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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys with the monsoon showers in city n I was listening to "Behta Hai Man koi" song of Chameli that I wrote something on evergreen Geet & Maan 😊
here goes 😛


It was the 1st time Maan Singh Khurana was staring at a girl for good 15 mins . Yes the Biggest business tycoon in Constructions of India was ogling at an epitome of beauty totally oblivious of him .

It was his usual day ; his visit to site was disrupted due to untimely showers , to add to his woes [or blessing in disguise] his tyre got punctured . The driver afraid of MSK's wrath was about to change the same but as luck would have it there were no spare tyres . Shivering the driver confessed and MSK exasperated threatened to be back with a tyre asap . No sooner he finished uttering the driver fled for his life .

10 mins past when he heard a melodious voice ;http://www.lyricsmasti.com/song/4061/get_lyrics_of_Bhaage-Re-Mann.html

Beheta Hai Mann Kahin, Kahaan Jaante Nahin Koyi Rokle Yahin

Bhaage Re Mann Kahin, Aage Re Mann Chala, Jaane Kidhar Jaanu Na –

Bhaage Re Mann Kahin, Aage Re Mann Chala, Jaane Kidhar Jaanu Na -

Beheta Hai Mann Kahin, Kahaan Jaante Nahin, Koyi Rokle Yahin

Bhaage Re Mann Kahin, Aage Re Mann Chala, Jaane Kidhar Jaanu Na –

Bhaage Re Mann Kahin, Aage Re Mann Chala, Jaane Kidhar Jaanu Na –

At 1st he thought he must be seeing things , but taking a closer look he saw that peach n crme complexion , she was draped in saree that accentuated her Aphrodite alike figure . She was dancing in rain , welcoming the 1st showers with open arms . Due to heavy rain Maan was unable to see her face so as if on trance , a magnetic pull he got out of his car & proceeded towards his fantasy !

Aa...HaanAa

Ho Chale Thhandi Hawa HoSang Mann Bhi Gaya

Dhhundhhu Main Kahaan Usko, Batlaaye Koyi Mujhko

Ke Haan Haan Haan Re

Bhaage Re Mann Kahin, Aage Re Mann Chala, Jaane Kidhar Jaanu Na -2

Beheta Hai Mann Kahin, Kahaan Jaante Nahin, Koyi Rokle Yahin

The girl was a village belle ; she loved nature especially the rains for these rains symbolized life so did she to her family ! she was loving the rain kissing her everywhere , she let go of her friends who ran home scared to get sick . She was a romantic by nature thereby the lyrics breathed what she was looking for though was too shy to express verbally to anyone ; the nature was her friend , philosopher n guide .Suddenly as she twirled due to slippery grounds she stumbled and feared fall but it never came ! an indescribable feeling filled her as she found herself in the enfold of arms of her savior . As she opened her eyes she saw a pair of intense hazels looking at her with an expression mirroring her feelings !

Maan felt he was looking at an angel ! her lush pink lips , smooth pearl complexion , light brown hazels hypnotized him ! her breath hitched & lips parted as he pulled her closer to his embrace , he could not control his emotions any longer , surrendering to his heart he leaned forward & hovered over her lips just close fearing she might not want it ! but Geet just closed her eyes & submitted

Haan Haaye Aisa Sama Hmm Phir Hoga Kahaan

Jee Loon Main Isse Khulke, Saawan Bhi Zara Khulke

Arre Sun Sun Sun

Bhaage Re Mann Kahin, Aage Re Mann Chala, Jaane Kidhar Jaanu Na

Bhaage Re Mann Kahin, Aage Re Mann Chala, Jaane Kidhar Jaanu Na

Beheta Hai Mann Kahin, Kahaan Jaante Nahin, Koyi Rokle Yahin

Bhaage Re Mann Kahin, Aage Re Mann Chala, Jaane Kidhar Jaanu Na

Bhaage Re Mann Kahin, Aage Re Mann Chala, Jaane Kidhar Jaanu Na

That did it and Maan kissed Geet . It never felt so pure , blissful and perfect as his lips parted her virgin lips deepening their kiss. The moment got disrupted by a thunder followed by his drivers call that he has come back with the spare tyre .

Geet furiously blushed and tried to get out from his hold but Maan pulled her closer asking where she lived .

He took her with him to her house . She belonged to a simple & humble household ; her family knew MSK & seeing him in their house all went helter skelter to give him , towel , fresh set of clothes , refreshments etc . He obliged them humbly & spilled out his heart's desire to marry her . Needless to say her parents got shock of their lives . Yes they wanted Geet's marriage soon and to a nice boy but millionaire Maan Singh Khurana !!!

Maan went to them & in his full charm convinced that he sees his life , happiness & life partner in Geet !

Geet's mom asked her how she feels about this ? Geet lowered her head and said she will abide by their decision .

The very next day Maan married Geet in village mandir and he scooped her in his arms , settled in his car to take her Delhi where the gala wedding of MSK was held later.

Post marriage Maan 1st took time to understand , know Geet well , they went to dates , outings , shared their hobbies & interests .

It was yet again a rainy evening Maan returned from office only to be stumped seeing his wife in this


This . Just like their previous meeting Geet's gesture commuted what she wanted . Maan closed the door & locked it . He scooped her in his arms & proceeded to the bed . Gently putting her down he took her lips in a passionate kiss which turned urgent showing his desire for her .

He worshipped her like a true lover ; loving her assets , drinking and drowning in her beauty . He softly kissed her forehead and asked her to look at him . Geet was blessed to have him as her life partner , she was living a fairy tale . She knew he wanted to make her his for a long time but waited for her to be comfortable him He prioritized her comfort , her well-being , her happiness 1st .

She looked at him & he started their union as one . In a year Geet was blessed with Ayush and thereafter Sneha .

Life was never more perfect than that of Geet & Maan …..❤️

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome dear 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏. i loved it.
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lovely update..love at first sight...so romantic..
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super cute OS of maaneet 😳
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amazing os
so pure n divine
write more!!!
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Love it graphics
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Beautiful os..love at first sight...monsoon a love season...

luvd it
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@.Priya2000.: Awesum n fantastic OS!!!!😊

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