'Mitra'#2 Part 11 Page 86/ 1st November 2016 - Page 21

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Posted: 12 years ago

TEASER:

"Enough!!!! No more arguments now." Geet yelled out when her patience gave up finally.

"Meera you have this bowl of Kheer." Geet said as she gave the bowl of Kheer to Meera while Maan looked at her puffing sadly. Somewhere deep he was hurt that Geet had chosen Meera over him but least he knows that his place in her lyf was far above than anyone else.

"Now don't make that face. You have this one." Geet said forwarding her bowl towards Maan to which both Meera nd Maan looked at her in surprised

"Don't look at me like that. I am on diet anyways nd I already had 2-3 spoons so you can have it." Geet said as she took a spoonful of Kheer nd shoved it in his mouth. It didn't matter to either of them that Geet had already tasted it as they had already shared everything

Meera looked at Geet who was looking Maan in awe as he was relishing his Kheer nd then looked at Maan who was enjoying his Kheer oblivious of someone's loving gaze on him nd shaked her in disbelief. How can anyone be so oblivious of someone's feelings so long after being so close to her, she thought as she sighed in the fate of her best friend who was hopelessly in love with this man sitting in front of her that she didn't even care about the aching of her broken that was crushed so badly by him. But then Geet had never held him responsible for anything in fact she use to blame herself for his heart break. Sometimes she just wants to slap Maan hard nd ask him to see what he has done to his Laddoo for whom he claims to care to no extent but then she knows that as much as she wants to do this she can't for Geet never wanted Maan to feel guilty for anything.

Meera knows that no matter how much she nd Geet are close to each other but still she can never had that place in her heart nd lyf that Maan is having nd guess that's the another reason due to which she hates Maan this much, she thought as sighed heavily while having her Kheer quietly lost in her own thoughts until a loud shrill of ringtone of Geet's cell broke both her nd Geet's trance nd she turned her gaze towards Geet only to find tensed lines appearing on her forehead as she stared at the caller ID of her cell before she looked at Meera in worry nd Meera instantly guess after seeing her worried face that whose call it can be nd as the realization hits her she looked at Geet wide-eyed before looking at Maan who was still oblivious of the fact that made both friends so worried. They can't disclose about it to Maan but what was bothering them at that moment was to how to take this call in front of him as Geet had promised herself that she'll never make Maan part of her problems nd if he'll come to know about it then he'll not rest in peace until he'll go in depth of everything which Geet don't want as she had already ruined his lyf enough nd now she don't want to ruin it anymore by making him part of her messed up lyf.


Whose call was it??😲😲


Stay tuned to know about it😉... Will try my best to update by tomorrow but cant promise for i am too much held up with the festival arrangents along with my job nd studies... getting very less tym to type😭😭... but will update very soon... Till then keep waiting nd Keep commenting😉😉



Nd ya i'll try to move story in fast pace as it is suppose to be an SS... hence in upcoming parts there will be lots of revealitions along with Maan's realization nd ofcourse the much awaited his P,O.V... so dont feel that i am hurrying up in everything in this story


P.S.S Also i had created a new page for the notification of my updates of all FFs as i was having some problems while accessing the Group... Kindly like it to get the quick notification of my update... here's the Link


Aakriti's Magical Maaneet World


Like it ok...



Luv Aakriti😊


Edited by aakritisri1111 - 12 years ago
Aarthi_01 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for the update eagerly dear
jasraj123 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice teaser akku and now waiting for update to know who is the caller
is it dev 😕😕

orrr someone else
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow Akriti, I am glad you remembered this 😊
sorry but i had to skimp through earlier to remind me where this story was left 😉
well alls well now waiting 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
so both geet & maan accepted their feelings...
guessing it was kuldeep's call & b'coss of that meera & geet got tensed...
kya dev ne maan ko sab bata diya...?
lovely teaser
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats on new thread
i read all the parts in one go
awesome updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oye Madhuri Kuldeep kaha se aaya "Mitra" me 🤔 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
Eagerly waiting for the update...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

Oye Madhuri Kuldeep kaha se aaya "Mitra" me 🤔 😲

tu update inti jaldi karegi tho humara haal yesa hi hoga...
kahani tho main bhi bhool gayi hoon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice teaser
waiting for the update now...

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