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Posted: 13 years ago



Part 5:


Thanks for all ur comments and likes. I replied to all. Pls do check if needed. Here is the part 5. Pardon me with my mistakes. Pls do enjoy.


The days went on; the project work was almost done. The final blue print and the tender quotation were also ready.


Maan: Geet ... get ready with all the details and files that have to be given to the tender office. I don't want any mistakes.


Geet: ok sir, I am done with all the work. I have little work to do with these... that will be done within 5 mins...


At that time, maan phone rang...


Maan: Ya... what..I will be there within 10 mints... (He kept his phone)


Geet: Is everything alright sir...


Maan: Geet...There is some problem in one of the sites. So I am going there. Be careful with all the details. At any cost, we have to get this project.


Geet: You carry on sir, I will take care.


Saying so, he left the cabin. Geet took all the printouts and was checking the final details at that time one of the employee, Sekar entered Geet's cabin.


Sekar: Geet, call for you...


Geet: For me...


Sekar: Yes, she said her name is Pinky...


Geet: ok I will go and check.


Geet left her cabin to attend that phone.


In phone:


Geet: Hello...


Pinky: Geet it's me... I will be late this evening as I have some work in office. So I thought of informing you.


Geet: You would have called my cell right...


Pinky: For that you have to switch on ur cell phone dear...


Geet: Sorry pinky... you know right I will switch off my mobile, when I am in some important work...


Pinky: It's ok... bye.. See you tonite...


Geet: ok bye...


When geet is out, Sekar went and looked all the files to know about the price quoted for the project. He quickly took print out of the necessary details regarding price quotation and left the cabin.



TENDER OFFICE: NEXT DAY


Maan and Geet entered the tender office.


Maan: Geet, did you checked all the details finally...


Geet with smile: Sir, pls don't worry everything is ready...


While they were going, a person came blocking their way.


Maan: Oh.. Mr kapoor..


Mr. Kapoor (with evil smile): Hi Mr. Khurana... How are you? Hope everything is set for the project.


Maan: Thanks for your concern Mr. Kapoor.


Mr. Kapoor: Do you know one Mr. Khurana... I am going to get this project.


Maan: Oh.. Is that so.. Let's see who is going to win and who is going to loss..


Mr. Kapoor: Before you see who is going to win or loss, see this...


He showed the price quotation papers of Maan's project. Maan and Geet were shocked. Before Maan could see it finally, he snatched the papers from him. Maan face turned red due to anger.


Maan(st): How can this happen.. That too in my company... only I and Geet know about the information... I don't think Geet will do such a cheap work.. In fact she worked so hard to complete this project.. How can this happen...


But Geet here didn't show any expression on her face. She was cool and calm. Seeing Geet face Maan was so confused. Before he could say further the announcement for the tender was made. So all went inside the auditorium.

Tender officer: Good morning to one and all present here. I am here to announce the company which is been selected by taking into account the tender price and other project details...


The highway and future modern airport project goes to... Khurana Constructions...


And there was a hugh applause in the auditorium. Everyone in the hall wished Maan for his success but Mr. Kapoor was in shock, seeing his confusion and shocked face Geet was having a good time.


Mr. Kapoor: How can this happen?


Geet: oh...I can explain that...


Maan was surprised and saw geet..


Geet: Actually Mr. Kapoor... Adi sir told me about the competition and rivalry Maan sir has for his project on the very first day of my office and he also told me to be careful with all the details...so I thought of taking out a print out with wrong quotation price and keep it in Maan's sir cabin . I took the originals with me to my house so that I can take print outs in my house for safety. I guess it worked.


Maan gave a smile to Geet and approached towards Mr. Kapoor.


Maan: I think you can use ur time usefully in your business instead of thinking how to make me fall. It will surely make some money for you...


Mr. Kapoor got angry with that and went outside with his assistant.



Outside tender office:


Mr. Kapoor with anger: why? How can this happen?


Man: Sir, I think I know that girl who was speaking to you. I have seen her somewhere... just give me two minutes.. let me think and say... I got it sir., she was the one who saved maan when we planned for that road accident.


Mr. Kapoor: Oh.. she is helping Maan. I want to know each and every details of that girl..I will show her what she has to face when she goes against me. She will have to pay for my loss. I want her to be dead. At least do that correctly.


Man: Ok sir. We will.



Precap: Geet in danger😲hmm...may be accident😲


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part 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3081733/os-mg-life-saver-updated-epilogue-aug-11th-pg-64?pn=37

Edited by sweetysaran - 13 years ago
mansi.tripathi thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...
Geet saved the project...
Ohno Geet in danger
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update.
geet is way too cleaver.
love it.
precep sounds scary.
do continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Literally life saver yaar. Thank God...mmm ...actually thanx to you that you made Geet so smart to save Our Maan. Loved the update. Thanx for the PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update .
now Maan will save Geet 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
Maan and geet got the tender
Geet is very smart and passed on the wrong quotation to rivals
maan impressed with geet
precap shocking ...geet's accident
please update soon and thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part.
I loved it.
So Mr.Kapoor is behind all things hpnd wid maan.
Precap is scary.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Geet is so smart ! :D
Mr Kapoor 😡
i'm scared for the precap
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 5
nice part...
glad Maan trusts Geet...
wow...
oh ho Geet is in danger...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Geet is smart...but now in danger...hope this time Maan becomes a life saver

awesome update...

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