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Posted: 12 years ago
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CONTINUED FROM PAGE 21



Dadi was known by boys side so even she went to the wedding... Dadi insisted Maan to come but he refused...

Dadi noticed Geet there and got attracted to her... She decided that she will make her daughter in law...

Dadi inquires everything about Geet from her chachi... Even rano met dadi... Rano told dadi about Geet's past...

But dadi said that it is past And she has full right to have a better future... Rano was more then happy for that...

The most difficult task before Rano and dadi was to convince Geet and Maan...

Rano: Geet you have got a very lovely proposal beta...

Geet: Ma I have told you that I don't want to get marry... Then why are you doing this...

Rano: theek hai Geet... Then I will end my life and you leave aaram se...

Pinky : Aunty... What are you saying????

Geet: Maa... You know very well I cannot see anything happening to you...

Rano: Please meet him once for my sake...

Geet looks at Pinky and Pinky nods her head...

Geet: ok I will meet him...

Rano hugs and goes to call dadi...

Geet: Pinky I will meet him and say him to say no...

Pinky: Geet...

Geet: Pinky please at least you try to understand...

On the other side...

Dadi become every happy hearing that chutki has agreed to meet...

Dadi calls Adi to come home...

Dadi: I have found a girl for Maan... I am sure he will like her... Now we have to convince him...

Adi: But Dadi you know he loves Geet and won't agree to meet... By the way what is her name...

Dadi: Her name is chutki...

Adi: Chutki... What type of name is it...

Dadi: Ha this is the name everyone called her with... Wait I will show you her photo... I liked her so much that I bought her photo...

Dadi shows her photo... Adi's eyes pop up...

Dadi noticed that and asked Adi: Adi'. What happen????

Adi: Dadi you have chosen her for Maan''.. Her name is Chutki

Dadi: Yes'' Why??? You know her'''

Adi: Of course''.. She is Geet'''. But she loves someone right'..

Dadi: Oh ho'. So she is Geet'''. No she just said that she does not want to marry anyone but her mother convinced her to atleast meet a boy'..

Adi: So whatever Maan saw that day was not true'.. Kahi aisa to nahi ki Geet also loves Maan and that is the reason she does not want to get marry with anyone'''

Dadi: May be''.. But now we will do something''.. Anyways Chutki and her mom and her best friend are coming to Mumbai today evening'.. And ha Maan should not know that the girl is non other then Geet''..

Adi told Maan that Dadi has chosen a girl for him and she wants him to meet her once''.. Ai also said that now that Geet has gone back he should atleast think of Dadi'''. He should at least meet the girl once'. Maan after much saying agreed to meet unaware of whom he will meet but had decided that he will ask her to say no''..

Geet came to the mansion with Rano and Pinky unaware that she will be meeting Maan'''.

Dadi welcome them whole heartedly'''.

Without asking any detail''' Dadi came directly to the point as she wanted to know what is there in the heart of Geet''..

Dadi: Chutki can I ask you something'''.

Geet just nodded her head'''

Dadi: I want you to make you my daughter in law''.. Because I know that you will feel my grandson heart with love'''. I want to know are you ready for it or do you love someone''..

Geet looked at her shocked don't know what to answer''..

Dadi: Bolo beta''..

Geet: Ji who'' No I don't love anyone'''

Pinky: Geet kya keh rahi hai''.. You have such a good opportunity to deny it and you are saying you have no problem'''.

Geet: Pinky I am ready for this marriage'''

Dadi: So you don't love anyone''.. I am so happy to have you as my daughter in law''..

Dadi hugged her and winked at Rano and Pinky and called Adi with her eyes who was hiding behind the pillar''.. Geet eyes were filled up''..

They both broke from the hug with a voice'''

Adi: Geet'. You don't love Maan'''

Geet was shocked to see Adi there: Adi'..

Adi: Bolo Geet'' You don't love Maan''.. He kept on saying this finally

Geet spoke: Yes I do love Maan and will keep on loving him but he has every right to move on in his life''.. Geet turns to Dadi and says: Sorry dadi I lied to you''.. I could not deny my mom''.. But believe me I will try my level best'''

Dadi: You don't have to do that beta''..

Geet: No Dadi'. Please I am sorry''

Dadi: Beta listen to me''.. You don't want to know who my grandson is'''

Rano, Pinky, Dadi and Adi: Mr Maan Singh Khurana'''.

Geet: Maan''..

Dadi: Ji and Dadi told everything what happened when she showed her picture to Adi and then how she called up Rano and Pinky and told her everything and they made a plan to take out from your heart that you also love Maan as he does'' Pinky had already told us that you are also in love with Maan but we wanted to hear it from your mouth so this whole drama''

Geet gets all shy and Dadi just hugs her''..

Geet: But Maan''

Dadi: Now you have tell Maan this''.. He is not aware that the girl chosen for him is none other then you'''

Geet: Hmmm''' I have a plan'''

Adi called Maan: Yaar Maan you come directly to our farmhouse'..

Maan: You know very well that I have stopped going there'''

Dadi snatched the phone from Adi: Maan beta I have told Adi to tell you to come to farmhouse now'.. It is something urgent''..

Maan cannot deny his Dadi's order so he just said yes''' The memories of 4 years back flashed in his mind'''

Adi: Geet I will drop you'' It is raining very heavily'''.

Geet: No Adi I will go and because of this rain only we had met and because of this rain only we will meet again''

Geet left from the mansion immediately''' The rain was the same as it was on that day''..

Maan reached the farmhouse and saw someone sitting at the same place where 4 years back Geet was sitting all wet'''.

Maan went near her'''. He was shocked to see Geet sitting'''.

Maan: Geet, tum yaha''..

Geet: I forgot my way'.. Can you give a shelter for tonight''

Maan just nodded'' But''.. He did know what to say and just kept on looking at the angelic face''' He broke out of the trance by his phone ringing''

Maan: Ji Dadi'.. I have reached the farm house'''

Dadi: Then why are you standing outside'' Why don't you take my Bahu inside''.. Why are you making her stand in the rain''' If anything happens to her I wont spare you''

Maan: Bahu''..

Dadi: Ha the one whom you are staring at'..

Geet was all shy by now as she was aware what dadi must have told Maan''..

Maan just gave a smirk smile on his face and said: I will take care of your Bahu very well Dadi don't worry''

Maan after cutting the call kept on looking at Geet who was fully flushed with the intense gaze''..

Maan: So my Dadi's Bahu''.. But I need to tell you something that I love someone else''..

Geet looked at him with shock and tears gathered in her eyes: Whom???

Maan: I had met her 4 years back at the same place where we are standing now and we shared a most beautiful moment that night and from that night I just could not forget her''' I love her a lot'''..

Geet: Maan''..

Maan: Hmm''' So with this also you are ready to marry me''

Geet just nods and hugs him tight''..

Maan: I love you Geet''' I love you'' Why did you leave me''

Geet: I am sorry Maan'.. I am sorry'''.

They kept on hugging each other with no space among them'..

Maan: Geet you don't want to say anything'..

Geet innocently: What???

Maan: acha what wait'''

He started tickling her'.. and she ran in the rain and Maan went behind her and hold her and they both lost their balance and fall on the ground and Maan was on top of Geet and was tickling more saying now where will she run'''

Geet: Maan stop it'.. Maan'' please'..

Maan: Then those words'''

Geet just nodded no''..

Maan: theek hai'' He started again but this time his hand was roaming everywhere''' and was nuzzling her neck more passionately''.. Geet could not take it she hugged him close and whispered I Love you Maan''

Maan just looked at her and gave a peck on her lips and that small peck turned into a passionate kiss and in turn it turned into the hot night''

They became one forever'''.










This is the last part of the OS... I hope I am able to write upto your expectation... Please press like and do Comment... I will be waiting for your response




Edited by ana1411 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
yeppieee ... mee first at this beautiful story ...
Edited by maansee - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
second too ...

meri aadat hai .to rserve all places for my self 😉
Edited by maansee - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
how can i leave the moka not to reserve the third place...😃
Edited by maansee - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
beautifully written 😃
Edited by maansee - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
maneet became one it please epilogue bhi dedooo



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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Lovely part...
want epilogue...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
wow sweet cutii os
lvd it..

true lv always win...😆😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
its superb.
loved every bit of it.
ek epilogue toh banta hai ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
awwwn sweet yaar.. they met wat a coincidence.. nice os yaar

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