Maaneet ff.INSANE LOVER..thread 2 link pg 1 - Page 50

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Posted: 13 years ago
we love this new plot...tats y we are reading this ff...
please continue soon...
and no need to change the story line...
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Yay superb :-) love u guys :-) will be waiting 4 the update:-)
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Yay!!!! You are going to update and that too with same storyline, Really it's a great newz...
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wow di thank you so much plz update soon
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Yay i'm so excited for the update !
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lovebirdsmaneet


its me that ur cursing here.actually i have some bitter past,while reading insance lover my memories haunted me.so i commented like that but my intensions are not to hurt her.
but she got hurted.
but iam sure she wont stop writing this ff.
try to understand me this is the only thing i can say u.
k i am leaving insancelover its better for me,because my memories keep hunting me while reading.
i am at cliff of pain.sorry guys to hurt valli di.
bye




sorry dear i dont know about ur problem and think u as a basher so write this actully i love valli diii and ruby so much that why i wrote this
not to hurt u sorry dear haaa god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
THANX VALLI FORCONT. THIS FF EAGERLY WAITING PLZZ UPDATE JALDI DE DO
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WAITING DEAR 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
i m very sleepy plzzz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi friends!!!!!!!!! thanks for ur warm love and support u show over us... we both feel really glad..
one request plz stop pming to lovebirdsmaaneet she is sorry to us and we forgive her already...

thanks for being there for us all the while...
PART 9


Geet reached KM , where rano was worried for her.. as she knows maan's temper. she is confused with his behavior towards geet.. so soft and full of love ..so caring n highly patience with her childish behaviour...straight opposite to his original self...but she console herself saying that must be maan's understanding ..her loss of papa because he himself lost his dad and mom in this age.. so maybe he is trying to help geet from gaining back' and he is also helping her to make geet mature because she knows how stubborn geet is but she follows all maan's order' rano lost in her thought when geet hugged her from back and kissed her cheeks

Geet 'mama'.

Rano, saw geet looking happy' she was worried see her crying in morning but now seeing her smiling, rano felt little relax' rano turns and hugged geet' but noticed her holding so many packets in her hand'.

Rano ' gudia what is all this???????

Geet ' mama king brought me all this including this' geet shows her new cell phone'

Rano is now not liking this at all ..its ok with chocolates and teddy but i-phone is beyond her expectation , she was going to scold her, when KM landline phone start ringing' rano picks it .

Rano 'hello'

Maan on other side '

Maan-rano maa.. its me maan..

Rano ' ji puttar ji..

Maan -wo maa I know aap geet k pass wo sab cheezein dekh kar naraj hongi.. I know u will not like it , its against ur self-respect but plz let me do something for geet because of her dadi started responding, n geet was also complaining that i dont call her..this way she can talk to me whenever she wants...n its just my way of thanking her'. And it's a thank u gift not anything else and its usefull to u too.. because she is leaving for hostel in few days n u can remain in her touch always , u dont want to worry about her.. plz maa accept kar lijiye ye gift'

rano hesitates but agreed hearing maan's plead ..he always close her mouth with valuable reasons

but on other side maan is smirking on success of his another plan'

Maan 'thanks maa'.

Maan(st) 'sry maa..i have to do this...i want geet to be in touch with me...i cant be there...but i want her presence with me..

In mansion geet is excitingly showing rano all gift including cell phone along with new games'rano thanked maan for making geet so much happy'. And also for cell phone because buying it is impossible for rano, she kissed geets forehead.. and leave to kitchen leaving geet in living room'.

Geet excitingly run to dadi's room to show her gifts'. Dadi was too worried for geet because after morning when geet went from there,she did not come back even maan did not come because he is busy in manofying his princess'n came only to say that he is leaving for london.. she is waiting for geet to come back' when she saw geet so happy and excited relax a she little '

Geet 'dadi'dadi..dadi... See what king brought me.. a new iphone u know dadi there are so many games too in it' and he even brought me so many chocolates and teddy and many more'

Dadi is listening to geet with so much love and she also feel good to hear that maan brought geet so many things' geet even told her how she was angry with maan and how he manofied her and took her to McDonald's , pizza hut and icecream parlor then atlast airport'

Geet again become chatterbox and talking non stop' at last rano comes to dadi's room with dadi's liquid food and geets food' rano gave dadi's food to nurse and come to geet to feed her.. but to her shock geet refused .

Geet ' no maa.. I'll take it by my own' don't feed me' king ne mana kiya hain na' he said na I m grown up now'. Ill take my food u go and take care of dadi she needs u more na and even king ask u to take care of her.. u should obey kings order'. U go and feed her'

In night again geet sleeps in maan's bedroom while reading her new story book which maan brought for her from London'.again dreaming him as the lead of story..

Maan landed in london airport where his assistant was waiting for him.. with his limo'

Maan ' adi ..have u done what I ask u to do?????????

Aditiya maan's only friend cum secretary he studied with maan in school and college ..he is an orphan ..so maan took care of his study expenses' adi is very loyal towards maan ..he was very gratitude towards maan..he can go to any extent to obey maan's order' in short maan's order is adi's command.. adi knows about maan's past' and also about dev' so he is here , helping him to taking revenge , its true maan did not trust anyone and in this adi also included but sometimes maan takes help of adi'maan knows adi can do anything for him'.

Adi ' ye's sss..ii'r.rrr. ur orders is already done'. Me'i..ne'. wo'dvd ..aarti tak pahucha di hain'Maan smirks and leaves to his apartment' 2 BHK with attached study room in maan's bedroom along with a gym and swimming pool' maan love this place a lot because its a gift from his mom n dad to him' this apartment still had aroma of his parents ..the decor the way his mom did for him.. maan never let anyone touch or change its dcor because he feels his mom warmth in it'.

He come inside the apartment and took out his cell phone containing geet's pics' he sat on the sofa in living room and start caressing geet's pic which is on his cell phone screen'..

Maan ' u know princess this place is very close to me because I still feel my mom and dad here , here I feel my mom's aroma my dad's warmth' my dadi's smile' this place stores all happiness in it... i didnt leave that bostards bad eyes reach this place' but today I want u to make part of it.. I want u to live here with me'..

Maan POV of rano..

Im sry maa'I cant lose ur love'nor I cant live without geet'I know im doing things behind ur back..i don't want u to hate me'n I cant keep distance with geet..she is mine..i know as a mother u have full rights on her..but I acnt see it..i must only have right on her..she will obey my words only..what if u part me knowing our relation..i cant live without her..ill make her stay with me in all ways..though it hurts u..even if u say her to stay away from me..she wil come running to me..i'll make her like that'bcoz she is mine..my life..

After some time whole apartment was filled with geet in between maan's parents pic'. Not a single place remained empty' now he is happy

Maan ' mom dad' look she is ur maan's life.. her name is geet ..my wife..kya hua..u r shocked hearing it. We arent married yet.she is too small to marry now...but from the first sight when i saw her.ive started to think her as my wife...' isnt she beautiful just like an angel' as u always say u want ur bahu the most beautiful girl in this world' bilkul massoom bholi bhali'like u expected.. see bilkul aisi hi hain na meri geet' ye na aapki friend aur rano maa ki beti hain' bolo na maa bolo papa..kaise lagi aapko meri geet'..

Maan :I know u both like her..

He started remembering the first day incident..in that apartment..

he was nearly 14..his family came to London for holidays..his mom blind folded his eyes when they reached the apartment..dadi giggled seeing maans restlessness..

maan-mom where are we going..why r u blind folding my eyes..whats there u r taking me like this?

Maan was nonstop with his questions

They stepped in the lift..

Maan:dad,where are we going.

Dad: if I said there will be no surprise beta..

They reached the apartment..he was given keys n was asked to open..he did still in blind fold..entering it they removed the cloth..he adjusted to the surrounding n looked the house..he was blown by the beauty..all was upto his taste'his likes..his fav colour..every thing had special touch'

Dadi:this is ur present for topping in studies..n the speciality is this decors were done by ur mom..

Mom:how is the surprise champ?

Maan ran here n there..he roamed around n came back to them..he hugged them both

Maan: thank u..its amazing'beautiful.. love u both..

Dadi:muje nehi..

Maan:love u too dadi..he hugged her too..they kissed his forehead..they rested for a while n had their dinner..

At night

His mom was unpacking the things n settling the dresses n other things in wardrobe..

Maan came to her..

Mom ..shall I help you'

No dear..i'll do myself..u take rest..

Mom im getting bored..

Ok..give me the stuffs from luggages I'll arrange..maan did so..he was handling her a jewel box'she took him n sat on bed..she opened it ..

Maan,how is it..

Maan looked at the diamond set with unique design..it looked very beautiful n attractive..

Dad:let me help u wearing it..he took it n weared on her neck..

He kissed her cheeks n said beautiful..

His mom shied..

Ji'aap bhi na..maanke saamne..

So what..let him see..it will be useful for him in future..he will also love his wife like I love u..

She blushed..n maan looked at them admiringly..

Maan,how is it..

So beautiful mom'

This set is heriditory .its given by ur dadi to me'n I'm waiting for the day when I will give this to ur wife..i want best for my champ..ur wife will be beautiful,maasoom dilki..she will be an angel,who will bring more happiness to our house'

Maan blushed

Mom'

Dad:maan.she did not say that she has seen an angel for u n get married now

Dad..u too..

Dadi came there saying

Maan,if u fell in love with any girl,u will say me first even before ur parents..i will say if she is gud for u or not..

Dadi..u also..u all are teasing me..

Maan store ur blush till u get married .lets see that time..

Maan could not stand there teasing anymore ..he ran to living room n watch tv..all three giggled behind his back'

Maans eyes misted remembering there past..

Maan:ive found my love,but u both are not here to share my happiness..

He gritted his teeth n his eyes turned red in anger..

Maan:its all becoz of that dev..

He went to his gym..in mid he has placed devs photo..he took the darts n started to threw on it..

Maan:u took my parents'dart

U took away my childhood'.dart..

U took away my innocence..dart'

U took away my happiness'dart..

U made my dadi bed ridden'dart'

U made me arrogant..dart'

U made me cunning'dart..

U made me selfish..dart..

U made me lose trust in all..dart..

U made me crave for love..dart'

U made me a devil..dart..

He started to laugh madly'

N stopped suddenly..

Now the devil will ruin u..u will live ur life a living hell daily..i will make u suffer..har ek din tum pachtoagi..u will pay for ur sins'

Dart'he threw it in full force'

The photo broke down into pieces..

This is what u will be atlast'

Maan started to do his work outs vigorously..he was waiting for the news'which can calm him..every minute was looking like a millinium to him..



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Edited by ruvalmaaneet - 13 years ago

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