MG SS - A Beautiful Mistake Pt2/Pg4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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A Beautiful Mistake ~ By shrishti

Geet: I can't believe this I am so innocent, she cursed
Meera: It's all right Geet
Geet: Crap it Meera! We're talking about Sameeera!
Meera: No need to brag cos of my name
Geet mumbled: sorry!
Meera: Don't worry...
Geet swore and said: both Maan Singh Khurana and Sameera would-be Khurana will pay very hard to make me fall in their dirty trick
Meera: Geet calm down...it's O.K...no need to go hyper
Geet: If someone pretended to be a nice with you especially a guy and especially since you're new in this college you'd understand! And because you accidentally spilled your yogurt on his girlfriend in the cafeteria, he acts all good and calls you up for a date, you go to the cafe and wait for him and you received a note: hey dummy, can't believe you fall for the joke! go and get a life..maan is only mine...you type will never get his attention note you'll understand! i've never being humiliated before
Meera sighed and said: maybe you're right!
Geet Handa: unknown
Maan Singh Khurana: unknown
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Prologue: Pg1

Part 1: Pg2
Part 2:pg4
Edited by SongsLover - 13 years ago
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Part 1
Meera: Now com' on, we need to go to babysit Jessie and Jassie today, have you forgotten?
Geet nodded miserably and said: I need to stop behaving like a poor desperate soul and live in away.

Meera nodded and said: that's right, the Geet I have known.

Geet smiled.

Geet and Meera walked along the streets chattering away balancing their backpacks on their shoulders.

Meera trying to cheer Geet, she whispered: we must plan revenge on Sameera

Geet: Good idea, was one of my pick-up lines though

Meera shrugged.

Meera: what can we do though?

Geet: when I was a child living back in Perth, there was a babysitter, she was so horrid that me and my childhood friend Cecilia nailed her shoes on the wooden floor.

Meera burst into laughter trying to imagine the whole scene.

Geet smiled cheekily and noticed someone tagging in front of them and was smirking away. Geet muttered: Maan

Meera: Huh? I thought you wanted re'

Geet elbowed Meera and pointed across the street.

Geet: why is he walking? Where is his Mercedes or BMW or whatever!

Meera: there's a no entry sign for vehicles here. But what is he doing here?

Geet: beats me'I think he heard me narrating my revenge on Mrs. Gourde.

Meera: who?

Geet whispered: my babysitter!

Meera: I hope Jassie and Jessie are good kids.

Voice huskily: hey Rameer! Her Teeg!

Geet smacked her forehead: only one person in the entire world calls us from the reverse!

Meera cursed: Dev'what are you doing here?

Dev: came to see my princess. Geet groaned. Dev and Meera were "supposedly" a couple when Meera was so fed-up with him.

Geet: Do you wanna me to leave you alone for some time

Meera glancing at walking Maan and said: no, she pushed Dev away.

Maan giggled at this innocent Geet who went on nailing her babysitter's shoes on the floor. So she lived in Australia, then she moved to India, he concluded.

Maan stopped walking as he reached a flat.

Geet shouting: Wow, so you leave in a flat, Mr. Maan Singh Khurana!

Maan annoyed and replied: It's Yash's flat, so shut it up, Ms. Geet Handa

Meera: Wow, since when you two became sooo courteous

Maan and Geet glared at Meera.

Geet gave Maan an evil look and dragged Meera away.

Maan entered the flat.

Precap: Sameera tries to trick Geet,

Geet's revenge,😈

Maan shocked😲

Edited by SongsLover - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you 😃
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nice FF..
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nice concept..continue soon😊
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nice start
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2
Meera: why did you need to brag Maan in our convo?
Geet: I just hate that guy...grrr 😆
Meera: we've already reached Mrs. Mehra's flat, its same of Adi's whatever his name is
Geet: Fine..., she smiled while ringing the bell.
Woman: Good, I was expecting you a lil earlier, she frowned.
Geet turned red.
Meera: Sorry ma'am, we met someone and we started to fight...
Geet elbowed Meera annoyingly..
The woman smiled and giggled: enter please, I'll introduce you to Jessie and Jassie...
Geet whispering: are they from England or from Punjab - Jeeessie and Jaaasie?? Sounds dumb nah
Meera glared at Geet to shut her up.
Woman: Jassie is the 1 year old baby and Jessie is her elder sister. Jessie is 7 years old.
The woman went on explaining to the girls what they should do...
Meanwhile
Maan: Does Geet live in this flat?
Adi: 😕?
Rajveer: Huh? Geet, he smiled like a fool, she's way too hot man, you've got to believe it...I saw her last night with a guy...wow..she was so mesmerizing 😆
Maan and Adi: 😲?
Maan: what? Geet? Mesmerizing? Stop kidding me! She looks more like a Wicked Watson.
Adi giggled and spluttered: i like Ms. Watson, she makes me understands Maths so well, he praised.
Rajveer rolled his eyes: duh, why don't you say you're in love with the teacher..., Adi blushed.
Adi: No way! I just said she explains well beside she's only very young...
Maan shocked: Shut it up, Adi, I think Wicked Watson is 34 years old and you're only 20 for hell's sake...
Adi interrupted: it's heaven's sake...
Maan ignoring Adi: and by the way, if you, Raj, you've finished drooling over "sexy" Geet, thank yourself Neha isn't here, your girl-friend or else your butts would be on fire.
Rajveer was embarassed. Then they heard a loud wailing and howling sound.
Maan annoyed: what was that?
Adi shrugging: it's Mrs. Mehra's daughters, the Terrible Crier! She cries all night and all day long...
Waaah Waaah Maaahhh
Rajveer complaining: I thought we would be drooling on girls' in bikini
Maan shocked: what?
Adi: that's for adult Raj, for goodness' sakes!
Maan and Rajveer staring at Adi their mouth hanging.
Adi quickly shut his mouth.
Meanwhile the wailing and howling got louder and louder.
Mrs. Mehra's Room
Geet: Meera, you handle Jassie, I'll take care of the 7 yr old kid.
Jessie: Excuse me, Mommy said I am 7 I am no longer a kid.
Geet rolled her eyes. Meera started to sing "Old McDonald" to Jassie. Jessie took her colouring book and started to colour.
Jassie was still howling but in a lower tone.
Maan got irritated. "I am going to see The Terrible Crier myself!" he declared. "it's no use Maan, I've tried it thousands of times" Adi confessed. Maan ignored him and moved to the door.
Maan knocked at the door.
Geet: hearing Jassie's howling, i am sure they phoned the cops!
Meera: geet, go and open the door please and this baby too, i'll make sandwich for Jessie!
Geet took Jassie from Meera and went to open the door.
Both of them were shocked.
Maan: Geet, since when you had a baby?
Geet angrily: Damn it Maan Singh Khurana, its Mrs. Mehra's daughter...
Maan: ohhh
Geet: what are you doing here?
Maan: i've come to tell u to keep the baby from howling...its disturbing my friends...
Geet: if you've finished you can leave...
Maan: 😲
Just then the building blacked out!
Geet terrified: Meera why can't I see anything
Maan: power cut!
Geet: shut up, didn't ask you!
Meera: Jessie, pls sit here i'll check if i get a candle...Geet! help mee! chekc Jessie pls...
Geet stared at Maan through the darkness and grinned mischievously.
Geet: Maan, meera needs help, please keep Jassie for 2 secs please
Maan still shocked while Geet gave him Jassie and left...
Precap: Naughty Jassie and fighting Maaneet 😆
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@SongsLover: Awesum n fantastic SS!!!!!😊

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