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Posted: 12 years ago
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warning: plz skip the update or give up reading if u dont like the language i have used bt dont be mad at me
PART 2:
Geet reached home as the coldness in the voice of her badi maa scared her. Geet looked so worn out and her face, her swollen lips, those loves bites on her body were clearly visible. The skin complexion of her made them even more prominent. Moreover the way she stumbled while walking her badi maa observed every move as geet walked into the house slowly. Geet did not come home last night and to add to that she did not even bother picking her phone even after calling for so many times. Badi maa was already suspicious and geet's condition added fuel to her seething anger. Geet was abt to fall down wen badi maa held her arm harshly and spoke kiske saath raat guzaarke aayi ho geet??? listening to those harsh words of her badi maa geet's eyes turned teary she didn't want to answer as it was a really personal matter of her, a very personal yet blissful moment of her, bt then she was at fault she did something which she was not supposed to. Maan was not in his senses bt she was!!! She was very much. How cud she loose herself in his bekali to have her?? the next set of words from her badi maa made geet to choke maine poocha kiske saath raat guzaarke aayi ho geet?? tumhare uss boss ke saath?? Ek raat ke liye usne kitne paise diye tumhe?? Mujhe nahi pata tha meri beti aisi niklegi!!! Chi geet meri tu khud ka khoon nahi ho aaj tumne yeh saabit kar diya. I promised ur mom that ull remain a pure soul all ur life bt ur body has become impure so is ur soul now tune aisa kyun kiya geet??? how cud u just roll on bed with someone u were having fun here and I was waiting for u all night!!!'''' bus kijiye badi maa I was impure not anymore and I am more than pure haan raat guzaari maine maan ke saath aur mujhe iss baat ka afsos nahi hai I love him *slap* tune socha bhi kaise ki who tujhse pyar karega?? U can neva meet his standards geet who bade ghar se hai aur tu?? Geet knew that she can neva be maan's choice. She was getting suffocated with every word of her badi maa. Maan might forget!!! Forget?? He may not even remember as he was not in his senses bt for her it was the best night. Geet sat down on the floor like a lifeless body and badi maa understood that geet will not budge this time. After a long time she went back to her room, getting fresh she changed into her kurti, pyjama. She wore put her duppatta hiding those marks and got ready for the office wen she heard her badi maa speaking. She was actually confused with those expressions geet!!! u are not going anywhere tujhme sharam bacha hi nahi hai do u even think of going back to ur boss. Rahul is coming today and u are getting married to him today. Geet he is rich and he loved u the moment he saw u kal ko ghar aaya tha bt u did not reach home. He already gave me a blank cheque. Geet smirked listening to her badi maa so that's the reason she called her last night. Completing her studies she joined KC as maan's secretary, geet neva saw her mother, she was an orphan and this lady took care of her. She claims she is her mother's frnd so out of respect and for the name sake she calls her badi maa. Geet replied acha toh last night u were worried for this reason rahul mere keemat peh blank cheque diya par pata hai badi maa kal raat ko maan ne keemat peh kya diya??? PYAR!!! Jo aap nahi samjhengi. For u only money matters bt for me love matters.

Then the loud sound of laugh reached geet's ears and badi started off with the bitter past of her mother toh ab phir maan singh khurana ki bistar(bed) peh laitne(sleep) jaane wali hai??? iss liye shaadi ke liye na keh rahi hai tu hai na?? kaise bholongi main jaise maa waise hi beti... BADI MAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Geet yelled to which badi maa's anger rose to peak sach kadwi lagi geet?? yehi tha teri maa ki sach. Kisi ammerjaaze(rich man) teri maa ke saath rehta tha aur tu uski kaali kartooton(illegal deeds) ki nishani(symbol) hai. Toh ab tu bhi wahi karegi na!!! jaa geet!! jaa, jaake uss maan ke saath so jaa yehi teri jindagi hogi ab ke baad. Knowing ur background he will neva marry u. Kal raat ki teri jindagi har raat wahi hogi aur wahi rahegi tere boss ke saath. Teri maa ne marte marte yeh diya tha read it and decide for urself kya karegi aage.

Geet sat down crying, weeping, on the bed holding her knees curling herself into a ball for a long time. She did not have the guts to open the diary bt she had to, she had to open and read wat her mother went through in her life.

Here maan woke up with a fatigue, his head was aching insanely and it was 12 in the afternoon. He tried reaching to the table bt found himself naked!!! Suddenly his eyes popped open and then he realized wat had happened last night looking at the blood stains on the spread. He closed his eyes in regret, he knew he was with geet. Bt this was the least he expected. He held his head with both his hands and yelled GEET!!!!

Geet read the diary and broke down completely. The humiliation her mother faced, the regret she had for deeds. The torture she faced being a second woman in a man's life for money and the man did not even bother giving his name to her daughter, geet. She died with a last wish of her life, to see geet as a NUN!!!

Gathering herself from the bitter truth of her mother and her life geet went to the office for a last time, to give her resignation letter. She entered maan's cabin where he was waiting for her since the moment he entered the office. He wanted to know how was she, and the news of her not coming to office made him even more bekali (restless). Maan raised his head to find geet so pale and!!!! Her face god dammit!!! He lowered his eyes guiltily. How cud he do this to her?? Her face was red and her body still had those love bites of him. Geet slowly walked towards him to hand him over the letter, she was stumbling, maan wanted to hold her bt his guilt did not let him touch her again. Breaking his thoughts geet gave the letter!!! He looked at it in amazement and reading the letter his expression just changed. His eyes spitted fire, he grabbed her by arm towards himself getting up from his chair... yeh kya tamasha hai geet?? y are u resigning??? Geet lowered her eyes, she didn't know wat to do or say out of fear, bt she had to answer him, tell him wat the goal of her life is, he is not her destiny neither she is his destiny!!! Woh...woh... and those fumbled words of geet made him even more furious. Jawab do geet!! y do u want to resign?? He roared to which geet jumped back creating a distance between their bodies who maan sir mujhe kahi aur job mila hai toh I need to leave today ... And u feel this stupid answer of urs will make me to accept ur resignation?? Tum chaho toh bhi mujhse dur nahi japaogi he paused and looked at geet raising his brow and continued kal raat ke baad toh bilkul bhi nahi!!! He declared. Geet thought that maan will not remember anything bt to her utter dismay he does remember... kal raat jo bhi hua it was a weak moment maan sir!!! A one night stand so it wud be better if we forget wat had happened last night and move on!!!!!!

GEET!!!! maan raised his hand to slap geet for uttering their love as one night stand. He grabbed her arms I don't mind repeating last night as I guess u will not mind as it is a one stand for u geet, this time ill b in full of my senses bt let me tell u with that u will love me even more main nahi jaanta tumhari majboori kya hai lekin plz aise mat karo geet I LOVE YOU!!! Dammit I love u don't leave me

Geet released herself from his grip and answered him bt I don't love u sir!!! Aap mujhe galat samajh rahe hai...maan clentched his fists firmly and strode towards geet pushing her onto his chair he towered her placing his hands on the rims of the chair galat?? I know u love me even if u don't confess I very well know it geet. Tumhari aakein galat nahi ho sakti, tum sirf meri ho sirf meri. Geet tried to push him bt he was too strong leave me maan sir main... mujhe jaane dijiye I told u already wat I feel aapke lakh koshish karne ke baad bhi aap mujhe haasil nahi kar sakte. He held geet arms firmly and made her stand on her feet... Thik hai jao geet lekin meri ek baat yaad rakhna jaha bhi jaogi tum mujhe yaad karogi ull come back to me I promise. Maan ke bina tum jee nahi paogi, tadpogi mere bina tum mujhe chod sakti ho main nahi jab bhi wapas aaogi tum muhje wahi paogi jaha tumne mujhe choda tha

PRECAP: geet to become a nun and realising her pregnancy!!!!

I WANT 130 likes for my next update the fast I get my likes the fast I update get to work!!! Coming up next tishnagi update!!!

i hope ki maine lamba wala update diya😕


P.S: I KNOW HERE I HAVE RESEARCHED ON THE TOPIC OF BECOMING A NUN AND THEN STARTED THE STORY PLZ TRUST ME NEXT UPDATE HAS A TWIST


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PART 3

Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
anju upar dekho!!!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
yeee .Iam the first...
nice part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
amazing update
really felt bad for geet😭
hope geet withdraws from becoming nun
precap is interesting ...will be eagerly waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
nice one ...
when she knows Maan loves her she is leaving him to fulfill her mom's wish...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Amazing update!!!!
loved it a lotzzz

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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
awesm updt!!
bt bcmin a nun!!
waiting eagerly for d nxt one!1
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Just read both parts
its nice
do con soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
part 2
poor Geet...
her badima really no words to say...
what Geet did is wrong but she loved Maan but her badima is selling her to that Rahul...
poor Geet's mom...
cont soon dear...

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