**FLAMES OF DESIRE** MG FF #5 NOTE on page-159 - Page 2

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FLAMES OF DESIRE

PART-28
(please stay tuned, as the FLAMES OF DESIRE begins now😳)
"There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness."

It was morning, at handa haveli, brij and mohinder where having tea sitting at the dinning area...while rano was serving them breakfast...

"so all preparations done?" mohinder asked brij...

"jee tayaji...sab tayari ho gayi hai" brij informed...

"brij geet ka waha khayal rakhana...you know how nave she is...just look after her" rano could not hold back her concern...

"aap fikar mat kijiye tayi ji...jab tak geet waha hai woh meri jimmedari hai" with this rano sighed in relief...

"tayi ji aap please geet ko bula denge...agar nikalane mai late ho gaya...toh bohat traffic milega...aur aap toh delhi ka traffic jante ho"

"ha beta mai usse bulati hu...pata nahi yeh ladki itna time kyu le rahi hai..." and saying this rano went upstairs towards geet's room...after reaching her door, she tried opening it...but it was locked from inside...

"geet puttar...tayar hui ki nahi...brij ko late ho raha hai beta...jaldi neeche aa ja"

geet was sitting on her bed...drown in her pool of sorrows, when she heard rano calling her...she hurriedly wiped her tears and answered rano, controlling her voice texture...as she didn't wanted her mom to know that something is wrong with her...

"ji...mai abhi aayi neeche...2 min mai"

"ok beta" and rano left from there...

geet broke down crying feeling helpless with her own emotions...

"why this is so painfull babaji...kyu mujhe itna dar lag raha hai unse dur jane mai"

she was hyperventilating with her own hiccups...

"unse dur chali jaungi toh shayad sab thik ho jayega...par kyu yeh dil unse dur jane ko raaji nahi hai"

"I cant bear this uneasiness in me...this suffocation will kill me" geet screamed her heart out...

Later she somehow composed herself as brij himself came to call her down...she took her mom and papaji's blessing and left to hoshiyarpur halfheartedly...brij drived himself, as they started passing through delhi roads...geet kept looking out, just in case she could caught his glimpse...she knew its impossible for her to see him on road and that to so early in the morning, as maan at this time must be getting ready for his breakfast...but still her poor heart screamed his annoyance, demanding just a glimpse of his...

Her heart only had one thought, one want, one need...it was maan and only maan...her hazels turned teary, as they started moving out of delhi, heading towards highway...she sulked in her sorrows, closing her eyes, reminiscing their beautiful moments together...a smile crept on her face each time, as the images of their past played on...his mesmerizing eyes, always kept her captivated, his touch always gave her new level of esctacy...his care, always made her proud, proud to be his would be soulmate...she leaned back, getting immersed in her deep thoughts...when brij caressed her forehead...she opened her eyes and looked at him, smiling uncomfortably...

"whats the matter geet...why you look so tensed...koi problem hai mujhe bata"

"nahi veer ji...koi problem nahi" she looked away...

"don't lie geet...maan se kuch jhagada hua hai kya" saying this he stopped the car, pulling it aside...

"nahi veer ji...unse jhagada kyu hoga" she stammered...

Brij and maan where buddies since the age of 14...once maan visited hoshiyarpur with handa's...and at that time brij and maan where introduced to eachother...they where about the same age, and so gelled up very well...after that brij did visited delhi, in his summer vacations...and maan use to spend his whole time either at handa's or he use take brij with him to his mansion...but then after maan moved to London, for his studies and then joined his business, he got so much occupied with his responsiblities...that he didn't got any time to catch up with his most dearest friend...and brij did understand his turmoil, and gave him enough space...he waited for maan's call each and every day...hoping some day he would realize in his busy schedule, that he had a friend too...

"I know maan is too matured, woh kabhi tumse jhagada nahi karega...but then what is bothering you...you just tel me...mai sab thik kar dunga"

brij took hold of her chin, and made her look at him...

"just tel me once geet...is it you don't wana come to hoshiyarpur? agar aisa hai toh bata mujhe...I wont force you gudiya"

"nahi veer ji, mujhe aana hai aapke saath...aapki shadi mujhe dekhani hai...mujhe sabki yaad aati hai...rajji, titto, beeji, darji...unse milana hai mujhe" she cried helplessly, hugging brij from his waist, leaning her head on his chest...

"then why this tears" he said wiping them off...he knew she is already missing her mom and dad and may be maan more...

"geet you are missing taya ji and tayi ji na" he pulled out of the hug, caressing her messed hair back...

"ummm" geet nodded positively...to which brij laughed...

"aur kahi aisa toh nahi ki maan ko jada miss kar rahi hai" he teased, smirking looking at her pink cheeks...

geet didn't said anything, just looked down, forgetting her sorrows, blushing just with his name...

"maan ko bhi bula hi leta hu mai hoshiyarpur...warna meri gudiya waha aise hi gumsum rahi toh meri shadi mai nachega kaun" he pulled out his mobile, dialing maan's no.
Geet got scared with this, what if maan gets more angry and shouts on her veer ji too...she hurriedly pulled the mobile away from brij's hand...and disconnected the call...

"nahi veer ji, unko mat bulayiye" she panicked...

"kyu" he was suspicious now...

"woh yaha delhi mai nahi hai...bohat jaruri project ke liye London gaye hai" she lied feeling guilty...

"ohhh toh issiliye meri doll itni low hai...chalo koi nahi, let him work...kaam bhi toh jaruri hai na"

geet nodded to which brij gave her an understanding look and they droved off away from delhi...

Here at khurana mansion, everybody where sitting around dining table waiting for maan to arrive...after some time maan came down in his office attire, and greeted everyone...

"dadi I will be leaving now...aur aaj late ghar aaunga" he said with a blank face...

"maan nashta toh kar lijiye...hum sab aapka hi wait kar rahe the"

"dadi mujhe bhook nahi hai...aur jaruri meeting bhi hai office mai" maan lied...and dev knew that, as there was no meetings lined up for today...but he was confused why maan was hurrying so much...

"maan aapne kal bhi khana nahi khaya hai...chup chap yaha baithiye hamare saath" dadi ordered sternly...as left with no other option, he sat there and aet his breakfast hurriedly...he knew geet would be here any time...and he didn't wanted to face her...not this soon...

He himself didn't knew why he is trying to run away from reality...was it guilt, or was it his ego...which made him so rough and rude...

his heart was beating at an dangerous speed...anticipating to face her any moment...he just gulped the morsel as soon as possible...looking at there main door...her accusation where still fresh in his mind, and he thought his anger would only raise if he sees her...and some where he didn't wanted to make the situation any more worse between them...

As soon as he finished his plate, he stood up...

"dadi I am done...and I am leaving now" and he left without waiting for any reply...dadi and everyone just kept staring at his retreating form, knowing there is something fishy here...

maan sat in his car, sighing in relief...he leaned his head back, closing his eyes shut...as geet's angelic face flashed infront...her nave smile, her cute pouting, her serene beauty, her red blushing cheeks...uff he was head over heels in love with her...but then her immaturity, her baseless accusation, her childish antics...he opened his eyes, which again had that rage in it...he hit the steering wheel in anger...

"kyu yaha mai wait kar raha hu uska...maan just get a grip on your self...usko ek baar dekhane se sab fir pehale jaisa nahi hoga"

"everything is changed...sab kuch badal gaya hai...sab kuch" and with this he droved off...

As soon as he reached KC, he called adi and told him to get a mobile for him...as he himself thrashed his mobile in anger yesterday...

he tried to keep his calm in office, and kept himself busy, reading there old files...but could not help his mind from diverting towards geet...her face, her thoughts haunted him every second...he wished he should have controlled his anger that day...so now geet would have being in his arms...but then her accusations, did I deserved that...

he hit his hand on the table, making a loud sound..."no geet you have crossed your limit this time...and I wont forgive you so easily"

Geet reached hoshiyarpur, and as soon as there car stopped outside there house, she ran towards her cousins, chirpily hugging them, kissing them...
"maine bohat miss kiya tum sabko" she exclaimed forgetting her sorrows...then moved towards beeji and hugged her tightly...

"aap kaise ho beeji" she said breaking the hug...and then looked at darji who was sitting among few people, discussing something...excited she ran towards him without thinking...beeji and brij called her from back, trying to stop her...as they knew darji wont like it...but as soon as geet reached close to him...she hugged him lovingly...screaming...

"aap kaise ho darji, maine aapko kitna miss kiya pata hai"

Darji gave a stern look to beeji, asking her to take geet away...he didn't even looked at geet, nor reciprocated her sweet gesture...

geet got confused, what she done now...as she could see anger on darji's face...she pulled away from the hug...and started walking back, as her hazels clouded with fresh tears...she was confused yet disappointed with herself...with her life, as she was not able to make anyone happy around her...maan was not happy being with her, nor was her parents...as she sometimes would see how dejected they feel with her behaviour...her friends would always crib and fight with her...and now darji...may be there is some big problem with me...i am not able to live up to there expectations...I am lacking in every way...

This realization hit her hard, breaking something deep within her...her hope, her dreams, her aspiration to make everything perfect...where slipping away...

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Precap:- maan knowing geet in HP...and litle twist😲

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Yippe me first
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OMG she think something is wrong with her poor Geet that must feel horrible when you think youi have let down everyone you loved😭 feeling sad and bad for her
why is daarij behaving so weird Ow I am so scared for her
what is that old man up to
hope maan will realise his mistake
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Congrats on the new thread...


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seems like now we will get to c mature geet...who will change...

continue soon...
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Congrats...new thread tw mil gai ab bas update ka wait ha...give fast!!!!!!

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