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Posted: 13 years ago
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congs 4 new thread is that sam
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome teaser😊 but quite mysterious😲 i am guessing that sameera is just pretending to be mentally unstable and just wants to get maan for herself😡

continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part-20




Vedanta who was sobbing like anything who fell asleep in her arms…. She mad her way to vedanta's room and lay him down on his bed… she herself too the place beside him patted his chest , after a while he was taking his normal breath and he was sleeping calmly… she stood up and nany thanked her…. Geet smiled in return and told her not to tell about this whole scene to maan… she became confuse and then gave up, told her that she won't tell anything to maan.. after all what it takes matter to her…. She is only care taker of this child….

It was the day after a week, geet and Vedanta mingled with each other very much, Vedanta starts loving geet like a mother and geet also loves him like her own child…. Maan also met with Vedanta but in morning and at night when he came from his office…. Maan still doesn't know anything about geet and vedanta's relationship with geet…..

Mumbai

Tej was upset, sitting on his bed and was his deep thinking mode…. But the sadness on his face…. Tanya was observing him and looking at him… she never saw him upset like this…. She went near him..

Tanya-what happened tej? Why are you looking so upset? She asked from him holding him by his shoulder.. tej sighed and looked at his wife..

Tej-nothing actually missing my gudiya very much…..

Tanya-aaj achaanka, kya hua bahut pareshaan lag rahe ho? Geet se kuch baat huyi kya?

Tej-nahi bas aise hi, pata nahi kyo ek ajeeb sa darr lag raha hai….

Tanya-to isme kya hai… call her…. She took his phone for dialing geet's number but his cell buzzed and geet's name flashed on the screen…… Tanya smiled widely and looked at tej….

Tanya-dekha, geet ko yaad kiya aur uska call aa gaya…. She immediately picked her call…

Tanya-hello geet, kaisi hai tu? You know what just abhi we are missing you much and you called us…

Geet-I am fine bhabhi aur ghar me sab kaise hai?

Tanya-yaha sab ache hai, aur waha tere hubby ka kya haal chaal hai? She asked from her in teasing manner but color faded of geet's face hearing maan's name…. how can she tell to her about maan… she kept quiet for a moment…

Geet-yaha sab theek hai bhabhi, papa kaise hai?

Just then tej snatched cell from Tanya….

Tej-kaisi hai tu? He asked in his worried tone…

Geet-mai theek hu bro aur aap?

Tej-kya hua tujhe? Why are you sounding so low? Sab theek hai na waha par? He became worried suddenly hearing her low voice, he never imagine his geet like this.. she was bubbly and today she is sounding so low…..

Geet-everything is fine bro, wo bas missing you all…. Bahut yaad aa rahi hai aap sab ki… she sobbed a little….

Tej-arey-arey…. You are crying like a child… chup ho ja… mai aata hu na tujhse milne, stop crying…. She put the call on speaker mode…

Tanya-baby, what happened?

Geet-nothing bhabhi…. Bas aap sab ki yaad aa rahi hai subah se….

Tanya-ho hi nahi sakta… maan ke hote huye tu hamein miss kare…. Naah….. tej silent her because he knew how much sensitive his little sister….

Tej-tu itna hi miss kar rahi hai to aaja na milne, ya phir hum aate hai waha par….

Geet-no bro, I'll come there on my birthday,

Tej-but tera birthday mein to 6 months hai….

Geet-wo actually I am going to join MBA, bas isiliye aapko call kiya tha….

Tej-wow… that's a great news…. Kabse join kar rahi hai?

Geet-not now, wo actually I needed my degree and certificates for the admission form…. To can you please fax me my documents…?

Tej-of course.. just give me fax no. I'll fax you….

Geet-thanks bro… she told him KM's fax machine number and he noted down…

Tej-achha tell me which college or university?

Geet-wo, I am trying in AMITY or SHARDA UNIVESITY, which one is better?

Tej-these are very good university.. I think both are in GREATER NOIDA na?

Geet-ji bro…

Tej-dono me try kar le, dono hi best hai….

Geet-okay bro, achha now I have to go…. Annie is calling me….

Tanya-ok bye sweety…. And take care aur haa wapas aise rona mat…. Samjhi..

Geet-ji bhabhi….

Tej-will miss you so much…. Take care… love you

Geet-love you too bro and bhabhi….. bye and they hung up the call…. Geet cried more missing her family so much, crying for telling them lie…. She knew if they came to know about maan then they will take her with them back in Mumbai and she doesn't want to go… she is happy here…. Just then annie came there holding her documents and geet wiped her tears at once….

Annie-bhabhi, don't hide your tears from me, I know you are missing you family…. But am I not your family? She asked from geet making baby face and geet smiled at her antics…. She pulled her cheeks and hugged her …. Crying endlessly missing her bhabhi's warmth…..

After some time, geet and annie were surfing net and collecting the info about MBA in both universities…. Just then Vedanta came after finishing his home work and stood near them, looking at both of them trying to understand what they are doing…. Both looked at Vedanta and then again engrossed in their laptop screen…..

Vedanta-mom, what are you doing?

Geet-ved, mom is filling her college form….

Vedanta-what is college? He asked in confusion…geet smiled at him..she ruffled his hairs..

Geet-like school….

Vedanta-sachi, you will also goto school….?

Geet-haan my baby….

Vedanta-then you will also do homework like me? Annie came and took him in her arms…

Annie-haan ved mama will also do homework like you did…. Okay…. Now go and show me your school book…. Vedanta ran and then annie helped her in printing the papers and filling the online form and kept a copy with them….

Again a month passed and geet did her preparation for the MBA entrance test though it was not government university but they took a test before the admission… she did work very hard for taking the admission in SHARDA UNIVERSITY, now the day came for her exam and she did it…. The result will come after a week , till then she have to complete her other work…. In this month Vedanta turned to 4…. Maan went to Bangalore for his business trip though he doesn't want to go but office needed him… it was the deal for some fashion show in Bangalore and they want clothing from his company,,, KM TEXTILES is one of from the best companies in India….. maan has his other companies in different fields and KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS is also 1 of from them…. Maan did charity a lot and he has many branches of his companies in other states… and some are out of India…

Maan loves Vedanta a lot but he met with him a little means he is not able to give his much time to him…. one side his tension towards sameera then office, hospitals and home… he couldn't able find time for himself…..client meetings in his 2-3 offices in Delhi and site visiting…. But still he managed his temper as everyone knew he is short tempered person and lost his temper very easily…. But between in these works he never forget to drop Vedanta to school and checked his books in morning…. He daily got up early in the morning around 6 am, did his exercise and get ready… geet also wakes up early in the morning and made Vedanta ready for his school and went in kitchen for making breakfast but never came in front of maan…. She also told to Vedanta that never talk anything about her in front of maan and he is very intelligent boy, he agreed….

It was the day again sameera got an attack and threw everything on the floor, nurses try very hard for controlling her but at last they landed to injecting her and then she went in deep sleep….

Maan was in bangalore so this time geet enjoyed her time with Vedanta.. full time with him, roaming everywhere in KM without nay tension though she knew maan didn't came at home in day time….she never try to visit out house because dadi denied her….

After 2 days the girl is sleeping and she felt the vibration of her cell… she opened her eyes and looked here and there if anyone is here or not…. She felt relax not finding anyone near her… she at once took the call and whispered….

Person1-hello lady…. He spoke to her via phone with his most killing attitude….

Person2- finally….. thank god you have called me…. Where were you from past so many days?

Person1-sweety…. Just relax…. Calm down…. Now tell me what's the problem?

Person2-ohh dam with your relax…. Here everyone is getting my nerve and you are telling me to calm down….

Person1-OMG my lady hitler…. You are so angry…. Take a chill pill babes….

Person2- don't made me lose my patience , come here fast and tell me where are we heading?

Person1- oopss sweets… I can't be there till 2 months….

Person2-what…? Means I am stuck here for another 2 months more… do something fast…..i want him at any cost otherwise you know what will be the consequence…

Person1-oops, you turned to your angry mode… sorry babes…. Just wait a little more… I have something… will tell you later… right now, do the same thing which you are pretending….

Person2-okay…. And they hung up the call…………..

Precap

Again new entries….

First of all very sorry for the late update… but there was a reason behind it…. I was not able to update it in MONDAY & TUESDAY because lappy was not with me…. Now come to the story….. as you know I was talking about the twist & new entry from so many days and now it came… this was the twist n the story…. You will came to know about the person later in coming parts….and don't worry there will be lots of maaneet moments and may be it will start after 2 updates and rest about sameera, she will be out in coming updates... and there will be small-2 leaps in this story...and i have typed it in such a hurry so if there is any mistake so pls ignore it...

love ya

neha




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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow lovely update...my geet , how is was in her house like cute little princess but in her laws she changed to her dil, a woman...thats te power of womens...te bonding between my geet and veda and annie was lovely dear...i loved te update so much...that sameera is acting , i will kill her...my maan u idiot, buddhu , ur saying ur king of business, but u cant recognizes te culprits...now atleast u cum out of that shell and see ur angel is waiting for u...waiting dear for next monday...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Loved the relation b/w ved and geet..
he calls her mom...!
convo b/w geet and tej was so touching..
waiting to noe about the real intention of sam...
Morethan that waiting for maneet moments..

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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
I think this girl is sameera... Awesome update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Geet bcm so matured.
Is Sam acting, planning 2 do sm evil wrk?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i think sameera is pretending to b abnormal...n geet will disclose d truth...plz some maan n geet moments...woh bhi romantic...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it...


thank u sooo much fr such lovely update...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hmmm... interesting update...

aweee... GEET missing her family... cant even tell them the truth... 😔
vedantha n GEET ame close... nice...😊
MAAN ko kab oatachalega GEET ke baare me??? vo GEET ko milne ki koshish bi nahi ki... vus letter ke baad???? why????
n this person... who is this now??? so much suspence ... clarify soon...
want MAANEET moments... n sameera out!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
awsem update geet missing her family love there phone conversation and geet vedant bonding i am 100% sure this is sameera is acting to be in shock



Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago

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