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Posted: 12 years ago

BE MINE FOREVER
PART - 20
GEET struggles to free herself from the grip of
goons. But in front of their man power she
cant able to do so. Yash ran after her. Both
...
goons stopped seeing him there in front of
them. Geet's eyes filled with glitter as she had
a full confidence that now she is safe. Yash
fuming and warned them.
YASH:leave her or i will kill u both.
GOON 1:wahi ruk jao warna iske liye achha
nahi hoga.
He put his sharp knief on her deligate neck.
He looks furiously to both. He steps towards
them.
YASH:i said leave her. Agar use kharonch bhi
aayi to main tum dono dono ko jaan se maar
dunga.
Geet struggles more and goons tighten their
grip due which shirt of her suit torn from
shoulder side little bit. This turn Yash into a
wild beast. His fists cleanched tighten. His
nostrails fluffed. He jumped on both as lion do
to hunt his prey. Geet is now free from their
grip. She tagged to the near by car as she
knew her suit is torned. Yash brutualy beat
them both together. But ione of them hit on
his arm with his sharp knief. But he dont gave
up and beat both continously. When they
dont sucedded and found difficult to over
powered him,both ran for their life and
esscaped from dere in few moments. Seeing
his injury Geet forgot about her suit and ran
to him. She start crying. Yash console her and
embrace her in his arms.
YASH:shant ho jao Geet kuchh nahi hua hai.i
m fine.
Yash loosen the hug and immediately remove
his shirt and make her wear as he is verry
concious for her and dont want to make her
fun in front of others. She is still crying seeing
his injury and bandaged it with her henky.
Yash take her to the car and both drived back
to the KM. Geet immediately take him to their
room as she doesnt want to let this know to
anyone. Both get inside and Geet locked the
door. Then she made her sit on a bed and
bring first aid box.. She sat in front of him.
First she clean his injury, his injury gave pain
more to Geet than him. Her face shows her
feelings very clearly and Yash realy enjoy her
care for him geet very carefully clean his
injury with her soft fingers. Her touch gave
him a pleasure. He completely forgot about
his pain and get busy in gazing her. He is very
relaxed acs she is alright and with him. She
rubbed an ointment very softly on his injuries.
He feeled her soft fingers on his wound. She
bandaged his wound very carefully not
wanting to hurt him more. Tears rolling on
her cheeks. Yash noticed her tears. He pulled
her chin up.
YASH:kya hua Geet? Tum ro kyu rahi ho?
He cant see her in pain. Her tears prooves
much more painful to him than his wound.
GEET: i m sorry Maan,aaj meri wajah se tumko
itni takleef ho rahi hai.sab meri galti hai. Jabse
main tumhari zindagi mein aai hu sivaye
takleefo ke aur kuchh nahi mila hai tumhe.
She wants to move from there but Yash stops
her by holding her hand and made her
snuggle with him. He pulled her chin up.
YASH:geet meri taraf dekho(she looked at
him) geet tumse kisne aha ki meri takleeef ki
wajah tum ho. Janti ho agar aaj tumhe kuchh
ho jata to main khud ko kabhi maaf nahi kar
pata. Ye to achha hua main time rehte waha
pahunch gaya. Jab main tumhe puri market
me dhundh raha tha or tum mujhe kahi nahi
deekh rahi thi tab mujhe takleef hui thi. Kitna
darr gaya tha bata nahi sakta. Tumhari safty
ke liye aise hazar zakham bhi kha sakta hu.
GEET:lekin Maan...
Before she completes her sentence Yash
placed his fingers on her soft supple pink lips.
He mesmerized with the touch of her lips,he
feels underneath his fingers.
YASH:shhh maine kaha na main bilkul theek
hu.ab bilkul nahi rona. He cupped her face
wiped her tears with his thumbs. He
completely lost in her again. He came very
close to her eyes and kissed on them one by
one...
Edited by richadhami - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yeh yash toh annie ki instructions ka ulta hi kar raha hain...kya hain yeh???
Ab geet bechari aas lagayi baithegi na ki maan badal gaya hain...patah nahin kya hoga...
So he went with her to the market and those idiot goons tried to kidnap her...Accha hua maan time se pahunch gaya and geet ki halat dekhkar usne toh unki band bajadiya hain...
Maan ko bhi toh lagi hain na...aur uske liye geet khud ko zimmedar maanti hain...she really loves him a lot...
Loved the way how he told her that she is not responsible for his wound...
Update next part soon...Will be waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
kafi suspense ho gya richa. ab plz story ko aage bdao...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 19 n 20
nice updates..
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Posted: 12 years ago
tell me about it he just aint follwing annies instructions of staying away from geet
in fact he seems to be getting closer to her than before
but wont annie be mad when she finds out
dude if i were you i would take it easy with geet
dont forget who you are or why you are here
although he sure is acting the way our maan usually acts around geet right
man this is getting complicated
wonder if those goons were sent by someone on purpose
what else is next i wonder

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 19
nice part...
why is always Geet in trouble?
who is trying to harm her?
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 20
nice part...
glad he saved her...
Yash's this doing is gonna land him in trouble...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
when annie will know abt yash-geet closeness...what will b her reaction...yash has forgot he has no rgt to close wth geet...he has alrdy fall for her bt he is also cheating wth geets emotion...
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Posted: 12 years ago
**BE MINE FOREVER**
PART - 21

NOTE:GUYS I KNOW THIS PART GAVE A LITTLE SHOK TO U AND MAY B MANY OF U DONT LIKE DIS. BUT IT WAS MY REQ T ALL OF YOU DONT REACTS NEGATIVELY. I WROTE WHICH I FELT IS NECESSARY. I WANT SOME MORE PATIENCE FROM YOU ALL. PART NO - 23 WILL GAVE ANS TO YOUR ALL QUERIES. YASH / MAAN MYSTERY IS GOING TO B REVEALED SOON IN PART 23 SO TILL THEN PLS WAIT AND PLSSS DO COMMENT...I M WAITING :*

YASH pinned hr 2 matress,seeing hr hystericaly. Geet felt shivering wid dis proxcimity. Hr heart strt beatng fastr nd staring at hs sharp face. "Geet",she heard hm moan hr name nd evry hair on hr body stud up as termor of pleasure. Hs grip around hr tightend as pushed hm closer gluing hs chest 2 hr. Hr breath halted as hs hands reachd undr hr shrt caresing hr bak,pulling her closr.her arms automatically went around hs shouldr nd she dug hr nails gently in hs skin."Maan",she mummerd hs name undr hr breath. She pulled hrslf closr 2 hm digging hr nails furthr in hs skin. Hs lips drew patterns on hr neck nd den hr collarbone slowly. He bite hr neck and mark his possession on her. She was his only.'Ahh'a moan escapd frm her lips as he cvrd hr hr body wid his. His hand slippd out of hr shrt nd movd 2 slide d shrt of hr shouldr. His hands pulld hr shrt furthr down exposing mor of hr chest nd hs lips movd 2 devour hr exposed clevage,where he sucked nd kissd hr skin nd den bite hr again.hs hands slid bak in hr shrt struggling 2 undo hr b**. She felt his erection from d barriors. He adjust between hr legs nd strt grinding hs manhood on hr sensitive area widout removing hs nd hr clothes. She hit wid hr frst orgasm. He ants 2 move on bt stopped hmslf at sudden wen he noticed slight panic in hr eyes. He stop his moments nd laid half on hr. She ws in trauma wat happnd wid hr rite now.
GEET enquired:Maan wat we hv done rite now?do we made love?

She ws so scared. Yash undrstnd hr condi.nd removed himslf from hr. He raised hmslf nd said sorry 2 hr,nt 4 loving hr bt she felt bad dats y. He apolozise nt 4 falling 4 hr bt coz she dosnt like hs touch may b. Both felt awkwrd now. At d same momnt Geet heard knok sound on deir dur. She sttld her clothes nd wnt 2 open it.

SUNAINA:Geet beta hum ap 2 ko yaad dilane aaye the ki kal puja me aap 2 ko hi baithna hai as Maan is hs elder son. So get ready early in d mrng.ok beta.

GEET:ji mumma.mumma ab apki frnd kaisi hai?

She askd politely.

SUNAINA:wo ab thek hai beta.jaldi hi unhe discharge b mill jayega.achha ab jaldi keejiye dinner b lag gaya hai hum sb aap 2 ka wait kr rae hai.aa jaiye.

She left. Both change deir clothes nd joind other at dinner table. Geet still felt vry strange. Hr body reactions were out of her mind. Maan sit on head chair. Nxt chair ws empty 4 Geet,bt she changed it wid Annie,2 avoid ny contact wid hm until hr mind gt bak stable. Annie nvr say no 2 hr so she changed happily. While eating annie noticed her strange behaviour,and suddnly noticed a bite mark on her neck which is still red nd showing d possesion of hm ovr hr. Annie's eyes filled wid anger. She wants 2 react as hr anger reached on cloud nine,bt in d presence of all she cant do dis. She try nd cntrolled hr anger.

ANNIE:Maan bhai apse kuchh baat karni thi to kya aap mere room me aayenge dinner k baad wahi baithkar aaram se discuss kar lenge.

SUNAINA:kya baat hai beta?

ANNIE:kuchh nai mumma bas 1 impo.business talk hai jo bhai se karni zaruri hai.ok as i finished i leave.bhai pls cm fast.

Annie leave frm deir nd roamed in her whole room. She fumed badly. Yash only tensed 4 Geet. Coz he dont know what is running in her mind. He knows it ws all new 4 her and may b she is not ready. After dinner Yash moved 2 Annie's room...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dear frnds plsss comments...it realy helps me to motivate :D
i m waiting
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago

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