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Posted: 12 years ago
1st of all, i need some help from my story reader

Soon i need to open new thread, n for this i want help
I need to post the "STORY SO FAR"
and for this i thought to tell u all to write this for me

You guys are reading my story from so days
And can descried the summary better than me 😊

Basically all u need to do is write my story summary
in between 12 to 15 lines
I will take 3 readers summary,
and post it with your name, in thread 3

Hope will get your response, and yes those who want to do it 4 me
send me a pm, either in IF or in my fb


thnx to Dazzling Divz, for making this wonderful banner...

Sargoshiyan-Whisper of Love

PART 30

Maan stopped both while they were walking towards the main entrance.


Pinky: kya hua?


Maan: we need to go out from the back door


Geet: but why?


Maan: media is all around the hospital, and if the catch you with me, then be ready to face the whole world


Pinky: no thank you, I don't need the publicity, we will take the back door


Geet: waise Pinky, you will be famous then


Pinky: ha but if they will follow me, then I will not be able to eat my food in peace


Saying so Pinky made a sad and worried face in which Maan and Geet both giggled


Maan: come on now, this way


While walking Maan got a call from Naina,


Maan: ji mom


Naina: beta, where are you?


Maan: mai to hospital mai hi hu, where are you both?


Naina: we are in your dad's cabin, but tum ho kaha


Maan: accha mom, you stay there, I'm coming


Naina: but beta


Maan: mom I'm just in an urgent work, coming in 2 minutes, ok?




Naina: thik hai beta, bye


Maan: bye mom


Trio reached near the car, Driver opened the door for them, Pinky went inside


Geet was about to open another side door, Maan hurriedly opened that for her


Geet: thank you


In reply Maan smile, Geet was about to went inside when she stopped and turned towards Maan


Geet: Maan I just forgot that


Maan: forgot what?


Geet: ye roses, I brought those for uncle


Maan: ohh accha, ye roses?


Geet: see I forgot the main work

Maan: accha thik hai, I will give them, don't worry


Geet: you sure na?



Maan: of course baba, now give these to me


Geet: ok fine, here take these, and don't forget to mention my name while giving these


Maan: ohk madam


Geet smiled and went inside,


Pinky peeped from the window and told Maan,


Pinky: you can take one rose as the service tip (sam: rakh le beta 😉)


Maan laughed at her offer and bid them good bye


Maan: don't forget to call me after reaching there


Geet: ya we will, bye now


Pinky: Bye Maan


Maan: bye guys

At that time, in hospital cabin:


As soon as Naina cut the call, Savitri asked her


Savitri: where is he? He said me that he's in hospital


Naina: don't know maa ji, he said he's stuck in important work, just coming


Savitri: achanak se urgent work

Naina: aab ye to vo hi jaane


Savitri: ok you wait here, let me talk with the doctor


Savitri talk with the doctor and came to know that Anukalp, maan's father can drink liquid when he would be back in sense


So Savitri called Nakul to make some soup for his son, while talking on the phone she went near the window and the scene outside made her rooted on the place


A girl in blue top and jeans, giving red rose bouquet, and that too none other than her own grandchild


And moreover her grandchild was also smiling while taking the bouquet from that unknown girl.


She pinched her own hand in order to check whether she was dreaming or not.


Savitri mumbled to herself: My son's bad luck, hospital per bhi ek rose tak nehi mila, and here my grandchild is getting a whole bunch of roses, while standing outside the hospital.


She saw Maan bidding bye to the girl, who just went away in Maan's car,


As pinky was in another side, Daadi ma missed to see Pinky, and thought Geet was alone in car

PRECAP: Daadi pulling Maan's leg, and Geet came to meet Maan's family in Khurana mansion


i know, very short update, will try update on saturday after my xm 😊... and yes will wait for all ur response... 😳

n sorry, no pm this tym, as i'm now running to my study table... or else Ammu will throw my lappy from 5th floor along with ME... 😆

Edited by Dipti_Sam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmm..i will wait 4 summary
sry i couldnt help u
vrinda22 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
i am first
dinka chikka..
short but sweet..
maan taking them away by back door saving them from medias
lol..pinky ka answer..she cant eat peacefully..haha..
geet giving roses to maan
one rose as service tips lolz
dadi saw it..
is she worried for her son ya j for maan getting roses lolz..
precap so interesting
Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

hehehe, congo di 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part.dadima ko laga jor ka jatka.bechara maan ab to gaya.koi usse plz dadima ki teasing se bachao.
Edited by sanjukta19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Dipti_Sam



here, tumne bola n maine update de raha hu 😆
see how much i love u 🤗


Hayyeee😊
I Love u too 😳🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
😭😭 airokom 1 ta task dila :P eto valo likhte parle toh i'll start writing 😆... but dont worry there are so many good writers they'll surely help u :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
short update but a lovely one

Dadima got a shocked of her life by seeing her grandson hugging a girl n also receiving a bunch of roses n her son got none but who will tell her tht the bunch of rose is for her son n not for her grandson


update soon next part

Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
me can give u senseless comment 😆😉
waiting 4 an update

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Posted: 12 years ago
hmmm tooo short update😡😡😡 but its ur exam time so maff kore dilam🤗 all the best for your exams... after exams please give some looong update😉
hmm now come to the story it was obviously nice part... but Geet already gave flowers to maan before dadi saw them or it happened in same time I could not get that... Maan telling his mom he is stuck in some urgent work hehehehe😆 who 'll tell her that her son is busy with her would be daughter-in-law😉... on the hand pinky dont wanna come in front of media cause she wont be able to eat peacefully then 😆😆 thats sooo funny.
Precap sounds nice dadi teasing Maan & Geet came to meet KHURANAs wow will be waiting for next part continue ...soon

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