MG FF ABODH #1 (Pt 1-17) Link of Thread 2 @ Pg 146 - Page 27

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved d updt...maan thinks its his charm due to which he can attract any1...he is right in his way bt geet loves him...adi i respect u for d trust n protective nature u have...


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Posted: 13 years ago
GEET IS ALREADY IN LOVE WITH MAAN AND CRAZY ABOUT HIM
BUT IS SHE THAT CRAZY THAT SHE WILL AGREE TO WHATEVER HE WANTS
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Posted: 13 years ago
Super update dear.Loving ur creations



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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...
loved it alot n i guess maan might win the bet as geet loves him...

waiting fr more...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it to the core
superb
intresting precap dear
continue soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank You For All Likes & Comments
I really want to do personally reply to all but cant do due to large number no comments that too in three FFs and very less time..but please dont misunderstand me..its my request..i love all comments and adore all




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Posted: 13 years ago


Part 6


He reached near adi home and started finding geet home but he had no clue where she lived. He was thinking then he saw pinky.. she was coming out from geet house. Geet was standing at door and talking to pinky. Maan signed in relief and smiled thinking his next step.


He called adi and said him to come to his place..in guest house as he had some urgent work. Adi immediately left for there. Maan was seeing him going out then he stepped to geet home. He knocked. Mohindar opened door. Maan was totally drenched in rain. He said mohindar that he was stranger there and came to adi home as they were good friends. But adi was not at home and now its raining hard so he had no any place to stay for little. Mohindar looked him up and down. He was looking decent. mohindar first hesitated but when maan mentioned he was adi friend , he let him came inside. Maan sat in sofa in hall when mohindar went inside to inform geet. Geet was in her room talking to her dream man as usual. Mohindar knocked . Geet opened her room door and asked him " bauji kuch chahiye ". Mohindar told her everything that a adi friend has come. So she should make some dinner for him. Geet nodded and went to kitchen.


Maan was sitting impatiently waiting for a glimpse of geet but she was no where. Mohindar gave him some cloth to change and showed him guest room. Maan nodded still searching around for her but dint find as she was in kitchen. Maan went to room and started changing. He opened his shirt and then vest. Then went for shower.


Geet prepared tea and went to his room to give him. She knocked but maan dint reply as he was still in shower. Geet again knocked calling " suniyee" but no response. She pushed door little to peep inside and found it was empty. She guessed he must be in washroom so she thought after keeping tea she will leave. So she entered, knocked washroom door and said that she is keeping his tea on table. But maan dint listen cause of shower sound. Geet kept tea on table and was facing her back to washroom when maan came out drying himself in towel. He was drying his hair so could not see her and geet turned to leave when both Collided each other. Maan immediately held something in hurry ... he felt very soft thin fabric something below his palm . He still could not see her as it was covered with towel...


Geet gasped with a touch which she was feeling on her slim waist.. she shivered with this one touch... her one hand was holding his bare shoulder and other was on his wet waist to support her falling body... both were still trying to be refrained from falling...



It happened within fraction of moment so both could not understand anything. she saw a man was holding her from waist.. she panted.. she was feeling some strange sensation in her body.. her mind was saying she knew him.. he was no stranger at all.. in her prevision she raised her hand to remove towel from his face.. as towel was slipping down her heart beat was increasing.. she first looked his broad forehead.. it was wet and shining with some strong lines which was indicating his power on world.. next his eyes came visible which was dark passionate brown with so much mysteries carried in it.. she looked it engrossed fully.. she must had looked these eyes previously she thought.. she was now guessing who was he.. her heart was recognizing him but mind was still debating with her heart.. "he is and he is not" were running in her whole body and at last towel fell on ground making her whole world like a spinning globe..her whole world became burning like sun beam in which she was wandering..she lost her whole sense to get what is happening.. " how this possible.. no.. omg .. m in his arm.. babaji please ..please don't brake my dream if m sleeping.. please babaji I beg you.. please I want to sleep till eternity if it is a dream.. I dont want to open my eyes till my death if I am dreaming him.. dreaming my dream man.. dreaming my Maan.


Maan saw her looking him without blinking.. he saw her face.. it was showing some kind of strange affection.. something very fond but why.. and on top of it what was it.. what was in her expression which was drinking my presence like a thirsty dying man feel for a sip of water.. why she was lost like it was her last wish to see me and now she was not afraid of death even.. why .. " tu kya soch raha hai maan .. stop it.. do you still remember why you have come here.. you cant drown in your emotions do you get it.!!! " he chided his mind to think like this stupid..



He slowly made her straight on her own feet. His hand was still on her waist finding its most comfortable place to be rested. Both were looking in each other eyes fighting with their inner self. His hand caress on her waist brought her back and she jerk removed her hands from him. She was waiting for him for doing same but his soul had slept like most peaceful sleep ever.. she held his hand and slowly removed his hand from her waist .. which brought him back as well from his dream.


" maan " she spoke meekly as wanted to confirm she was not in her dreamland.


"hmm " he replied like absentminded.. or wanted to fake in front of her .. who knows.. but both were still not fully recovered.. when they heard mohindar calling geet name from downstairs... geet run from there without looking him back. He stood there for few minutes gaining what happened precisely. Was it my drama or reality he could not figure out but yes.. it worked and he was happy ...



Precap : Maan Shout On Geet 😲😡

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Edited by geet.lover - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Res---

wooow me first over your thrd scnd tym 😆


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aowww freak wo uske ghar pahunch gaya ?? N wo b kya chaal chall k LoLz Maan ne Adi ko apne Gsthouse bula n khud uske pretext pe Geet k ghar entry le li !! Waah Maan babu bahut smart ho tussi...dill khush kar ditta ROFLz
aowww Then Maan ka restlesness to see his desire !! What was that sir ji !! Hehehe

ek baat bta The Maan S Khurna jispe Geet itni flar hai over magazines and all, why wont her father know the MSK ?? Unhone usko kyu ni pehchaana

waah...i just love it...hehe umesha Mam girti hai n Maan k savour aa jaate hai...kya entry thi n kya meeting thi...Love It
aowww...ab kyu gussa kia Maan ne mere pwincess pe ?? Waise nothing new humesha karta hai

Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i will like Maan to loose bet.if he wins he will loose Geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
omggg it was sooo dreamyyy...the first meet...lovuuu beutiful update❤️...maan in wet body...geet is in his arm...hayeee

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