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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: bulbul164



dear there is no dev this story is different
me andjass plan to surprise our reader
so just wait and watch
thanks deepa diii for comment



but in CS Dev is mentioned...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: spvd



but in CS Dev is mentioned...



i really happy jitne interest se app sab story read karta ho
but this is not typical ghsp story
isse dev ki entry abhi nahi hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
so maan khud jaa rahe hai geet ko lene... good
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84


Di I hav a panic attack last night means severe head ache so I was not able to update last nite but now I gonna update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
awesome love it
part 1 was fab & i love the vm too it remind me GHSP days 😒
really fab &

Waiting for the next update :))
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
hi bulbul and jass thanks for introducing ur ff to me.
sorry rite now can't hit the like as it is not working but will do it when it will allow me to do it.

waiting for ur further updates.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
me angry..
waiting for update like anything..kab milaga update?
i want it fast..
waiting waiting
waitin waiting..
jaldi dona update jass and bulbul.. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88





Till 1 in the night Daddi waited for Maan but he was still in the office.Daddi had put her weapons down in front of Maan becoz he never listened to her.

8 in the morning

Breakfast Table




Daddi like previous nite waiting for Maan.She was too angry that she dropped her idea to meet him in his bedroom.At last she is his Daddi so lil attitude is must.

The major thing which was making Daddi worry was Mohinder's letter.She wanna flew to Hoshiarpur to take them here.But she was not felling well due to blood pressure problem.As she had already covered long way to India from UK few hours back

She was still in thoughts when Maan came downstairs.Annie had already left to meet her friend.


There was no regert on Maan's face as he never reached airport to pick Daddi.But he was not that confident also in his walk.May be inwardly he was feeling this that he was wrong

Maan: Good Morning Daddi Maa (he gav a fade smile)


No answer from Daddi.She continued to hav her sandwich

Maan : Daddi Maa I know u r angry on me.I had no time to pick u up so I sent car

Daddi kept silence but atlast she had to say some thing : I know Maan Betay u ever hav time but how u get time to give ur explanation to me .I don't ask u any thing (said angrily)

Maan: Plz Daddi Maa I promise next time aisa nahi hoga plz forgive me (he begged folding hands)

Daddi : Maan I m not angry on u but on me when I was trying to make you a perfect man where I missed some thing that u always run away from family commitments.(she said with filled eyes)

Before Maan or Daddi could talk more Daddi held her head with hands due to severe pain in head.She was in much tension due to letter and now Maan's behavior.

Maan: Daddi Maa all u alrite (he grabbed her in his arms and took her to room)

Dr came within 15 minutes.Her bp had been raised upto more than required mark.He advised Daddi to take rest and after giving prescription to Maan doctor left.

Maan: Daddi I know some times I do what ever I want but I hav no one important then u (he kisses her forehead and the whole fake anger of Daddi also vanished )


Daddi : Maan betay even I lov u more than any one else.U said u ll do what ever I want u to do (daddi wiped Maan's tears and own also)


Maan : Ji Daddi Maa I promised u and I ll not break it now if u r not well what I ll do to this money (he second Daddi Maa)



Daddi : Beta I wanna say u some thing u want a favor from u (she narrated whole letter matter to Maan and also made him realize how much important Handas r for Khuraanas )


Daddi wanted Maan to go to take both father daughter here as doctor asked her to take rest and she can't trust on any one.


Maan :But Daddi Maa I hav to go to Amritsar for a deal that is also important.If u don mind we can send Addi.Unko lene he to jaana hai .He ll do this work.Aur if u want we can help them there with money (he cleared)


Daddi : Abhi to apne kaha u ll do what ever I want.Now ek dam he u changed.Humme he umeed nahi rakhni chaahea thi(she became sad)


Maan : Daddi Maa when I said I don wanna fulfil ur wish.I just said mera plan pehle se he bana hua ha.I can go after that.If u want them as soon as possible I can send Addi(he explained)


Daddi : Humne apko bataya how cruel that lady is .Jinke sath wo rahte hai.They ll not let Addi do any thing.Only u can do this.If u can tell me otherwise I ll go


Maan : Okey Let me talk to client I ll prepone meeting jo kal thi aaj he rakh leta hu becoz I can't late...client ko US janna hai.Waise bhi Amritsar Airport per he jaana hai mujhe...waha se meeting karke I ll leave for hoshiarpur Aab to kush (he cheered Daddi up)


Daddi : But beta plz don b late then this (she tried to smile)

Maan talked to clients and they became ready.Now major thing was how to find out who is Mohinder and Geet beocz Maan had never seen them.Daddi Maa gav him old snap of Chaudhary Handa and Mohinder to help in search.Even in the village there may be no need of snap becoz Handas were well known people at that time.


But Daddi was not aware no one knows Mohinder now in the village After his two brothers sold whole farmland to pay their dues Which they had due to betting and gambling Mohinder was ill so he remain unable to took charge of his share also.Now it gonna be tough for Maan to search them.


Annie came back after Maan phoned her to take care of Daddi and he left within hour for airport.When he came out of Amritsar airport it was about 10:30 in the morning.


Khuraana Construction's Amritsar Branch head Mr Bhalla picked him up and after meeting Mr Bhalla asked him to visit Golden Temple as he was also going there.Maan said yes becoz he wanted to prey for Daddi Maa also.


On the other hand in Hoshiarpur


Geet who had lost her father week back.She wanted to visit golden temple to prey god .But she had no money.She never visited any city.It was hard for her to fulfil her father's last wish to pray for his soul in Golden temple.


Her Chachi Kuldeep was planning some other conspiracy against her.Kuldeep wanted to marry Geet with an alcoholic rich man.Who gonna pay money for the marriage.Even Geet was not aware her best friend Kesar's brother Brij was also involved in this


Today when Geet's Chacha Chachi was out for any marriage she decided to go to Amritsar own her own.Even she was not aware where to go.Kesar helped her giving her the pocket money saving she has and also made her sit in bus to Amritsar she had reached Amritsar by 11 and most probably she ll be back before her Chacha Chachi come back to home.Kesar had given all written information how to reach Golden Temple and how to come back.Becoz Kesar usually visit city every month with her parents .


Poor girl some thieves took her all money away when she was about to leave the golden temple so she had to sit in a truck.One kind truck driver hav her lift


This was really destiny or else.She was here where Maan was.But he was not aware who she was.He asked Mr Bahlla to arrange jeep instead of car and decided to move toward Hoshiarpur alone.


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Before Geet can reach back her village.Brij stopped her truck.She got scared


Brij : Teri Chachi bahar kya gayi tu maze se besharmo ki tarah ghumti fir rahi hai.Come with me.She gav ur responsibility to me.Jab wo aa jaye..she will ask u reason for this act.(he yelled)


When truck driver and other persons in the truck tried to interfere.He threaten them and asked them this was their family matter.


He dragged Geet brutally from truck and throw her in jeep.But he find Maan standing in front of him.He was also on same way to village and stopped here looking at drama.


Brij: Kya hai bhai apna kaam karo (Brij said carelessly he hasn't estimated Maan yet)

Maan : Ya me here to do my work.Is ladki per manhood dikha rahe ho .Fight with a man (he rubbed his wrist)

Brij : OA tu brij ko challenge karta hai per mere pass time nahi hai chal apna rasta naap (he yelled)


Maan looked at Geet who was sobbing.He wanted to help her.But was unable ' suniye if u wanna go any where I ll drop u ' he said to Geet.


But no response.Before Maan and Brij can wrestle Geet ran away from there .Maan was surprised to c her act.As she was near to village so it was easy for her to rum home on feet instead to wait for Brij to beat her


Brij not wanted to c Geet going away from his hands so without saying any thing to Maan he also started his jeep and moved toward village


plz wait lil let me post second part of chapter second

scroll down plz

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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In the village Maan asked so many people about Mohinder but for many he was unknown.Those who know they didn't wanna talk about it becoz they know how much wicked Kuldeep and her husband was.Now Brij was very close to them.Who was not less than gangster.Even he had lost picture given by Daddi some where.

Brij caught Geet and dragged her to his home.Becoz it was Kesar from which Brij came to know about her trip to Gurudawara


Brij's sister Kesar


Brij : Sun le kudiye (girl) agar tu yahan se bahar gayi .I ll kil u.Let ur Chachi come she ll decide what to do with u (he roared on poor girlz)

When Geet Chachi Kuldeep came back she beat her.After beating her she send her to shop for bringing household grocery

Mr Maan Singh Khuraana was moving here and there in search of Mohinder and Geet

Maan : Daddi bhi na...agar yaha nahi aata to fir se kehti I never care about her.Per bhala unse puche sirf dikhane se he care hoti hai.How much I love her from inside I know (he mumbles)

Luckily he found Geet coming from local soap .A smile came to his lips.He tried to ask Geet about Handas.She got more scared becoz she was aware her Chachi was planning her unmatched marriage and took Maan wrong.As same person otherwise who might hav work with them.

Maan : Dekhiye I m coming from Delhi I hav some work with Handa family can u plz tell me the house.(he said politely)



Geet : Yeh wahi to nahi with whom Chachi wants my marriage (she thought rooted to spot.Looked at him with shock.In shock her things fall on road and she ran away from there)


Kuldeep's house


When Kuldeep came to know this she again beat her.Placing burning coal on her hand.


She called Brij and arrange meeting with would be Geet's husband same night.Brij said yes.Kuldeep locked Geet in room and herself go to local market for some things for Roka.

But Geet got surprised when she found Kesar opened lock .

Kesar : Geet I can't say u more tu yahan se bhag ja.they r planning to marry u with a drunker and gambler (she said in one breath )

Geet : But how u came here

Kesar : Ur Chachi went to market giving keys to Brij veerji so that agar guest aa bhi jaaye he can made them sit in house.I stollen it .Aur yeh kush paise rakh Maa ne diye hai.Tu jayada soch mat bas bhag ja (she started to collect her cloths )


Geet : But where I can go.Papa ji ne apne ek jaan pehchan waale ko likha tha to take care of me.But nobody came.(she started to cry)

Kesar : Geet tu pehle yahan se nikal.There is an orphanage in Amritsar .Yeh le uska address.My Mausi works there.Wo kissi ko binna pata chal teri help karegi.(she handed address to her )

Geet : I m really thankful to you .Tum logo ka ehsaan kaise uttar sakti hu main.(she hugged her)

Kesar : Jo Veer Ji kar rahe hai this is nothing to pay for that.U just ran away from here.Last bus to Amritsar ll be coming.Bus stand per mausi ka Admi tumko lene aa jayega.I have phoned her.(she pushed Geet out from back door )



Its gonna b dark soon.But this darkness was nothing than the darkness her Chachi gonna bring.So without any fear she ran away from there toward bus stand.


Maan after not finding Handas decided to camp just outside village as his favorite time pass to b at lonely place.He decided to search them next day.


Lik last time today morning.Brij over heard his mother and sister so before he could say anything to them.He called his goons to search for Geet and himself ran toward bus stand.


Finding Brij chasing herself Geet started to ran toward jungle to hide herself.Brij had turned to be mad he accompanying his goons also ran behind her.They had swords in their hands


She started to scram for help.No body was there for here help.
At last Brij caught her

Brij : U wanna ran away .No how u thought this.I m brij.Now u has became a fear a danger for us.U need not to live.U can do this same again. (he raised his sword to kill her)

But one hand became hurdle in between sword and Geet.He was non other than Maan Singh Khuraana .Geet closed her eyes in fear.Maan with injured hand and arms started to beat Brij and his goons.Both Geet and Maan had been injured badly

Brij started to shout : OA mundiya tu iske liye kyo panga leta hai Yeh Geet aab tak apne Daddi..fir Maa aur fir abhi kuch din pehle apne baap Mohinder ko kha gayi.Jo iska bhalla karta hai usko he kha jaati hai.Ja apna kaam kar.U hav to pay for this (he yelled)


Maan was shocked that this is Geet. Even more her father was not in this world.Now bit image cleared in front of him.He started to beat goons with more efforts and all ran away from there.Geet was about half alive.

Maan : Geet utho wo log bhaag gaye...(he jerked her but she caught her tightly within moment hugging him)


But Geet realized some thing she looked at Maan wit wide open eyes.

Geet : Tum wahi admi ho na jisse meri chachi ne bulaya hai to marry me forcibly .(she started to cry bitterly)Jaane do mujhe.

Maan : Geet hosh main aayo.U r taking me wrong I m Maan...Maan Singh Khuraana Delhi se aaya hu .Ur father sent a letter to my Daddi.(he told whole incident why he became late to reach here .Daddi was out so she got letter late.Now he want to take her with him)

Geet : U r saying rite (she said with hop filled eyes)

Maan : Ya I m saying rite .Sorry I got late tumhare Papa ki help nahi kar paya (he gav hand to Geet but she was not able to stand so Maan took her in his lap even he had been more injured )





Hey dear buddies its too late.Will post next chapter tomorrow.This is lengthy one.Hop u ll like my and Bulbul's attempt.

Plz comment and hit lik

Lov

Jass and Bulbul


tense liberties r must always



Precap

Maan and Geet in village with police.

Geet's new journey toward new life to Delhi along with Maan

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
Hi..just came across ur work nd i must say i absolutely loved it..
I've sent u an add request..plz accept it nd pm me da future updates :)
would b waiting for da next part :)

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