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monika

@monikaseth

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Posted: 13 years ago

#851

wow awesome both talk i am happy both right at their place loved it mind blowing

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maansee

@maansee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#852

the last line .. hi zabardasti utha kar le jaoogaa. to le chal na maan ...

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amrutavjoshi

@amrutavjoshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#853

Superb Update...

Conversation between them was superb...

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Cynthia

@CiaMaaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#854

Lvd d updt... N 4 updatng!!!

I can vry well undrstnd hw u manage 2 gv updts in ur busy schedule!!!

I lv d way dey showd maturity in each odrs talks...

Sad 2 knw dat Geet is completely insecure abt deir relation...

But must say 'No Pain No Gain' specially 2 Maan...

Toh thode papad bel hi lo 2 woo ur lvly Wifey...

'Aap aise kyon puch rahe hain. We are not strangers. Dost toh hum ab bhi hain. ' I seriously lv Geet bcoz of dis... She jst minimisd d air of anxiety der...

'Woh aapke kapde gile hain. Thand lag jayegi aapko. Yeh Rahul ki tracks aur shirt ahi. Aap change kar lijiye. ' Itna sab hone k baad, d care n concern she gvs aise toh Maan kii kya kisi ki b aankhein nam ho jayegi...

'Itni fikar mat karo Geet. Mein tumhein zabardasti utha ke lajaoonga. ' Dis line made me get up n dance on my bed...

Imagine GC sayng dis line...

I want Maan 2 woo Geet but also Hope k Geet jaldi uske saath chali b jaaye...

W8ng 4 updt in new thrd...

Edited by CiaMaaneet - 13 years ago

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#855

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing
Maan n Geet talk.
Loved that.
Both are sorry.
Maan amazed by Geet saying sorry n her explanation.
Maan explains his pov. He tries to remove all
Doubts in their marriage. He asks her to never let go
N be by his Side.

Geet has asked for time. Now lets see wat happens.

Continue soon.

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Cyberlife

@Cyberlife

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#856

Hai Mai Marjawah! This last chapter 39 had everything and more that I had hoped for!!!!

Maan finally realizes that he needs to open up and share his feelings and thoughts with Geet; he needs to tell her the depth of his love through words and actions; he needs to work hard at repairing all the damage that he has done so that he can win back the trust of his incredible, generous, loving/caring wife..

Loved the way he explained his transformation; the mature manner in which he accepted the reactions of his in laws.

The deep love and care that each of them feels for the other was captured so beautifully especially in the final paras when they talk about Maan having got wet in the rain.

SO EAGERLY waiting to see all the creative, hatke, memorable ways apunka MSK is going to woo his dear biwi Wish, there were daily updates instead of only once or twice a week! I know it is selfish on my part but kya karein, it's your fault for creating this level of anticipation with your writing skills.

Edited by Cyberlife - 13 years ago