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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamymishti88

Superb

Loved it dear

Continue soon

Waiting

HAPPY DIWALI


thanksss..
4 wish too😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

thank u so much 4 cmnt😃😃😃
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thanks..
m glad tht u lykd it😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: valli22

nice part

maan missing geet
geet is going somewhere else..even rk wont know
i think


thanks 4 ur cmnts
hope so...😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzlingdivz

geet will leave them and go 😲 kaha jayegi n kaise jaayegi???

yaar sab itna hotch potch kyu hai why couldnt it be simple...!!
RK ko smjh main aa jaana chahie kuch gadbad hai ab tak to but nahi he is acting like an idiot as well
grrr
aoww Maan ko har cheez main Geet ki yaad aa rahi hai khaane main b
hushh the past was too cute and lovely just loved the way maan prepared and geet showed tantrums but finally ate it up was too cute yaar...!!!!

and then finally the end was heart wrenching itna kyu tadpaa rahi hai plzz jaldi se dono ko sath main laa na plz plz plz


ohhh... divzi 😭
aree agr mila dia toh tu read nhi karege... n itna cmnt kaise karege???😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzlingdivz

yaar ab to update de de na 6 days ho gaye hai 😭


showiii shwoiee
late ho jaati hu.. kya karu..
n tu khud sbse late read krti hai..😉
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Posted: 12 years ago



He took a pic 4m his bag n sits on the bed..

He caresses it..

Tears were not in his eyes' his tears were also not left in his eyes'

"y u did this???

Vapas a jao na geet.. plzz.. vapas a jao

Tumhare bina tumhara ye maan adhura hai geet.. I need u..

Tumhe bhulna chahu fr bhi nahi bhula pa rha hun geet' ese ku ho rha hai geet???

Har cheez mje tumhari yaad dila rai hai.. chah kar bhi mn tumhe apne zehan se kyu nahi nikal pa rha hu????

Chah kr bhi mn tumhe bhul nahi pa rha hu'

Kyu???? Kyu????

He slept thre while holding his mishty's photo..

PART 9



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MY NEW OS.

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Aftr 2 days.. whn geet is fine..

In hospital..

She is quite gud now' acc. To docs so she is giving discharge..

Rk- so geet.. ab tu maan k paas j rahi hai.. m vry happy 4 u both.. thank god nthng happen to u

When he said maan' smthng rings in geet's mind.. n she stops thre' maan k paas??? Hw she can go thre..

Rk- haan geet..

Geet- haan'

Rk- I'll drop u

She instantly said.. nahi..

Rk suspects n said.. kya hua??? Kyu???

Geet- vo I mean.. mn khud chali jaugi..tum fikr mat kro.

I don't want to trouble u

Rk- vt??? Who said u ll trouble me???

Madhu- haan.. vt u saying????

Geet- aree baba.. m fine nw.. mn chali jaugi

Madhu- ab tu hmari baat kha se manegi

Geet(St)- uff nw vt to do??? M confused n stuck babaji.. inko kya btaun???

Okk'

Both gave a smile..

Geet's phn rung..

She received the call.

Geet- hello'

Rk gestures her tht he is cmng in 5 mins'

Madhu also goes with him.. n geet left alone in room

Caller thts a lady sound- hw r u nw??

Geet-sorry' whose it??

Caller- not of ur business..

Geet- vt u mean?

Caller- I hope u care 4 ur dear hubby's wife n ur cute lil child???

Geet- vt??? Who r u??

Caller- oh ho geet'. Itni jldi bhul bhi gae' thoda badaam khaya kro..


Geet was all silent' who is she??? Hw she knws abt her??? Kahi ye vhi log toh nhai who wanna kill maan.. nahi..

Caller- kya soch rahi ho geet????

Hmmm yaad aya kuch ya karvau' n gave a evil laugh..

Geet-vt u want

Caller- tht u knw baby'. Dn in a hard tone.. leave him..

Geet's ground like slipped' she is saying her to leave'mnz she is right' she is talking abt maan.. to leave maan..bt hw dare she.. who is she to say her??? Say herto leave him????


Caller- I thnk u r not taking me seriously????haina???

Geet- nahi vo mn' geet's eyes were wet to the mere thought of leaving her jaan..

Tears strt flowing 4m her eyes..

Caller- chchch..(like whn we say a baby nt to cry)

U toh strted crying' abhi toh waqt haiin ansuoon kogiraane k liye..inhe sambhaalk rakho geet' baad mei kaam ayege agrtum nahi gae.

Geet-nahi'.

Caller- oh so.. vts ur decision???

Geet composed herself-m leaving'bt dare u touch him..u will not harm him.. promise me..

Caller- ohh..toh dhamkide rahiho'oh ho'mn toh darr gae..

Geet-jo kahogi'i'll do..bttum unhe kuch nahi karogi..

Caller- done'

N call ended..

The phn slipped 4m geet's hand n she landed on floor'.

Shedding the most precious diamonds on the floor' her tears were not stopping 4m flowing'its like a water fall..

"kaise jeun gi main aapke bina maan??? I cant evn think my 1 sec of life without.. n here I hav to leave 4 for lifetime.. only 4 ur gud'babaji mje shakti dena.. plzzz..

Maan plzz don't hate me..ur geet luves u infinite'"

"Unke bina ye zindagi bejaan c hai

Khoon ki ek ek boond unke naam ki hai.

Marr mitege unki khatir..

Agr mauka mile toh..

Kabhi dua mein hi hume yaad kr lena.

Bs hume kabhi bhula mat dena"

( by me)

Madhu enters the room'

She saw heron the floor.. so she runs to her..

Kya hua???

Geet immediately wiped her tears.. nahi kuch nahi..

Vo.. n she strted searching smthng under the bed.

"vo mera phn gir gya tha.. vhi doon rahi hu.."

Madhu nodded.. n she too saw here n there..

Geet's phn was near geer she picks it n stand.. mil gya..

Madhu smiles to her..

Rk enters' lets go ladies'

Both nodded n moved towards the parking..


Rk got a call..

He has to go urgently 4 shooting smwhere' n work is urgent.. madhu too hav to go with her.. as its her work too..she also called..(both r shooting 4 same film as leads)

Rk- I cant.. I hav work' cancel it

Geet-ohho.. u both go na'ican go by myself.. see m fine now

Madhu- bt geet' u'tje akele kaise chod k jaye..

Geet- jao na' all r waiting 4 u both..go plzz

Rk- bt.

Geet-no if no bt.. only yes..n u both r going..

Rk- okk.. bt msg me haan. Whn u reached'

Geet- haan baba..krugi.. ab jao..

Rk- okk..bt hum the aadhe raaste mein chod dete hai..

Geet- no..i'll manage..

Dn both rk n madhu leave 4m there..its an outdoor shoot..

Whn dy go..geet text to sm1' "THANK YOU.."

(geet called sm1 on shooting n said them to call rk urgent n keep him busy..she is vry gud frnd off her. So she agrees' n here rk got the call)

She took a taxi n went to airport'

On the way..

BG MUSIC'. (SONG 4M MOVIE EK THA TIGER-SAIYAARA)

Geet saw outside of window pane' pain is clearly visible in her eyes' she will miss him'no she will not' kehte hai na..yaad unko kia jaata hai jinhe hum bhula de'geet maan ko kaise bhula skti hai'hw can 1 forget to breath????maan is geet's breath.. so to survive she needs to breathe n will alwz remember her maan in her heart'


She said in a low whisper.. "love u maan..sorry.."

A unknown tear.. a peral made its way 4m her almond hazel eyes ..

Before it can touch the ground or to taxi' ground.. it came on its finger'

She saw up..

Here maan is sitting with angry n puppy face.. he nodded him to no' not shed those priceless pearls 4m her eyes..

"mishty tumhe koi haq nahi giraane ka.. u belongs to me.. n without my purmishen u cant do anything not evn to shed these.. he gestures to tht tear'


He licks tht tear'

Geet smiles in her teary face' n nodded to yes..


She was abt to touch maan's face n it vanished'

Maan was not there' hw he can be'

He toh not evn wants to see my face' hmm hw can sm1???

Maan was not having his food properly' he was silently having the food while sitting on dinning table'

Daadi was talking n maan jst saying hu.. haan to her.

Not evn listening vt she is saying

N get up 4m there n moves to his room'

He was like a dead body'

Who don't knw hw to live without his mishty, his jaan, his geet.. bt he hav to' he hav to survive 4 his lil princess jannat'

She need her father.. n he ll alwz be ther 4 her..


aasmaan, tera mera hua
khwaab ki tarah dhuaan dhuaan
aasmaan, tera mera hua
saans ki tarah ruaan ruaan

PREVIOUS- PART 8 page no 82


hehehe.. sryyy 4 stopping.. kya timing hai na stop krne ki'.

Enough 4 ths updte' 4m nw bear me with this size of updtes' sorry.. cant type more..

I hav typed a lot.. nw its ur turn to give me long cmnts.. give me a surprising sa response.. so tht I'll give u a surprise in cmng updtes n give jldi updte..

Only few..hmm only 3-4 ppl gave me cute n big cmnts..baaki sab ka toh vhi rukha sukha sa.. "nyc, awesome, fabb.."ye bakwaas se cmnts hote hai..

Plzzz give me smthg new'

Thanx 4 reading.

Sorry 4 mistakes.. especially space ki mistakes.. my button not working properly.. sorry'

ONE SHOTS {OS}
3. TRIP OF LOVE- PART 1

Edited by simrancuty - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
i feel sorry for both geet and maan
thanks for the pm

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