."Let me hug you please"...uff she's assuring herself dat he's fine n trying to sooth his pain, in past various times she stopped herself bt not today not today

"Death is not in your hands but loving your daughter is in your hands,,,"....yes liv ur lyf wid watevr luv u hav, giv it to ur luvd ones, show it to them...who knows wats in fate, y distance urself frm all d luv n happiness,n worrying over uncertain future.

each n every word of dis update touched d bottom of my heart...lyk i said u see happiness n hope in each n everything no matter wats d situation ...n it brings lyf in ur stories...see lyk todays update storm is d sign of destruction bt u saw a positive side of it n u choose storm to bring peace n happiness in their lyf...superb thought... everything happens fr a reason n every volcanic eruption or storm is not a sign of disaster it brings fertile land n gives lyf to new species.
PS ur music selection is my fvrt...it was cherry on top...n helped in to bring out d perfect emotions👏 👏 👏
now jhappi time fr dis mesmerizing update🤗 🤗 🤗

Very deep and optimistic thought diva...So there is a quite sensitive side of diva is hidden beneath ispiderman ispidermaan and PT loving diva..Thanks to india forums for making me meet a person like you...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shonameet

It was a stromy update...
Strom of emotions...
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Geet was worrid for maan...that if he is ok or not!
And at that time putul was her strenth to hold herself n think positive...
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And for maan...he was trying to reach home...wanted to see the two most important persons of his life...
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And at that time he felt that...felt that may be it will be his last moment...may be he will never be able to see those two most precious persons in his life ever again...whom he wanted to see despreatly!
That he will not get a chance to confece his luv for them...that till now...he has done a mistake by ignoring them nd denying his luv for them...
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Till this moment, he fear that he may loose them if showd his luv...but facing that actual moment...where he was at the edge of loosing them forever...was more fearful...
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And he realise that k khone k dar se khushiyon se mooh nahi moda jaata...
...kyunki uske door rahne se bhi...he cant change wat destiny has already decided for them...
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Finally maan accepted geets luv ...
His yarning for her luv was evident in his pleads!
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I cant put my thoughts in words properly yaar...{common shona..you have explained the whole update in such a good way...even i would not have explained it this good...😊}
...just like to say that k jaise baarish k baad gili mitti ki soundhi-soundhi khooshboo hawaa ko mehkaati hai...now, unki zindagi bhi ussi tarah mehkegi! { amen..❤️👍🏼}
Coz they both will never leave eachother now!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

so beautiful...absolutely etheral

it is so true that moments when you realise how fickle life is you understand it's importance. It's importance to shower love on the one's who matter to you.
While coming back from work, I had an accident once. My hand was broken and the first thought which came to mind was how will I feed my son again. Tears came out of my eyes and i was screaming madly "my hand...my hand"
Moments like this can make one realise what they are running from and also those mundane things we take for granted.

The term "motherhood" can be explained by these three lines...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Thanks Anu...yes I always feel that extreme distress brings out the best in people...that is why when there are bomb blasts, people help each other wheras same person may not be kind enough in their real life...

Trauma can turn atheists into believers and hatred into love...

Exactly!!!👍🏼..
Honestly telling,i don't think this much deep before writing a update..I wrote that accident part becau😊se i wanted to maan realize that rather than his loved ones leaving him,life{or death} could make them loose him..but comments of readers like you makes me see my own work under a new light..It helps me to get mature little...Thank you so much..

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