OS-MG-LIFE SAVER Updated epilogue, Aug 11th pg: 64 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice part..interesting..waiting for next part..


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PART 2:

Lucknow:

At breakfast table:

Mrs. Sharma: Geet, when is your date of joining?


Geet: Mom, it's on coming Monday. I have to start on Saturday so that I can settle on Sunday and will join on Monday.


Mr.sharma: ok geet. Then pack all your necessary things. Have you informed your friend?


Geet: Ya dad. I have informed annie. There is no problem, she has a separate apartment in delhi. We both can share.


Mr.sharma: ok then make all the arrangements.


Geet reached Delhi on Saturday to join her office. She shared the apartment with her best friend Pinky.


Monday morning

Geet was getting ready as she was worried of being late for work as it is already time. Geet and Pinky planned to reach office by bus because Pinky's car went for service. Here Maan was busy getting ready for his office as client meeting was fixed at 9 am.


A man in phone: Is everything ready?


Driver: Yes, everything is ready. I am sure that bodyguards car will stop in the midway and we can execute the plan.


Man: Good, I don't want any mistakes this time.


Driver: we won't.


This driver was newly appointed because maan trust worthy driver, nakul was admitted in the hospital due to some health problem.


Maan and his bodyguards car started from the KM . maan's driver noticed that his bodyguards car is lacking behind so he ex ecuted the plan. Meanwhile Geet and Pinky was waiting to cross the read. Driver stopped the car and acted as if car stopped due to some problem.


Maan: What happened?


Driver: Sir, I don't know . car stopped due to some problem. Let me check.


Maan: Check faster . I have an important meeting at 9.


Driver: Sure sir.


Driver pretended to do something in the front bonnet. As it was taking time maan stepped outside the car with full anger.


Maan: Cant you check the car before taking it? Stupid. I have an important meeting and you are standing like this.


Driver: Sorry sir, I checked before. I don't know what's the problem and how much time it will take.


Maan: Damn with your reasoms. But where is the bodyguards car. I didn't find then either.


Driver: Sir, I think they are stuck somewhere in this traffic jam.


Maan gave an angry glance to him.


Maan(ST) : Ok I don't think I can wait for another car to come here. It's better to think of other alternative. While thinking he got a call from Adi.


Maan was speaking to adi while standing across the road where geet was crossing. Has he was busy speaking he didn't notice a truck coming towards him but geet noticed a truck coming towards maan in a high speed. He immediately pushed maan to other side where both maan and geet fell. Both are lose in each other's eyes, they felt some form of connection towards each other.


Suddenly maan and geet came to their sense and they got up


Maan: Sorry, I didn't notice a truck coming through.


Geet: How could you sir because you are busy with your phone. Hello Mr pls have a eye on ur surrounding when you're busy with ur girlfriend. Life is not that easy to get it back.


Maan: Hello.. mind ur words mam. Do you know who am i?


Pinky came for geet's rescue.


Pinky: Geet are you ok...


Geet: ya Pinky. I am fine.


Geet looked at her watch without giving any glance to maan , she hurried to her office as it was getting late... seeing geet moving maan also hurried to her office as it was getting late for his meeting. Seeing all this from the distance, driver thought his plan failed so he escaped from the place before anyone see's him.


Maan didn't say about this accident to anyone but his dad, has a doubt regarding maan's driver leaving without any information and his bodyguards car being stoped in the mid way. So he thought of doing something...

After 1 month:

In KM: In phone

Vicky: Hi maan... How are you dude?


Maan: I am fine. First say me when are you coming...


Vicky: Tomorrow maan. I have arranged for an get to gather party in our regular cafe shop.


Maan: Tomorrow. ok then at what time.


Vicky: At 4 in the evening. I have keep it on Sunday so that it will be comfortable for all of them.


Maan(ST): how to get rid of the bodyguards?


Maan: ok Vicky no probs... I will be there...


Vicky: ok then. Meet you tomorrow.


Maan: Ya sure. Bye.


Vicky: Bye.


Mean while geet and picky was planning what to do tomorrow as it is a Sunday.


Pinky: Geet, what can we do tomorrow.


Geet: Ya pinky. I was also thinking the same.


Pinky: can we go for shopping tomorrow.


Geet: ok then. I also want to buy some stuff. So shopping tomorrow.


Pinky: ok...(they gave high five to each other and laughed)

SUNDAY:


Maan was getting ready to meet his friends. He doesn't want to say to his parents that he don't want bodyguards today because he know they wont agree especially his dad. So he just greeted his parents and said he is going out to meet his friends. They too agreed. maan came to his car where his bodyguard and his driver was waiting for him.


Maan: I don't want any driver and bodyguards today


Bodyguard: Sorry sir, as per instructions , we can't leave you alone.


Maan: Do want I say. I don't want any questions alright.


Bodyguard: But sir..


Maan gave a angry glance to them. They at once sopped talking.


Maan: I will inform dad about it. Ok. Now you all can leave.


Bodyguards: ok sir.


Maan decided to inform his dad as soon as he reached caf so that it will take some time for them to reach him and also he can also spend some time with his friends but maan is unaware of the plan who is waiting for an opportunity to kill him. Maan came to caf shop , when he tried reaching his dad he came to know that he kept his cell phone in KM.


Mean while Mr. Khurana came to get some fresh air. He was shocked to see the bodyguards standing outside without maan. He immediately rushed to the spot.


Mr. Khurana: What the hellare you doing here? Where is maan?


Bodyguard: Sir, maan sir went alone. We tried our level best but...


Mr. Khurana: I know this sort of things will happen. Wait let me cal maan first.


He tried his cell phone but it was ringing continually. so he called someone in his phone.


Mr. Khurana: I want to know where maan is. Trance him now.


Man: Sure sir. I will cal you right away.


Maan's dad knows that something of this sort will happen so he has already fixed tracking device in maan's cell phone, his pen and his car.


Mr. Khurana: Do you trance him.


Man: Yes sir. His cellphone is in KM, his pen and his car is in XYZ caf shop.


Mr. Khurana: Thank you very much.


Mr. Khurana and maan's bodyguards straight away headed towards the caf shop.


Precap: Geet saving maan again but unknowingly...

Maan and geet meeting in maan's office.


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part 3:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3081733/os-mg-life-saver-updated-epilogue-aug-11th-pg-64?pn=15

Edited by sweetysaran - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOVED IT
i love this whole idea of Geet being Maan's savior !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Both parts are nice 😛

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