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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Zindagi me aaj lamhe khaas aaye

aate aate dono ke dil paas aagaye Hai
gumoan ke saaye mein bahut mashroof the hum
aapki aankhon ki mohabbat mehsoos kar na paaye hum
vivah ke bandhano ko pura kar na paye hum
aapki pyar ke jharoke ko ehsaas kar na pye hum
door hue aapse , dil ne behaal kiya humko
aapke hone ka ehsaas ka dastak diya
Kuch meethe pal yaad aaye
palko par ansu chod gaye
phir aaj aapke
hone ka ehsaas ka dastak diya humein
Chod ke jana na tum saans le na payenge hum
kab tum anjani se jani pehchani si ho gayi tum
dil mein tumhein itna samaoun mein
mohabbat ke sej mein sulaon tumein
aapne aagosh mein chand taare bhi dikhaoun tumhein
zindagi ki har khushi suagat mein laaon tumhein
Zindegi me aaj lamhe khaas aagaye
aate aate dono ke dil paas aagaye Hai
congrats ritzy for new thread and waiting for update . Random words to potray d journey of vivah till date from maan' s pov
Edited by hermoso - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: hermoso

Zindagi me aaj lamhe khaas aaye

aate aate dono ke dil paas aagaye Hai
gumoan ke saaye mein bahut mashroof the hum
aapki aankhon ki mohabbat dekh na paaye hum
vivah ke bandhano ko pura kar na paye hum
aapki pyar ke jharoke ko ehsaas kar na pye hum
door hue aapse , dil ne behaal kiya humko
aapke hone ka ehsaas ka dastak diya
Kuch meethe pal yaad aaye
palko par ansu chod gaye
phir aaj aapke
hone ka ehsaas ka dastak diya
Chod ke jana na tum saans le na payenge hum
kab tum anjani se jani pehchani si ho gayi tum
dil mein tumhein itna samaoun mein
mohabbat ke sej mein sulaon tumein
aapne aagosh mein chand taare bhi dikhaoun tumhein
zindagi ki har khushi suagat mein laaon tumhein
Zindegi me aaj lamhe khaas aagaye
aate aate dono ke dil paas aagaye Hai
congrats ritzy for new thread and waiting for update . Random words to potray d journey of vivah till date from maan' s pov

Absolutely stunning Anu...I am going to place it after a very special chapter so that all readers can enjoy it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
congrats for the new thread
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
For the new Thread
Waiting for the

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congratulations for thread 9... Will be waiting for update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Congrats on the new thread.. Will wait for the update.. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for the new thread
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
I have been SOOO caught up in this story that it wasn't till the last part that I realised you've given us 50+ updates. I absolutely love this story and obviously so do many others (hence the ninth thread) and your writing style is beautiful! I can still say after so many parts that it feels like the story has just begun and you have so much more to offer! I'm glad I found your writing through 'Till death do us part'. Thank you :) x

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