This is "Musical Magic with Empty Words..."
Mentioned it in my comment on pg 38 of How I had wanted to appreciate with this for chapter 104..here it is ..My sketch
Thank you for your help world of dreams š*****************************************************************************************
Hmm...this is going to b long Im sure! so beware and read when u have time...
After reading Geet's POV of ch 105.. I was like haawww U are backtracking! its not really the actual present but the virtual one!! I dunno I was just happy to see "Just Maan" with and without all his flaws!..it felt like I could touch your words to feel him human..
Then came 106:
My character is so
complex that by the time people get through my layers they forget what they
read about me in the first chapter.
ch 107
Geet, listen to me. I may not be able to talk to you
much. But I am always with you. And I want you to do something. You can take help
from whoever you need."
I don't have time. She will start looking for me. Just
do as I have said."
ch108/109
"I want to be yours. More than anything. But
not at the moment. Will you wait for me?"
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The above are few lines from each of the updates,that held me to think again..and to read in between the lines..I couldn't help it but become the curious case of a detective like so many of us hereš
and I did the obvious,I went to your first chapter! because like Maan had said..I had forgotten what I had first read about him!
This is what I found:
first and small eyeš to detail I picked up on was..u said Maan could not be bamboozled with technicalities (jargon) coz he knew everything there was to it..but ended that para with "tech division is headed by senior architect Sasha" ...it made me think why did u mention Sasha when describing his character trait (I mean u used Adi too but Sasha's intro was jus so linked with Maan's depth of intelligence!.. ..food for thought! I thoughtš
But the nuclear bombā¢ļø was this:
"For him time was money. Maan Singh Khurana's life was money"
U know how that one line changes everything for me na! that entire perspective of Maan in ch 107!
The lines I quoted above from each of your updates just highlight the importance of time in everything that is happening...
but in spite of all the Jalebi things that I linked above, I have no assumptions nor guesses to make of what may happen or actually what has happened...yes I have many thoughts linking things together in my mind but ...I don't want to spoil my own fun..heheeš³ even if I'm 360degree upside-down nd wrong!
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..I trust you to take my breath away with your "contemporary" flare of reasoningšā¤ļø and so I will wait with this one belief which is same as Maan's:
Destroying Sasha will be the gift of love Geet will give "To Sir,With Love"
PS: just one last note...when Maan confessed his love to Geet.. the colour in my cheeks roseš³ ...No, not because of blush or butterflies but just pure ecstasy those simple words held ...sooo in tuned with their character...
Loving it and Thank you once againš³š³
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Edited by mishtimohabbat - 13 years ago
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