MY MYSTIQUE MISHTY thread 3 : epilogue : pg 119 - Page 5

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PART 46

She felt a warmth within herself... Her pale lips curved into a small smile that was so pure n beautiful... Suddenly it was drifting away from...her world turned upside down...her head was spinning..she felt as if she was falling into a deep pit...she tried hard to get up.. Suddenly her eyes snapped opened and sprang up from the bed shouting, "Maaann..."

It was then Geet realised that she was no more with her Maan...She lukd around. She was lying on a comfortable king-size bed. The room was an acoustic one. It was designed in a special way that no voice escapes outside however hard you tried. It had cameras fitted to keep track of her every move and there was a video through which he the devil in her life" Vikram" would talk to her. He wont enter her room coz she had threatened to kill herself if he even tried. Vikram never did anything against her wish. He just cant let her go either coz he was obssessed with Geet...

At first it was an ordinary room. But he changed it coz of her continuous shouting and crying but her never stopped her. And when she tried to starve herself he gave her trips. She had no other choice but to eat. Somehow he believed when she would be deprived of anyother choice she would accept him and live with him. He had been waiting all these days. But with each passing day her will grew stronger and so did her love.. At a stage when she wont sleep and call out his name the whole night Vikram tried to help her with sleeping pills. Thats how she reached Maan for one night. And when she realised that she took more pills just to be with her Maan. And now once again she was here in that room..She cried out in pain "Maan..kaha ho ap?"

Just then the TV in her room was switched on.

Vikram : Geee..t u woke up?? I had been waitin 4 the past three days. U scared the hell out of me. So there is a small gift for you.

He opened the door of her room.

Geet : dont you dare enter this room..

Vikram : Sorry Geet! U already broke the treaty. U tried to kill yourself... Now i dont have a choice.

He locked her hands with handcuffs.

Geet : Count your days Vikram'mera Maan anewala he and he wont spare you'

Vikram : Wake up from your dream Geet' No one will come here to rescue you..Yeha koi nhe aa sakta

Just then a car came screeching in front of the house. Vikram couldn't hear the voice as the room was acoustic one. But Mishty don't need any sound to hear her Maan. She could already hear his heart shouting out for his Mishty.

Geet gave him a sly smile, and Vikram went out of the room.

He was surprised, in fact shocked to see Maan at the door. Yet he managed to hide his emotions.

Vikram : Welcome Mr. Khurana!! Wat a surprise!!

Maan(his eyes wandering all around) : Sometimes the fact around us is more surprising than fiction..

Vikram : wat?

Maan : nothing'I was just thinking..i just walked out of the meeting. Just came to see you. Need to talk some work.

Vikram was relieved. He switched on the TV to Geet's room. Geet was trying hard to break the hand-cuffs. She was shouting his name all the time. But no sound came. Vikram had a glint of victory in his eyes. Maan didn't even hear any of her cries while his eyes and mind were searching for just a glimpse of her. After discusssing the project, Maan got up' Mishty just struggled to find a way..to get his attention. She tried hard to move something around him with her eyes. But nothing worked. Her mind was being too emotional. She couldn't concentrate.

Maan was about to leave . He stood near the door talking to Vikram. Suddenly they heard a bang sound.

Vikram : bahar se awaz ayi..

Both of them ran outside. Maan's car glass was hit by a stone.

Maan : Who can do this??

Vikram : umm'there kids around here playing cricket..

Maan : but this is not a ball it's a stone..

Vikram : hmm.. they are too naughty.

Maan luked around. Suddenly his eyes fell on a window at Vikram's house. His eyes just stopped at the other side. On the other side Mishty was calling out his name at the top of her volume'

Maan couldn't take his eyes off the window. There was something that was drawing his attention to it. He felt restless'a strong pull'.the same feeling when he first went near the castle where she was captured. He was more than sure that his Mishty was trying to call his attention. He just needed a confirmation that Vikram was bhind all these but how??? And he didn't even want to waste a minute knowing that his Mishty is in danger. He had to be careful coz one mistake from his part would harm Mishty. It took all his will to leave the place quietly.

Vikram : See you later Mr. Khurana

Maan : See you..very soon I guess..

He left with a suspicious glare at Vikram. The moment Maan's car went out of sight Vikram rushed to Geet. He didn't enter the room but switched on the camera so that they see and hear each other.

Geet's eyes were red. Her face had gone all pale due to the trauma that she he had gone.

Vikram : Geet..wat were you sayin earlier? "Mera Maan ayega..." He will destroy me and all. Ur Maan was here 'just a few feet away from you'but he couldn't take you away from me'

Geet : He don't have to take me away from you'I am his'and he knows that. This is the silence before the storm Vikram and it is yet to come'.My Maan ill come back like a storm'You will be whirled in his anger'and destroyed forever. Go and escape if it is possible.

Vikram : hmm.. I like that confidence'but your Maan doesn't know you are alive'

Khurana Construction:

In Maan's cabin,

Maan : I am damn sure my Geet is alive..and HE that b***** Vikram..he is behind all this.

IG : But sir'we cant act by your intuitions. We have our own limitations. We need some strong evidence for a rescue operation.

Maan : Why don't you understand officer'it will be too late then. Fine I don't need any of your help. I know how to get my GEET!!!

He walked out of the cabin. Adi guided the IG with an aapology towards the exit.

Maan and Abhay were havin a coffee at the outhouse.

Maan : I strongly feel she is there Abhay. Its just that need aone person to keep an eye on Vikram so that I can find out where she is.

Abhay : Ok Maan. I will help you. This time I trust you and above all I respect your love.

Maan just hugged Abhay. He couldn't say anything mor.

Maan : I am coming Mishty. Just one day more. Tomorroww I will get you and I wont leave that rascal t any cot. He will have to pay for every drop of tear that you had shed'

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PRECAP : THE FINALE'...

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Edited by madhubala123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congratulations On The New Thread
Amazing Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congo for new thread dear and its really awesme update dear...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part
cant wait for next part dear
plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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she did this to herself to be with her maan...

waiting for the finale..

continue soon..

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb.Geet is alive.Maan will save geet from Vikram.i hop 4 that.waiting 4 d climax
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superb update.
now that vikram is gone for sure.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice part.
Waiting for THE FINALE

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