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~SMITTEN BY LOVE~

HEARTIEST CONGRATULATIONS TO MY CUTIE PIES...for anyaa for turning goldie...and ritu n beauty for turning rocker...
and thank u so much for the highest likes for this story till now...258 likes🥳👏
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"Love me without fear...trust me without questioning...Need me without demanding...Want me without restrictions...Accept me without change...Desire me without inhibition"
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PART-8

(SMITTEN BY LOVE means struck by lovein love with that person...just thought to expl...like a cupid strikes you wid an arrow, when u fell in love at the first sight...and if u r smitten by someone that means you are deeply in love with that person)

He stood up, looking away...while geet blushed hiding her face...not knowing how to react, after feeling that...that was the first time she felt, something so carnal yet desirable...she felt special to make him feel that way...while maan was cursing himself, for loosing his senses...he looked at her, but found her hiding her face...he felt more miserable, thinking he hurted her again...he wanted to soothe her, but then thought not to touch her again...may be she will feel uncomfortable...
"woh i will sleep on couch...you please take some rest" and he covered her with spread and moved towards the couch...laying, closing his eyes in guilt...
"jhalli thodi der aur muh band nahi rakh sakti thi" Geet bit her lips slowly cursing herself for moaning that way, as she knew maan must be very uncomfortable sleeping on that couch...
"bhej diya na unhe uss couch pe sone" she accused herself, cutely twisting her lips...then softly peeped out of her duvet, looking for him...and found him sleeping cuddling himself...
She felt too shy to call him...the feel of his manhood, was still fresh and desiring...She started breathing heavily, unknowingly thinking wild about him...then blushed hiding herself more into the duvet, feeling mushy with her own thoughts...

While maan twisted and turned feeling uncomfortable on that not so comfy couch...he cursed himself for acting desperate...wasn't she hurt enough that he was again trying to get closer..."Maan just control yourself" he commanded...mentally threatening himself...
The scene looked funny, as maan couldn't stop cribbing and pouting while talking in hush hush tone...Later giving up on his inihibitions, he finally turned around...looking for the object of his admiration...Then frowned looking at her hiding herself under the duvet..."look what you have done.....he accused himself...ab woh tera chehra bhi nahi dekhegi" he made a sad baby face and then halfheartedly turned around, facing other way...
Sleep was far away, as both the souls where desperately craving for one another...Geet slowly got up, looking at him, sleeping turning around...she pouted, then looked up at babaji, murmuring something...
Then determinantly stood up, and tiptoed towards him...slowly trying to get a glimpse if he was really sleeping...She carefully leaned on his body, trying to get a closer look...Then hurriedly moved back, finding him blinking his lashes...
Fearing of getting caught in her act, she started running back...but then with a sudden pull...she was jerked backwards...As maan with a brisk move took her in his arms...making her fall on his chest...Both where breathing heavily, with there gaze locked...





Geet tried to move away from their awkward position, but maan made his hold more carnal by pressing her completely on his body...Now she was completely laying on him, with her softness pressing his already hard form...
"maan" she whispered again trying to get out of his grip...but maan made her fall back on him, squeezing her waist...
"what are you doing here" he asked raising his eyebrows...intimidating her with his ever so sexy look...
"woh...i was just...woh...bed...couch..." her words got stuck in her throat as she involuntarily leaned in closer...biting her trembling lips, blinking her lashes...
"ummm" maan slightly moaned, caressing her cheeks with the back of his palm...he was on the verge of loosing his sanity, then controlling himself he gestured her to speak further...
"woh why dont you sleep with me on bed" came geet's blunt answer, and the next second she made a big O face, realising what she blurted out...
She hided her face on his chest, closing her eyes shut with embarrassment..."sorry i didn't mean, what it sounded" she whispered, clutching his shirt in fear...
"ummm i know" he lovingly smiled, cocooning her in his warm embrace...while geet breathed a sigh of relief, smiling at her own antics...
"aap please bed pe so jao...you must be feeling uncomfortable here" she looked up at his face, and found him sleeping peacefully hugging her close...His arms where comfortably placed on her back, while he had that contended smile plastered on his handsome face...Geet smiled, involuntarily leaning on his face...trying to capture this moment, forever in her heart...


Geet felt too emotional, feeling his warmth...and just laid back on his chest remebering the earlier moments of disgrace...Her honour, her self respect, her pride everything where brutally crashed...how disgusted she felt bearing all that...But now being back in maan's arms gave her that feeling of purity, that soothing warmth...which she knew she wont get anywhere else...
A smile formed on her lips thinking, how far she came, by just keeping her blind faith on there love...She closed her eyes, whispering..."maan" feeling his thuding heart beats...
"ummm" came his meek reply, as he moved his hands up, soflty caressing her curls, massaging her scalp...
"woh bed..." she got stuck with her words, feeling aroused with his loving caress...then closed her eyes, as his fingers did wonders on his skin...
"please..." she huskily whispered with her feeble attempt to stop him...fearing to loose her sanity, which she knew she already did...
"aap please bed pe jao" she jerked herself up, getting out of her dreamland...grumpily sitting besides him on couch...While maan with one swift move pulled her back on him...and locked her in his arms...
"I am not going anywhere" he argued...then smirked looking at the frown on her face..."and neither you" he crushed her more into him, then briskily laid her sideways...pinning her between him and couch...Geet was completely stunned by his move, then suddenly blushed, as he possessively hugged her..."now sleep" he commanded hugging her more carnally, locking her completely in his warmth...
"maan" she moaned, feeling his warm breath on her earlobe...then closed her eyes...snacking her arms around him, pushing herself more into him...She nuzzled her face on his shoulder, giving him several goosebumps all over his body...
"dont do that" he panted, feeling highly aroused...then moved his lower body away from her, creating a comfortable distance between them...He started feeling awkward with his ever so ready hard throbbing manhood...and then tried pulling himself away, fearing of another embarrassment...

Geet felt him slipping away...she opened her drowsy hazels, meeting his...then blushed looking down, biting her lip...
"woh you sleep on bed...i will be ok here" he said looking away...desperately wanting her to move away, before he land themself in some other mess...
"i am ok here" geet said softly, moving closer, seeking his warmth...She gradually raised her hands hugging him again, bringing him back where he belong...While maan looked at her face, which showed that immense love...that impeccable trust, which he knew he could never match...
The next moment, loosing his inhibition...he just crushed her body into him...carnally squeezing her, showing her his desire...His craving, his longing...everything he conveyed, by completely gluing her from head to toe...Geet could feel his manhood playing around her stomach...she involuntarily arched her body, shying with its feel...While maan pressed her more, pushing it even futher..."maan" she moaned his name, feeling her self wet, with just its feel...she bit his shoulder, inorder to stop that urge of doing extreme...



Maan nuzzled his lips on her shoulder...moving her sleevs down with his teeth...he bit her lavishly, dropping his saliva...then carnally licked it off...shuting her brain, with this pure feel of ecstacy...
Geet shivered, as her hard buds poked his chest, letting him know his effect on her...She bit her lips harshly, subsiding the moans...while moved her face the other way, giving him more space to explorer his desire...Geet snacked her arms squeezing his head, while he gradually moved towards her neck, biting his way...His hands moved under her kurti, feeling her warm velvety skin...while his mouth plucked the flesh of her cleavage, insanely feasting on it...
Geet wriggled under him, as her core throbbed with unbearable pleasure...Her skin looked flushed as she kept moaning his name, pleading to do the extreme...Her mouth cried more sexily, not able to bear this marvellous sensation...She pulled her head back, leaning on the couch...while maan explored her delicious flesh, more hungrily then ever before...His manhood was now correctly placed above her core, while his hands wondered on her thighs...He gently pulled their bodies together, while geet looked at him, surprised with the level of his arousal...She felt butterflies in her tummy, as she lovingly leaned in holding his face in her hands...and softly placed her petals on his craving lips...



Sparks flew as a connection was created. and maan returned the kiss but with more passion...geet wanted to show him how she felt and parted her lips and slipped her tongue in his mouth and massaged it with hers...There tongues where dancing together in an sensual longing kiss, while maan's hand couldn't stop exploring her lower back with his more wild demands...Geet shied pulling her lips out of his mouth, blushing, hiding her face on his chest...
While maan smiled, a small trickle of laughter leaving his lips as he slowly bent toward geet, who was shielding herself in his arms...His lips grazed hers ever so softly...It was almost as if he was testing her boundary line...Geet's hands instinctively met the side of his cheek, slowly urging his lips harder against hers...It was as if every ounce of her wanted his lips on hers, to feel his hands as they traced the contour of her body...Geet pulled away ever so slighlty to breathe, trying not to show just how vulnerable she seemed to be...Her gaze moved from his eyes to his lips and once more his soft lips were against hers...while his hands slowly but surely tangling into her hair...Each intake of breath was another reminder of what was really happening, his cologne, the way his hands entangled in her hair, pressing her lips against his with a more urgent pace...

The sexual tension was pretty much high, as both of them where loosing there senses...Maan grabbed her body, and brought her under him...still locking their lips, not wanting to loose the feel even for a second...Geet started panting heavily, craving for the needed breath, but maan was no where near stopping...Her face went bright red, as she started wriggling...And maan left her mouth, panting himself...He looked at her flushed face, her swollen lips, her messy hair, her trembling form...He leaned in closer, and kissed her forehead, while geet was coughing for her desired breath..."i am sorry...i was too rough" he closed his eyes, leaning his forehead on hers...While geet cupped his cheeks, and placed a small peck on his lips...and hugged him like a small baby...She was totally dazed and more over worn out, as the aftermath of their wild make out...She was flushed and didn't had any guts to face maan, after their passionate encounter...
Maan hugged her back, and slowly caressed her back...understanding her hesistation...He knew he went too far, and that to without any commiment from his side...But still she never failed to show her blind trust on him...He securily cocconed her in his arms, and softly flipped her over him...then hugged her and slept, with her head comfortably placed on his chest...

It was morning and the love birds where still sleeping holding eachother more securily...both where laying side by side, with maan hugging her from back...It was more of a cozy position, where their was no gap between their bodies, still it all felt so warm and serene...Geet moaned closing her ears, as her daily morning alarm went on...she flipped around, hugging him tightly, hiding her face in her chest...trying to block this irritating sound...While maan even in his half consious state, made more space tucking her closer...His hands moved on her ears, closing it, helping her to block the sound...while geet pouted in her sleep, slowly rubbing her cheek on his chest...
"kya kar rahi ho" maan moaned, smiling, feeling tickled with her movement...while geet pulled her head up, and drowsily looked at him, adjusting her eyes with the morning sunrays...She smiled looking at him sleeping so peacefully, then blushed remebering their last night passion...She almost bit her lips, then stopped feeling how swollen they where...then closed her eyes, thinking how will she face him now...
She slowly got up, without disturbing his sleep...and tiptoed in the washroom, having a cold shower...Her skin burned with their passion...as the bite marks looked more prominent...She blushed while wiping her skin with a towel...still feeling his touch all over her body...Finally dressing herself more decently, ofcoures hiding her hickeys...she came out with her wet dripping curls...Maan was still sleeping holding her duppatta firmly around his body...Both of them didn't knew when her duppatta slipped away and just formed a shield around them, as if trying to give them privacy...
Geet moved away from him, letting him sleep...and stood infront of the mirror, drying her hair...Her gaze moved towards maan, on their own accords...she just kept admiring him, innocently drooling over his handsome features...He looked so calm, so cute...just like a small baby..."ummm mera cute gussewala baby" she whispered laughing at her own thoughts...Then her gaze moved to his cellphone, which was kept on the near by table...She walked towards it and picked it..."aise silent pe kyu rakha hai inhone phone" she wondered...then looked at the caller id...and found it to saying "dadi"...
"inki dadi ka phone hai" she whispered, then hurriedly moved towards him, intending to wake him up...But in her own clumsiness, she fell on his body...making him jerk with surprise...
Geet tried to move away, but maan smirked bringing her again closer...naughtily eyeing her face...
"maan chodiye na" geet said, trying to wriggle out of his grip...but maan made his hold firm, shaking his head, saying no...
"i want you close" he commanded, making his hold firm...then caressed her cheek, moving her curls behind..."you look so beautiful" he complimented cupping her blushing face...then ever so gently leaned in, intending for a passionate kiss...Geet looked into his eyes, and then his hungry lips...She nervously bit her lips then looked away...trying to divert his mind..."woh dadi ka phone hai...aap baat kar lo" she uttered, controlling her raising heart beats...
The next moment geet flinched in suprise, as maan jerked her away and pulled his mobile harshly from her fist...He paced back and forth in that small space...Just avoiding her mere presence...His mind crowded with innumerable questions and more painful answers...Geet looked at him painfully, as she could make out he is drifting away...She walked closer to him, trying to sooth him...but maan stopped her at a distance, by just showing her his hand..."maan" she whimpered as tears formed in geet's eyes, fearing her dark faith...She just kept looking at him still trying to understand, what went wrong...But maan looked raged, he was loosing his senses with every passing second...He simply rushed out in anger, again walking away from her...while geet looked at him feeling miserable...
"are you again leaving me" she meekly called from behind...but maan was long gone...She thumped herself on the ground, looking at his retreating form...then closed her eyes painfully, still wishing its all her nightmare...
"geet" she heard his hoarse voice, coming from a distance...immediately she looked up with her teary hazels...And found him standing their leaning on the door...Without wasting a single second, she picked herself up and ran towards him...jumping in his arms...hugging him like never before...
She kissed him all over his face, letting him know what she went through while looking at him walking away...Maan lifted her off her feet, and kissed her lips...
"i am sorry...i am sorry...i wont ever leave you again" he spoke between their lips...and picked her in his arms, and walked out of the house...still locking their lips...
"hum kaha ja rahe hai" geet innocently asked, as he kept her on passenger seat of his car...Maan walked on the other side, and sat on the drivers seat...he leaned on her, locking her seat belt...then smiled pecking her lips..."dadi se milane"...
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Precap:- ummm keep guessing😳😉😆
hello sweeties...how many of u thought that maan wud again leave her after reading the last precap...almost evryone😆...But i already said, u can expect a lot more of surprises from me...so yeh surprise kaisa laga😉...
now finally ek step aage ja raha hai inka relation...dadi tak toh pohach hi jayenge in next update😳...lets c aage kya hota hai...
pls press the like button and comment...n those who want pm, can add me...
love u lots,
varsha😊
Edited by mahimaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Loved it like anything.Poor Geet ,so vulnerable .
Edited by Ramykrish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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me going to college shaam ko padh k commnt krti hu...

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"Giving someone all your love is never an assurance that they'll love u back, don't expect love in return, just wait it to grow in there heart but if it doesn't be content it grew in yours"

d update was really awesum...!!!
maan was really embarrsed so was geet...dey both were bzy in cursing themself...!!!
both wanted to b wod eachother bt little hesitation was dere...bt our innocent geet can't even stay for a sec widout her maan...!!!
maan is really naughty...he is jst a tease...kitna b kr le control hi ni hota...ek baar geet k paas aate hi sare resolution khtm ho jate hain...!!!

when she said- "woh why dont you sleep with me on bed" i was lyk...msn shocked emoticon 02

bt after listning to her- "sorry i didn't mean, what it sounded"
i was laughing...poor geet kya kya bol jati hai...!!!

she wanted maan to sleep on bed...bt maan is way too smart...he want both of dem to sleep on dat couch only...!!!
dey were bzy in deir little romance...half of d nyt...!!!

moring can't b better den for maaneet...waking in eachother's arm...how romantic...!!!

dadi maa was calling maan...ye cell phone dekhte hi maan ka to pura attitude hi badal gaya...!!!
agar is baar meri cute si geet ko chod k gaya hota n to...mai uska sir phod deti...how could he even left her for a second...!!!
maaneet went to meet wid dadi maa...yiippeee!!!!
me super happy..one step to liya inhone apne pyaar me...!!!

till now we had only seen geet's crazy n unconditional love...bt wat about maan...i really want to c same craziness in him too...!!!

d update was really awesum...i really loved it...!!!

"Love is a precious thing
It is a feeling that
makes your heart sing
Whether you are far or near
it is like whispering in my ear.
When you find true love
it is something you
keep within your heart"

thank u thank u so much for such a fabulous fantastic amazingly lovely n rocking update...

take care of urself...don't stress urslf too much for update...

maine mrng me dekha tha kaafi late gai thi sone aap...soi b thi😕

Edited by deepali1022 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Firstly.. Thank for the congratulations... Luv ya...

and about update.. Hayeee it was naughtily sensual cute one...

The way geet was peeking on him.. Hehe.. and maan pulled her ...😳

And uske baad jo hua ahem ahem.. I was all...☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

And Then after long they slept in each others arm seeking solace...😊

And mornig mein wht geet said was sooo sweet... Gusse wala baby...😆

Hayeee finally maan taking her to his dadi...

Me waiting plzzz jaldi update de do...
Edited by mishtiritu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oww, thanx again di for congratulating me on becomng goldie😳...
Pata hai, I jst woke up at 7 in mrning aur eyes khulte hi checked for the update half in sleep😆, aur still UPDATING read kr ke to puri morning hi barbaad hojaati bt phir aise hi checked the posts aur phir saw the update u did waking up till 6 in morning 😲... I was like ur MAD,... kbh sote bh ho ya bh???🤢

Anyways loved the update di, oww Maneet romance to is on full swing ha, Kissy wissys nd wat not😉!!!!
Haaye loved the way Maan was cursing and talking to himself in all hush hush tone🤣, I was literaly chuckling wid the thought of seeing THE MSK like that... Hehehe, and then the teasing bits😉, Geet yeh kya kardi??? Yeh toh sher ko open invitation tha... 😆
Hmm, so Maan ab back to his naughty form, Haaye their kiss was jst tooo passionate yar☺️, too hot.
Oww, the morning scenes were too sweet, bt ae lo! Yeh maan ko phir se daura pad gaya, ufff...
So Dadi calling, nd yar seriousely the TWIST at the end was jst GREAT, the way geet sat on the floor all dejected aur suddenly hero enter wid a dhamaakedar entry😎, Kya baat...
Yippie, now meet wid In laws,😳 LOL fol mei Maan meeting sasurjee, nd yahaa Geet meeting Dadi saas. Waiting eagerly for the meet now. Loved the update thoroughly, nd now waiting for FOD...😉😉
Continue soon dii 😃
-LUV Anyaa😳
Edited by 16anyaa.gurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update. I was planning to slap him if he thought of leaving geet again but he came back for her. M so happy. Finally meeting dadi. 1st official visit. Excited. Expecting lots of hurdles.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ufff thank god he didnt leave her again...
What a passionate update...SUPERBBB...

now going to meet his dadi... first official meet... wonder whats is gonna happen?...

Waiting for another super Awesome Update...😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing 😊
Simply Superb!!!!
Loved it a lotzzz😊
Thankz for the pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Finally u have updated. Chalo me going to read the update. Baad me comment karungi..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow he is taking her to meet dadima
sounds wonderful
but what about sameera then?

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