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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congratulation on your new thread!!!!
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DEBT TO PLEASURE


Happy Eid to all of you

Part 6


Life is unpredictable, unforeseen and unexpected. Our destiny is always one step ahead of us. Geet's life was not going as she had wanted or planned. She sat in her car, throwing the keys in Vicky's direction. Vicky chuckled, sitting behind the wheel.

"We have hardly any time to waste. We have to reach Shimla today and complete our work. We need to find Payal as soon as possible. And I need to get rid of that engagement too." Geet thought glancing outside the window.

She had always acted more like a brother to her sisters. She had always been protective for them. Tying up your entire life with a person you barely knew is not an easy thing to do. It all felt inappropriate and uncomfortable.

The only physical contact I have ever had was with that MSK. And I feel as if he had stolen something, yeah he stole my first kiss. But it was a little more than just a mere kiss. I could feel his breath on my lips even the last night. If a kiss can do this, then how much distraction would this engagement would cause? She thought but least did she knew that the real reason for the distraction was more than that little physical contact or the pleasure she had felt at that time.

What am I doing? I don't love that guy, I hardly know him. Forget about love, I don't want to get married when I am not sure Payal is fine or not. What if something bad would have happened to her? I can't simply chuck her off my life, like a discarded piece. I need to concentrate just on Payal and that's all.She thought looking out of the window.

"Geet, your phone is ringing." Vicky said, breaking her chain of thought. Vicky was very well aware of the uneasiness in her aurora. But he preferred to let her sort out alone for he knew that she was a brave girl, maybe more stronger than him.

Geet picked up the phone hurriedly and placed it on her ear.

"Geet," The voice on the other side send a wave of panic throughout her. It was not someone she had expected.

"Payal?" Her voice chocked. She had no idea if she should be happy to hear her sister's voice after so many months, or she should be angry on her, for putting all of them through so much pain.

"I don't have much time. Tell mom and dad that I am sorry." Payal said in a painful voice. Geet could feel the pain that her voice had.

"Payal, Payal listen, are you ok? Where are you?" Geet asked holding he phone tightly in her hands as if everything was depending on that one call. Vicky stopped the car after parking it on the roadside.

"In the XYZ ashram," Payal was hardly able to speak. She was panting badly, trying to catch her breath and hold on to herself at the same time.

"I don't have much time. Just promise me, I know you can do it. Make sure that he gets his rights. Take him to Maan Singh Khurana." And then there was a painful silence on the other side of the phone.

"Just take him to Maan Singh Khurana." With that there was silence on the other side' a kind of silence that couldn't be broken even they both had wanted.

"Take whom Payal? And why? What did that Maan Singh Khurana do?" Geet asked hysterically on the phone, again and again.

After so many months she received a call from her sister and she was hardly able to understand what she meant. But something was terribly wrong.

Vicky placed his hand on Geet's shoulder.

"What happened to payal? What did she say?" Vicky asked Geet.

"Take me to XYZ ashram." Geet said, controlling her tears and the pain. That ten minute drive too much painfully long.

Life was playing a cruel joke with her. Again that Maan Singh Khurana's name was there. She had so many questions and the only person capable of providing answers was Payal but when she reached that place, she had to come in terms with the worst.

Her whole world crumbled and then something within her damaged forever to see the dead body of her sister. She thumped on the floor, beside Payal's dead body. This was not what she could come in terms with. She felt alone and cold, she felt as if the world has stopped, everything had ended.

"The person with whom she eloped, he dumped her after a month. And since then she is living here. We asked her so many times about her home and also about the name of the person who had done this to her. But she never told us anything. The only answer we got was that she didn't have the courage to face her parents and she has no expectations from the person who married her just for his pleasure and left her as if nothing has happened. But she called you when she was taking her last breaths." An old lady who was caretaker of the Ashram told her.

She was hearing everything but she had no strength to face all this. She couldn't absorb the harsh and bitter reality that was ready to kill her in a single breath. Her eyes were blank. She kept on staring at the dead body of her sister.

This can't be true. The world stopped, the time stopped, she felt as if her heart would also stop beating. She was about to collapse. The emotional trauma was too much to bear. For the first time in her life this strong girl felt weaker and vulnerable. She felt as if her heart will burst and her existence would dissolve in this pain.

She was losing herself in an unknown darkness, but it was only then she felt something warm and soft in her lap.

Baffled, she glanced down and her eyes fell on a tiny creature who was staring at her. She was shocked to find a baby in her lap.

"This is Payal's child. She lost too much blood while giving him birth today. She called you only when she was sure that she won't be able to make it."

And then Payal's words reverberated in her mind.

"Just promise me, I know you can do it. Make sure he gets his rights. Take him to Maan Singh Khurana."

"Payal's child, it means, she asked me take him to Maan Singh Khurana. But why?" She muttered, unable to understand anything. Now she knew that Maan Singh Khurana was the same person who had kissed her forcefully, that arrogant rich businessman, who had some sort of connection with the underworld or God knows what. She thought still trying to make out why Payal asked her to take the baby to Maan Singh Khurana and then she froze in terror.

What she had done to deserve this? Payal loved a treacherous person who used her for his pleasure only to leave her to suffer in this world.

What she must have gone through? How she would have faced all this alone? She should have called us once. We should have done something, I should have done something.

It is not unusual for these rich spoilt men to do these mean things. She decided. Her past encounter with MSK had also ruined his image. The way he had forcefully kissed her, only eliminated the doubt that maybe he was innocent. In her anger, she failed to realize that she had also responded him. But still the fact remained the same that it was he who had forced himself.

"Is Maan Singh Khurana responsible for all this?



@muskan

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Edited by anshra - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Lo g passay passay ho jaoo saaray mein Comment karan aa gayi
sab tu pehlaan sorry aaj da comment tay hoye ga meri Maa boli wich
matlab Punjabi vich
jino samjh aa rahi aye oona ssaryan nu
Burrrah Chak de phtay
tay naalay
G ooye Punjabio
tay baqi saaryan nu meray waloon sorry par comment tay punjabi wich he hoay ga
Aakhir meri apni maa boli aye
ek joke yaad aaya
pehla dost duje nu "oye teri maa boli ki aye
duja dost udasi naal kenda aye "kujh v nai yaar meri maa tay goongi c"
hahahahaha
acha acha pata aye menu Watta joke aye
jaa rahi aan comment walay
menu ek gal tay dasu aye tusi mera talent bardasht kyun nahi karday
na karya karo yaar mein twanu looka nu apna talnet show nai karan gi tay hor kithay jaawan gi
towaday elawa mera IF tay hor kaun aye???
tusi lok e tay mera sab kujh o 😭 😭 😭
mein ki karan gi tohaday bina

ooye bohtay jazbaati na howo
kidan lagi meray dialogue
changay lagay na
ooye juti na maro
acha acha sorry
jaa rahi aan comment karan

ooye Finally Geet Madam di Gaddi shimla chali
Yaar teray di gaddi chaly 140 tay
ballay ballay
acha nai gana ga rahi
na pehchano mera talent nuqsaan tohada e aye
mera ki jaana aye
aye dunia kadi sacha talent nai pehchandi 😭 😭
heheheehe
fair emotional hi gaye
na karya karo yaaro
ooye Geet phone chak le aglay banday ne koi gal v karni hondi aye
incoming free nai tere???
Payal da phone
le shimla nai jaana paya
Kudi aithay he labh gayi
par kida haq????
MSK kithon aa gaya aithay????
kino MSK nal milaana aye???
ooye payal explain tay kar
hello payal bol tay sahi oyee hello hello
lagda aye balance muk gaya aye payal kol
chal Geet payal nu le aaye
o nai ooye
mein tay kaya balance muk gaya hoye ga
aye tay Kudi aapay muk gayi aye
Maaf karna g
mera matlab
Naiii payalll tu menu chad k nahi ja sakdi payal
mein nahi reh sakdi teray beghair
tu ainj nai karsakdi payal
tenu wapis aana hoey ga
tu menu chad k nai jaa sakdi nai
aye lo
mein aithay emotional ho rahi aan tay Geet Madam shock vich nay
Acha Amma di gal sun rahi aye
ooye teri ohi common story
payar vich dhoka
ais li kehnday nein
kudiyo soch samjh k Faisla karya karo
payar vaayar kithay asli reh gaye nay
oo masi aye kaka kyun rakh rahi hein Geet di Jhooli wich????
ooye Geet da halay viah nai hoya
halay ta sirf Kiss hoi aye
nai mera matlab ghooro tay na
tongue of slip hy g
acha aye kaka payal da aye
payar di nishani
ooye par MSK kithon aa gaya aye saaray vich
kitay Aye kaka MSK da tay nai
ho v sakda aye
banda thoda besharam type lagda aye
Pehli mulaqat vich Geet nu kiss
fair kudi de uttay e lam lait ho gaya
banda mashkook lagda aye
acha acha na ghooriyan paoo
mein chup aan
par Geet Zarra ja k MSK nu puch tay sahi
janab g aye kakay da ki chakar aye
zara light tan through karo aiday tay thodi
jaa meri behn puch ja k
coller phar k poochi


ok ok Me now back to myself
I just want to edit this comment in Punjabi my language
so I did it
and for payal I just want to say

Kuch ladkiyan anjaam nazar aatay huvay bhi
jab ghar se niklti hein to socha nahi kartein


nice update loved it
and sorry for the Punjabi
and sorry If I hurt sm1's feeling
sorry again

Edited by PariNain - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Congrats for the new thread. God what just happened? Payal died n she has a child. M sure maan's brother's child. Dev ya Koi aur whom maan knows. Superb update. Please update soon. This time it was very small
Edited by maanmeet1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Eid Mubaarak
Aniee
🤗
Amazing update
😊

I was expecting Maan's connection with Payal somehow
Poor thing she suffered so much🥺
Oh! the baby😭 lost its mother too
So now the game begins😲
Maan vs Geet😳
No engagement please
consider it our Eidi😉

Continue soon
😊
Edited by heytal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
wonderful update this mystry is getting intense with each update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
awesum update di...
thnk u so much for dat...
omg payal wants her baby to have all his rights bt how cum msk can give him dat??
i still can't believe dat msk can responsibl for all dis...
can't wait for nxt...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
Congo for new update.

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing

Geet thinking how to reach
To payal. But Payal only called
Her.

Oh Payal died. Her husband was
Ruthless. She shud have gone back
To her family.
Geet shocked to see the happenings
Around her.

Payal got a child. But y she asked
Geet to give to MSK. Wats the
Connection???

Geet again thinking wrong abt him???

Waiting for more story to unfold.
Loved it. Another twist.

Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
update waqi
dream to nai hy yeh

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