OS-MG-LIFE SAVER Updated epilogue, Aug 11th pg: 64 - Page 13

Created

Last reply

Replies

382

Views

63.8k

Users

45

Likes

1k

Frequent Posters

sweetysaran thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago


Thank you very much dear...
ritzy09 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update Sweety...
first of all sorry for alte comments. i just caught up with all parts and wow...just amazing
I like the tinge of mystery, action, humor and romance you brought in. For me it was like full paisa wasool update and FF...it is very interesting show she has become his life saver in every sense
Just awesome and eagerly waiting for next part
sweetysaran thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutheAjay

That was a very nice update...


Eagerly waiting for next one!!



Thank you very much dear...
will update soon... may be tomorrow...
sweetysaran thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 3
nice part...
so Maan feels its coz of Geet hes being saved everytime...
cont soon dear...



Thank you very much dear...
will update soon... may be tomorrow...
sweetysaran thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

loved the update Sweety...

first of all sorry for alte comments. i just caught up with all parts and wow...just amazing
I like the tinge of mystery, action, humor and romance you brought in. For me it was like full paisa wasool update and FF...it is very interesting show she has become his life saver in every sense
Just awesome and eagerly waiting for next part




Thank you very much di...
Its ok... it means a lot to me... i know your held up in work...
i am glad you liked my story...
will update soon... may be tomorrow...
sweetysaran thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago


Part 4


Thanks for all ur comments and likes. I replied to all. Pls do check if needed. Here is the part 4. Pardon me with my mistakes. Pls do enjoy.


KC headquarters:


Adi: May I come in sir.


Maan: Sir Adi. Come in.


Adi: Sir, I think it is better to appoint a new person to deal with the highway project. As Sasha (maan's secretary) is dealing with the other projects it will be difficult for you and for her to concentrate on this project. So shall I appoint a person for dealing with highway project?


Maan: It's a nice idea Adi. But I don't think appointing a new person to deal with this project is going to work out. As I don't want any new person to know about the details of this project.


Adi : Sir, why don't we appoint a known person to it.


Suddenly Geet face appeared in Maan's thought.


Maan: Adi, I know one person. Do you remember the person, Geet who solved that branch union problem.


Adi: Yes sir.


Maan: Then appoint her to this project. Transfer her to this office so that she can deal with the project from now on.


Adi: Sure sir.

At evening:


Geet: Pinky... pinky... (geet was shouting in her high voice)


Pinky: What happened Geet? Are you ok?


Geet: I am fine baba... do you know one... I got promotion. I got transferred to KC headquarters.


Pinky: Hey... That's a great news dear... I am very happy for you Geet. (Saying so she hugged Geet)


KM HQ:


Receptionist: Hi mam, how may I help you?


Geet: Ya. My name is geet. I was transferred to HQ today from the branch office.


Receptionist: oh.. yes mam. Go to the fifth floor . Adi sir is waiting for you.


Geet: Thank you.


Geet reached fifth floor where adi was waiting for her.


Geet: Hi sir. I am geet.


Adi: Ya ... it's a pleasure to meet you. Come with me. Let me take you to maan sir's cabin.


Adi: Geet... everything has to be perfect for maan's sir. You're assigned for one of the biggest project of KC. Make sure there is no mistakes. And one more thing Geet, for this project all the big companies are planning to get it. So be careful with all the details.


Geet: Sure sir. I will be careful.




Maan's cabin:


Adi: Sir, Geet has been appointed to assist you with the highway project.


Maan: ok adi. Give her all the details of the project. Geet you can start your work from today itself.


Geet: Sure sir.


Days went on, maan and geet started working on the project. Maan was very much impressed with geet's work. As it was a government project, quotations have to be prepared and should be submitted on the tender day along with blue print for future modern airport project. The company with good quality, lowest price and best design will be selected. So maan and geet worked day and night for completed this project.


Maan: Geet, I have stored all the information in this laptop so have a look at it.


Geet: ok sir, I am on it.


Saying so, Maan went to his cabin to look after details for the other project. Maan saw the time as it was 10 in night so he decided to go home. When he was going out he saw geet still working in her cabin.


Maan: Geet, it's already 10 pm. So you can go home and continue this work tomorrow.


Geet: No sir, I have only little work to complete. So let me finish that. I will go after finishing my work. You carry on sir.


Maan: No geet. You can finish it later. It's already late. It's not safe to go home alone. Come let me drop you.


Geet with no option left said ok and left with Maan.

Geet's apartment:


Pinky: Geet , it's already 7.30 am . Still you're sleeping.


Geet: Pinky... I am not feeling well. Let me sleep for 10 more mins pls...


Pinky came near geet and kept her hand on her forehead


Pinky: Geet, you're having fever. It's better for you to take day off today.


Geet with shock: No no Pinky...I am going to the office tay. I have work to do. Its very important.


Pinky: Geet listen to me. I will inform office on behalf of you.


Geet: No Pinky. I will have medicine and go now. Will take half a day off. Just for you. Ok.


Pinky: Ok. Then I too will come soon today ok.


At office:


Geet was working in her cabin. She was very tired so she unknowingly felt asleep while doing her work. Maan who wanted to give an important detail straight away went to her cabin before going his cabin.


Maan was shocked to see Geet sleeping in her cabin that too having a pen in her hand and sleeping over the file which she was working. He decided to wake her up.


Maan: Geet...


But no answer .so he called out loud this time by shaking her hand. Geet got up at once hearing her name.


Geet: Sorry sir. I don't know how I slept...


Maan: Geet... are you having fever.. your hands are warm..


Geet: Yes sir, it's a slight fever. Nothing to worry. I took medicine.


Maan: It's ok geet. There is only little work to complete ... I think you can take a day off today.. go home and take rest.


Geet: It's ok sir... I am fine.


Maan: It's my order... go...


Geet: ok sir. I am leaving.


At afternoon:


Maan cannot concentrate on his work. He doesn't know why he started missing Geet. He felt restless and he got irritated with his behavior. He shouted everyone in his office for small, small reasons...


Maan(st): Maan what happened to you? Your very restless and your showing your anger to everyone in the office. Why geet's one day absence is affecting me so much. After sometimes , he brushed away all the thoughts and went to his work.



Precap: Tender day, information leakage😲


pls do press like and do comment. It means a lot to me. Those who want pm send me a request or say me i will add you.


part 5:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3081733/os-mg-life-saver-updated-epilogue-aug-11th-pg-64?pn=30


Edited by sweetysaran - 13 years ago
TeamMcSwarek thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
WONDERFUL
Maaneet have a sweet relationship
and awww Maan missing her
Geet's so dedicated !
sweetsampa39 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
So our great MSK missing her muse.sooo sweet.Nice update but d precap sounds troublesome.Anyways thanx 4 d PM :-)
KasiKasi thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
SUPERB UPDATE NOW MAAN & GEET WORKING TOGETHER
khwaishfan thumbnail
Visit Streak 1000 Thumbnail Visit Streak 750 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 13 years ago
Hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! geet @ KC hQ! Maan n Geet wrking together! Maan impressed wid Geet!Geet sick n Maan sedn her home bt misses her ! Well written..update soon

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme · 3 years ago

Hi Maaneetians, As I am again loosing myself in the land of Maaneet, I bring to you this new FF to take you all in new world of Maaneet as I...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: Gurti_Maaneet · 2 months ago

INTRODUCTION A new Short story on our favorite maaneet.

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11 · 4 months ago

Chapter One: The Studio of Shadows ⸻ The city outside never truly slept. It sighed, it buzzed, it rattled—but within the walls of the Khurana...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11 · 2 months ago

Chapter One The cool silk of her wedding night shift was meant to be a comfort, a whisper of the lavish life Geet Handa was born into. Instead,...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11 · 4 months ago

Title:- “When Rain Tastes like Fire” Chapter 1: Shadows in Stone The rain had begun its descent long before she arrived. It wasn’t the romantic...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".