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RITZY ARE U GOING TO UPDATE TODAY OR NOT

WHAT HAPPENED?
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Sorry guys, not feeling well. Went to sleep but kept you guys waiting so updating. Sorry for any mistakes as I am really down under.

Also, thank you friends for comments and likes. Though I am a little disappointed with volumes but I am hoping as Maaneet moments will increase I will get my readers back. I would rather want you guys to tell me if a track is boring then just not commenting or pressing like. So please do that in future.

Deepa – By positive report I meant optimistic report.

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Chapter 48

After ten days since Mohinder had been discharged, Maan was as usual helping Rano in making a fresh pasta soup for Bauji when Mohinder walked inside the kitchen.

"Ab bas bhi karo Rano. Kahan traditionally damaad ki khatirdaari karte hain aur tum ho ki bechaare se cooking kara rahi ho. Aur is besharam ko dekho, slab pe baith kar carrot kha rahi hai aur pati kam kar raha hai…sharam naam ki koi cheez hai ki nahi?"

[Now stop it Rano. Traditionally speaking, we should be pampering son-in-law and you are making him cook. And look at this shameless, she is eating carrot sitting on the slab while husband is working…there is no shame left.]

Geet pouted cutely hearing her Dad's comment.

Maan was startled to see Mohinder in the kitchen. He immediately wiped his hands and bent down to take his blessings.

"Jinda rah puttar"

Maan looked up getting emotional at the blessing. He remembered the moments when he had called him Mr. Khurana and stopped him from taking his blessing - "Bauji..aap ko aaram karna chaiye"

[Bauji, you should take rest.]

"Thak gaya hoon aaram ka kar ke…moreover doctor has now asked me to do some exercise."

[I am tired taking so much rest… moreover doctor has now asked me to do some exercise.]

He then asked pointedly – "Have you two taken any decision?"

Maan looked down but responded firmly – "I will take Geet home."

Mohinder looked at Geet – "And, you are ready to go?"

"Yes Dad"

"Now I am feeling ok, so you should plan to go back. Kabse yahan par ho. Maaji kuch kehti nahi hain toh tum unka fayda uthaogi. Itne din ho gaye. Jaakae apna ghar sambhalo ab."

[Now I am feeling ok, so you should plan to go back. You have been here for long time now. Maaji doesn't say anything that doesn't mean you should take advantage of her. It ahs been long. You should go and take care of your home now.]

Geet smiled with tears in her eyes and hugged her dad. "Khush raho beta….bas".

[Just stay happy…]

Then he looked at Maan – "Yeh last warning hai. Apni beti ke pyaar mein haar gaya hoon but don't let this situation arise again."

[This is the last warning. I have lost in my daughter's love but don't let this situation arise again.]

Maan nodded his head – "I will not break your trust again…I promise."

That evening, Geet left with Maan. Rahul was still not very sure but he did not want to go against his sister's happiness. Just before she left, he took her to one corner and held her hand

"To tell you the truth, I can not get over the pain and anger easily that someone hurt my sister and that too emotionally. It is very tough for me to trust him anymore. But as you and Mom said, I don't want to stand in your happiness because of my own insecurities.

Isliye is baar, promise me…kasam kha mujhe chu kar, that you will not hide anything anymore. Agar kabhi, kabhi bhi kuch galat ho ya you need us you will share. Promise me nahi toh I swear mein tujhe nahi jaane dunga.

You are my world and…just promise me that you will not hide anything from me. I used to be your best friend as well as your brother. Don't go away from me just because you are married now."

[To tell you the truth, I can not get over the pain and anger easily that someone hurt my sister and that too emotionally. It is very tough for me to trust him anymore. But as you and Mom said, I don't want to stand in your happiness because of my own insecurities.

So this time, promise me…touch me and promise, that you will not hide anything anymore. If ever anything happens which is wrong or you need us you will share. Promise me else I swear, I will not let you go.

You are my world and…just promise me that you will not hide anything from me. I used to be your best friend as well as your brother. Don't go away from me just because you are married now.]

Geet held his hand realizing he was not only scared for her but hurt that she did not share the truth with him earlier – "I am sorry Rahul. Please tu itna mat soch. I will look after myself. You are still my best friend. I agree ki mujhe tujhe bata dena chaiye tha. Bas laga ki tu mujhe yeh chance nahi lene dega ya phir bahut stress lega. But I understand now that my silence will cause you more pain and I promise agar koi bhi baat hui toh you will be the first one to know."

[I am sorry Rahul. Please don't think that much. I will look after myself. You are still my best friend. I agree that Is hould have told you everything. I just thought that you will not let me take this chance or will stress yourself out. But I understand now that my silence will cause you more pain and I promise if anything happens, you will be the first one to know.]

Maan and Geet reached KM little late. Vicky was already sleeping while Daadima / Meera were watching TV. Dev was working on some files on the dining table.

Meera was the first one who noticed Geet. She grabbed Daadima's hand for attention and they both got up seeing Geet. It seemed as if new life had been breathed into a lifeless soul.

"Geet beta…aap…aap aa gayi beta."

[Geet beta…you…you have come.]

Daadima hugged Geet tightly followed by Meera.

Though Geet had met Daadima at the hospital but she was meeting Meera first time after that day's fight.

"Meera I am so sorry. Mein tumse rudely baat karke chali gayi"

[Meera I am sorry. I spoke to you rudely before I left."

Meera just shook her head and hugged her – "Aisa mat bol pagli….ab tu aa gayi hain toh khub saari baatein kar lenge. Vicky toh khushi se paagal ho jayega. We all missed you so much. Aisa lag raha tha jaise koi jaan hi nahi bachi ho ghar mein. Sab kuch boring."

[Don't say like that stupid…now we will talk as you have come back. Vicky will go mad with happiness. We all missed you so much. It felt like there is no life left without you. It was so boring.]

Dev interrupted – "Are use andar toh aane do yaar. Sab use bahar hi gher ke khade ho gaye ho. She has come back to her own house and you are treating her as if koi guest ho."

[At least let her come inside guys. All of you are talking to her at the gate only. She has come back to her own house and you are treating her as if she is a guest.]

Geet smiled and side hugged Dev as well.

"Vicky so gaya na…mein ek baar dekh kar aati hoon use"

[Vicky has slept right…let me go and check on him once.]

Geet crept into Vicky's room and gave him a small kiss on the cheek. When she came out Daadima asked her – "Kaise hain Mohinder beta ab?"

[How is Mohinder now?]

"He is much better Daadima. Aaj liteally unhone bhaga diya mujhe and kaha ki jao ab apna ghar sambhalo…kuch sharam waram hai ki nahi."

[He is much better Daadima. He literally shooed me off today and asked me to come back home.]

Daadima smiled and thanked God that Mohinder had agreed to give them another chance. Her eyes locked with Maan and Maan understood very well what his grandmother was thinking.

Meera quipped in – "Toh chalo mein kahan laga deti hoon."

[Let me arrange for dinner then.]

"Nahi Meera…hum kha kar aaye hain."

[No Meera…we already had dinner.]

Daadima lovingly caressed Geet's face – "Hum sorry aur thanks nahi kahenge beta. Bas aap aa gayi ab sab kuch thik ho jayega. Don't hesitate to talk to me beta…hum sach mein aapko apni beti hi maante hain."

[I will not say sorry or thanks. Now you are here and I know everything will be ok. Don't hesitate to talk to me beta…I truly think of you as my daughter.]

Geet just nodded her head.

"Agar aap dusre bedroom mein shift hone chaein toh hum arrange kara sakte hain. I just want you to be comfortable."

[If you want to shift to another bedroom then I can arrange that. I just want you to be comfortable.]

Maan looked down not able to protest though his heart wanted to "Daadima kya keh rahi hain…aise mein kaise us se apni dil ki baat kahoonga?"

[What is Daadima saying…how will I fix everything this way?]

He let out a sigh of relief when Geet replied – "Iski koi zaroorat nahi Daadima. Mein kabhi bhi uncomfortable nahi rahi. Maan ne humesha mera khayal rakha hai."

[There is no need for that Daadima. I have never been uncomfortable. Maan has always looked after me.]

"Thik hai toh jayiye. Phir aaram kijiye aap. Kal aaram se baith kar catch up karenge."

[Ok then, you go and rest. We will catch up tomorrow at peace.]

Geet entered her bedroom and she felt at peace. It still felt like her room. She smiled and looked around and gasped seeing "Hope" back at it's place.

"Maan!!!"

But Maan had entered the washroom to change. Geet touched the painting and was happy, excited and confused to see it there. She stood some distance away admiring her own work.

Precap –

"Jhalli…control kar. Inka kuch nahi bigdega, jaan teri nikalni hai…hai mar jawaan."

"She has no idea what she is doing to me. Kitna muskura rahi hai and all I want is to crush her in my arms and kiss those smiling lips to oblivion."

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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting ka post kr k mn to first bngae comment krny mn... hahaha...😆😉
wow what n update yra...just love it alot...😊

Edited by nemra - 12 years ago
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update mohinder gave permission to maan to take geet to km and everyone giving warnings to maan and love geet rahul scene and maneet in km everybody happy to see geet dadi asking for different room geet denieing wow maneet in there room geet saw hope



Edited by tamanna1391 - 12 years ago
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woohooo... finally Geet back to KM... 🥳

I loved Mohinder today... the way he was giving his piece of mind to geet and rano for making maan cook was so cute... Geet sitting in the kitchen slab and eating carrot while pati cooking... 😆

The short convo of maan and mohinder was very nice... the acceptance of mohinder and assurance of maan was awesome...

And the welcome in KM... the most awaited moment...

The best part was when daadi asked Geet if she wanted to stay in another room... bechara maan ka thinking was superb... poor guy was waiting for his lady love to get back and daadi gave him a heart attack... 😆

Now eagerly waiting for the next part... hope you update before i leave for my holiday...

anyways take care of ur health... and continue when u r fine
Edited by shrutheAjay - 12 years ago

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