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Posted: 13 years ago

PART-11

geet ran inside, she was scared for the first time, not for herself but for her close one, because she knew that this devil will not leave her so soon, she was literally shivering

she ran to her room, and callled yash

geet- yash please call uthao..

she heard "number you are calling cannot be connected"

geet- what the hell...

she bang her phone to the bed, she was very frustrated, angry and scared

she heard her phone ringing, she ran to pick her phone because she thought that its would be yash

geet- hello yash

maan- jaan, i think you don't understand anything at once, i don't want to hear his name from your mouth and why the hell you tried to call him

geet- please shut up, and how the hell you know that??

maan- i am devil, i own this world, and for your question i will say, you will never be able to call him, because i blocked his number, now you will not be able to call him and he to can't

geet- what you want to prove by doing this all

maan-simple jaan, that you are mine

geet- will you just shut up, are you insane or what

maan-ya i am insane towards your body, because i lust you ms geet handa

and started laughing

geet cuts the call,

geet- why the hell this is happening to be baba ji, what is my mistake

she saw her phone ringing again, she agin cut it..she did it for two three time...she didn't know that she is doing something which she will regret later

she heard

rano- geet neecha aja, food is ready

geet went down, but she was very disturbed..

she sat and started to stare her plate

rano- kya huin geet?

geet- nothing mom,just stress

rano- don't do so much work beta, take some rest...

geet- hmm..

rano heard a loud bang on the door

rano and geet ran to the source, they saw fuming maan standing there

maan reached geet and pulled her roughly, she was trying to escape but no effect

rano- you the hell are you? leave my daughter

maan- shut up you old lady

rano- shut up you and leave my house or i will call police

maan started laughing

maan- maan singh khurana is not afraid of anyone, go and call anyone...

maan brought geet close

maan- why the hell you didn't pick up my phone

geet- who are you to ask me? leave me, it should not matter to you, ho sakta hain iwas with my boyfriend or my lover..

maan slapped her tight and kissed her

maan trace her face with his finger, ranoo ran towards geet, but two man just dragged her and locked her in a room

maan- jaan, you don't worry about that, i will vanish their existence,you are my,just my lust, i own you,i can dump you, i can touch you, i can see you, i can hold you, it is just i...

geet laughingly

geet- awww, mr khurana you are wroong now, what if i say i was touched by my true partner, i never belong to you, i am already his..

maan- no no no, you are just mine, say you are just mine say it damit

geet- no no no mr khurana, i am not yours..i belong to him

maan- no no, it can't happen, you are mine, i own you, i can hurt you, no one else

while geet was feeling that finally she won

maan- nahi nahi nahi, ye nahi hosakta...

he reached a vase which was kept on table and hit it on his head, the glass vase broke in to thousand pieces , the head was bleeding, geet was shocked to see all this..

he started to brake all the things, even the guard where scared of this devil..

he reached geet and saw her standing

she hated that confident in her...

he pushed her into himself..

he kept his hand on her waist..

maan- where he has touched you

geet- every where

maan- no no, than you should be clean, you have to become pure again..

maan shouted

maan- guards, bring the budgets full of water and throw all water on her, till i say stop, now move

geet was shocked by his word..

next thinking she felt was that she was drenched in water, the water was continuously thrown on her...

she tried to walk away, but i return she was trapped in pillar, he hands where tied at the back of pillar, the water was continuously throwing on her...

1 hrs passed, the guards stopped

maan shouted

maan- did i said to stop

guards gain started, it was 2 hrs, geet started shivering in cold, she was feeling weak,

and she fainted..when finally maan stopped

maan reached her and started patting her, but she didn't woke up,

he took him to hospital, no one dare to ask hi, how and why

geet was examined and given injection...

docter came out

maan- how is she?

doctor- she is..

maan- i dont care, but nothing should happen to her and remember only ladies nurses and docter should be there

and he left leaving geet alone

the guard where call back from geet's house , rano started finding geet, she was told by the hospital that she was admitted, she cried and cried and with little stregth she reached there...

rano ran to geet

rano- docter how is she?

doc- she is really weak, she is having high temperature...

rano- please usse acha kar digiya, she is our life

doc- we are trying our best

rano- what happened with her

doc- we dont know, mr maan just brought her suddenly...

rano- anger reached peak...

rano know this devil will not leave their daughter soon, they have to do something, for her daughter

...

next- sameera meeting rano and geet

what will rano do? and what will be its consequences...

,hope you like it

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big big comments please, i promise maan will pay for every torture he is doing...


me not all happy with likes and comment..if this gonna continue will not write...😭😭

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yaar tumne mujhe shock kar diya.I never expect Maan in this roop. He ll change one day ? u know better but I can't hate him .He seems more week mentally.Yaar Maan ko villain na banana change him.I want to c him changed Maan.LL wait for more.


Love


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Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome loved it
i guess m first to comment so m very happy
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
OMG!!!! He is such a cruel devil
waiting for next
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Posted: 13 years ago
he s such a devil..!!
i m hating him more and more...
i dont want maan to get geet..
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Posted: 13 years ago

erghhh disguting I really hate this Maan

you made me hate maan pout
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yaar isha
tumhare devil maan to sabko peeche chod diya
last update me hath jala diya
aur isse me to pani par pani dalvaya
geet ko fever bhi ho gaya tab bhi usse koi phark nahi pada
yaar maan ko iske kiye ki saza jaroor dena
plz maan ko thoda sa soft kare do
yaar i like maan so much dont make him villane
but mazaa aa raha hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update.
Hate this maan . He is such a psyco.
Update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
I Hate this Maan...
He is such a cruel devil..
Nice update..
Update soon..
Thnx for the PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow
again i find an update
it is my all time fav
continu soon

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