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Posted: 12 years ago
😆

Originally posted by: neha5058



hehehe, i know about you but aur sab bhi to hai na...


haanji woh toh hai...it was just my kota😉😆

Well will b waiting...do update early plzzz...me making "puppy face"...pleassseee

Edited by Cherishh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
cute and lovely update

waiting for the next part

do cont soon
love
meena
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Posted: 12 years ago


thank you so
much for the lovely comments and likes... pls keep commenting...here is the next part, , pls do tell me hows this???




part-41


He slapped himself mentally and smiled at her waved at her bye and went away while dadi felt happy seeing the little communication between both of them…. Like she found everything…..

Maan went to office while Geet went inside and straight headed towards her room for waking Vedanta as it's time for his school….. she looked at ved who is sleeping so calmly snuggled in blanket like a small ball like he was in his dreamland…..

Geet smiled at him and sat beside him, , she caressed his face then ruffled his hairs little bit, bend down her face a little and pecked his forehead, , he is looking so innocent like maan looks so innocent while sleeping…..

Vedu, baby, , get up…. Finally Geet tried to wake him up…..

Ummm, , he made a noise only then covered his face with blanket….

Baby, utho… school ka time ho raha hai…. Geet removed the blanket from his face…..

No mama, pls 5 mins… ved said to geet trying to fetch little bit more sleep…..

Okay, only 5 mins, , I am coming in 5 mins… after that I won't listen anything…. Understood…. Geet kissed his nose and went in his room for taking his uniform and his school bags & other belongings….. it's been 5 mins, she come back to her room, , Vedanta being a good boy, , he was sitting on the bed while rubbing his eyes still in sleep…..

Awww my baby uth gaya….. geet went near him and placed a kiss on his cheek……

Good morning mama….. where is papa? Asked Vedanta…

Good morning sweetu…. Papa to office gaye…. Told Geet to Vedanta…..

Vedanta ke uthne se pehle chale gaye? He murmured to himself…..

Awww, , baby don't be sad…. You know papa ne bola hai ki wo sham ko jaldi aa jayenge aur hamein park lekar challenge…. Geet lied to him but somewhere she knew that maan will come home early at evening…..

Really??? Vedanta beamed with happiness…..

Yes….. bas you have to remind your papa about park…. You know na papa bhul jaate hai….. geet told him while removing his night dress….. while ved nodded at her statement that maan will forget….

Ok mama, , mama I am a big boy…. Hai na…. asked Vedanta…

Yes, Vedanta is a big boy…. Replied geet…

Then I will take bath by myself ?…… asked Vedanta

No beta, abhi aap utne big nahi ho…. Replied geet…

No, just now you said I am a big boy then I'll have my bath by myself……. , , , saying so he took his clothes and ran in his room for bath….. geet smiled….. she took her clothes and ran in her washroom for having bath because she is also in hurry, , she has to go Uni. And today is very important lecture…..she couldn't miss it….

After a while everyone is ready, , , everyone gathered at dining table except Maan, , ,

Vedanta-mama, milk do na….. Vedanta told to geet while everyone on the dining table looked at little Vedanta with surprised face like they had seen some kind of creature…. Vedanta is asking for milk by himself…… geet's mouth was fell open hearing his demand… everytime he denied for milk and she has to give him excuses for milk but this time, , 8th wonder…..

Geet-baby, , are you fine?? Geet checked his forehead….. checking if he has fever or anything but he is fine….

Vedanta-oho mama, don't over react…. I am just asking for milk.. pls give it na… school ke liye late ho raha hai….. everyone smiled at his comment while geet was in dazed state gave him the glass of milk and Vedanta finished in one go…. Even delight the milk taste….

Well who knows what is going in this little brain….. he is having his plans and that will surely execute… and profit will all vedanta's….. he is really happy today….

everyone had their breakfast while joking & pulling each other legs….. then geet left with Vedanta, she has to drop him at his school then she will go to Uni. , , annie has a off today so she and Ashlesha went for shopping along with dadi,, they will dadi at the Trust building and then will pick her, , , remaining Reyhansh went to study for doing some office work…. It is different study room only for others…. Maan has his separate study attached with his room……

Geet reached to Uni. And catch up with her friends….. everyone seems very happy but she doesn't know the reason, , but Misha is little bit fed up with Piya…. Geet whisperedin abhay's ear

"what's the matter?? Piya is very happy, , tum dono ka patch up ho gaya kya?" asked geet…

Geet, what are you asking? Hamara break up hi kab hua tha jo patch up hoga, , , and rest about Piya, , don't you know she is crazy… Abhay whispered back in her ear…. Geet nodded, ,

Geet, Piya, Abhay headed to their classroom while Misha, Kabir went to attend their VB class…..

They attended their important lectures and they got their assignments, it seems too difficult for them….. piya,geet & abhay got the same assignment, , it's really helpful for them…. It was around 3, , geet had already called to annie and told her that pick to Vedanta from his school…. Though he has a school bus but they prefer to drop and pick him by theirself…..

It was a free period for MBA and MCA students…. They all five catch up with each other and sat in garden beside the main gate…. Just then they heard giggle of some girls, , they are MBA students…

They got up and went towards the girls and they hear their talk which they doing with each other, ,

Girl1-and you know what the latest news?

Girl2-what?

Girl1- THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA, , geet's ear become like doggy's ear hearing maan's name from that girl…. She made a face…

Girl2-what about that hotty? She asked…… while misha also made face, , she doesn't know that why all girls became so insane behind that maan?? While abhay trying to drag piya from there, because he knew that if piya will start on maan's topic then she won't stop…. She will be gag a over maan…..

Girl3-as you know he has his own brands and that too so costlier brands he made in his company KHURANA TEXTILES but still he is becoming brand ambassador for another brand and will endorse her branded clothes, , maan has very efficient & popular designers in his company but still he is going to be a show stopper of Natasha's fashion show, , Natasha kapoor is launching her winter collection , , Natasha & Maan will be on ramp with each other as show stopper…. That is wow na…. hearing this geet & abhay turned found piya is lying on ground seems she shocked….

Girl2- this is really shocking, ,

Girl1-but you don't know the main reason behind this….

Girl2,3- what is that?? geet also wanted to know that what is the reason behind this?

Girl1- arey Natasha is sister of Rajat Kapoor, ,

Girl2- Rajat Kapoor, , who is a businessman and right now he is in dubai….

Girl1-yes, , Rajat and Maan has old business relations, , I have read somewhere , , Natasha knew Maan from so long infact she had been worked in his company also…. Natasha asked to him and Maan couldn't deny her…. That's the main reason behind this…. Nothing else….

Girl3-ohh, , that's the reason…. Geet also sighed hearing that's the reason…. Nothing else….. abhay sprinkle water on piya's face , , she came out from wonderland, , looked here & there….

What I heard while ago, , was that true??? Asked piya…. Misha & abhay rolled their eyes while kabir suppressed his laugh….

That was true piya….. replied geet…..

Piya took out the old magazine from her bag and looked at maan's pic , , he was in business attire , , killer looks… she murmured to herself….. while geet heard this…. She wanted to snatch this magazine from her hand and wanted to tell to maan that why can't he less handsome….? Every girl drooled over him…. she is burning inside, first those stupid girls and now drama queen piya…. On the other hand Abhay was also burning from inside seeing piya admiring maan, , , yeah she is in love with Abhay but always drooled over maan's looks but sometimes only for teasing him to the core, , , she did with abhay like this because anger didn't took over him so easily so sometimes she wanted to test his patience nothing else…. This was their daily routine to teasing each other…. This was a new kind of love of thiers….

Misha, pls pinch me yaar….. told piya…. Misha again rolled her eyes and pinched her so hard…. Piya jumped back and screamed….. aaahhh, , , rubbed her arm…..

You idiot, , I didn't said that pinch so hard…. Piya glared at misha… abhay & kabir went aside and stood there watching their drama….

Relax babes, , why are you so flying so high…. You told me to pinch, and i pinched you.. simple… saying so she went to abhay…..

Piya again went to her dreamland…..

Kash main ek baar maan se mil paati, , usey touch kar pati, , she was dreaming while geet was burning, , just then her sight fell on maan who is coming outside from principal's office… actually he had a meeting with the management , , they want to construct a building attached to their university facing another side…though the university is so big but still they thought that they are lacking in some fields, , so they wanted a building for that….. MAAN came here for discussing the project….. management couldn't found any other best construction company beside of KHURANAS…. That's why they contacted to Khurana Constructions….

hey wo dekho kaun aya yaha, Maan Singh Khurana himself, , , , ,

piya exclaimed in happiness…. All turned and saw maan is coming….. maan stopped on his way and looked them hearing her voice...

he saw geet is standing there wearing black jeans and loose fitting white top, open hairs looking so beautiful, , he just wanted to go and hug her tight, , like crushing in his arms…. He doesn't know why he has a feeling like this hugging her, , this is new for him…. he never felt like this…. While geet is looking at him with her big eyes, , and piya is at verge of faint with happiness, , right now the garden was empty, , those girls also went away in canteen, , , only they 5 were there…..

precap

Piya fell down with a thud hearing Geet Sweetheart from Maan's mouth, , ,

why can't you be less handsome???




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so hows it????
waiting for your response...
love ya
neha


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Posted: 12 years ago
R
ved has complelely accepted maneet as parents
precap was interesting
Edited by vandana73 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, amazing parts
loved them
loved maaneet moments and conversation
loved maaneet moments with vedant
their bond is so cute
perfect family mama , papa and their cute son
loved maan's staring at his cute little family
how cutely maan try to know geet more
how geet is feeling peace with maan
vedant aur uske cute antics loved it
maan said right y vedant will suffer for sameera
vedant is son of maaneet now
continue soon



thank u so much di for teh comment, , now me no gussa from u, , hehehe
truly glad that you loved the maaneet moments...
and ved too... and understanding maan now...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Cherishh

😆


haanji woh toh hai...it was just my kota😉😆

Well will b waiting...do update early plzzz...me making "puppy face"...pleassseee



updated dear, , now need to make puppy face...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow its awesome update
loved it to teh core
precapp si dreamy
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
so geet getting jealous..
and wat vedanta is planning
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Posted: 12 years ago

wonderful update

loved it...

precap seems nice

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