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SiniHanda

@SiniHanda

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#681

Besharam khudh ho, besharmi se likhti ho, aur hamein aur zyaada besharam banate ho aur phir humein hi besharam bulathe ho? hawww 😳 oyyy... 😆 this besharam loved it sarzah😆

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anamica123

@anamica123

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#682

Awesome update. and you updated so soon. i expected it to be night. but sweet of you. when will be next😛

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Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#683

lovely update

awesome

poor geet confuse ho gayi maan se itni baar jaan sunke😆

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Romenas

@Oblivion007

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#684

it was sooo much sugary sugary baby!!lovd it too mch!can't wait for maan to come at night and sooth her pain more,besides they need to talk and clear their misunderstanding regardng the ashamed thing.
ok,now tell me how are u baccha,have u finished ur eid shopping??
lots of luv
romenas

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#685

very nice part .. maan taking care of geet in a loving way.. ufff.. pls cont soon yaar..

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-memorable-

@-memorable-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#686

these care doesn't wash away the things he said and did to her

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lavanyaanchan

@lavanyaanchan

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#687

Hi really Nice update 😉

I am a silent reader of ur all ff's, then thought of commenting on this becoz it is superb 👏

I just love this MAAN 😛 he love her too much but Y Geet is so shy and scared of Maan 😭, Y cant she say wat she want to say . and that """ JAAN """" its so cute ⭐️

I loved each and every dialogue written and the last dialogue of Maan "tumhe aab uss ghara ka kuch nahi kana hai" superb,, felt bad for Maan he is so ashamed of his behavior

How just waiting for the night... wat Maan will do now with his Jaan... Poor Geet she so much confused and scared ... Loved it dear

U r a brilliant writer⭐️ I just love ur every work 👏

Waiting for the next update 🥱