**FLAMES OF DESIRE**#2 MG FF IMP NOTE on page 153 - Page 53

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Posted: 13 years ago

thanks a lot for all the comments and likes

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Posted: 13 years ago
Dekha babaji aapne dekha... Yaha main curiosity k maare mare ja rhi hu aur is ladki ko mazaak soojh raha hai... Sachi ghor kalyug!!
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FLAMES OF DESIRE
PART-13

maan smiled cutely looking at her antics...and took his mobile...then holding her waist...they started moving out of his cabin...

he called dev...and told him that he is leaving for home and will drop geet on his way...

geet said goodbye to everybody on her way...smiling cutely...and maan just kept adoring her cute gestures...

they entered lift...n maan pulled her more closer...she looked at his desiring eyes...blushed biting her lips...looking down...maan leaned in closer...gently nibling on the velvety flesh of her ear lobe...geet moaned..."ahhh maan"...then pushing him away...
"mujhe dard hota hai na...agar mai aapko aise bite karu toh" she said it bluntly...then realising its double meaning...she blushed showing the darkest shade of pink...maan smirked looking at her reaction...then thinking chalo isse kuch toh samjh aaya jaldi...

he moved closer with that smirk visible on his face...

"so geet u wana bite me"

he spoke huskily moving closer to her and she moved back...till he pinned her to the lift wall...

"woh...mai nahi bite karungi" she said innocently...

he blowed his warm breath on her face...she closed her eyes getting intoxicated...getting lost in the moment...

"waise u can bite me anywhere...mujhe koi problem nahi"...and he mischeviously winked at her...

then moving away laughing at her cutely...she looked down pouting...hiding her blush behind that pout...

whem maan spoke again...

"mishty chalna hai na ghar...waise I don't mind staying wid you here in this cozy lift"

geet made a big O face...then realised they have reached ground floor already...she hurriedly followed him out of lift...matching his footsteps...

"aap thoda slow chalo na"

"kyu"

"kyuki mujhe fast chalana nahi aata"...she cribbed...

"aur mujhe bhi baby step leke chalana nahi aata"...he said hiding his smile...

"kyaaa...mai baby steps leke chalati hu"...

she spoke irritatingly...to which maan just smiled and moved towards his car...he told driver to come in dev's car as he will be driving today...driver nodded and moved away...maan opened the door for her...but she stood their looking elsewhere...tapping her foot...cribbing to her babaji'''

maan sighed...nodding his head..."fir shuru ho gayi nautanki"

"mishty hume late ho raha hai, chalo na jaldi"

"huhhh..."

"acha yeh upar dekhake taare baad mai count kar lena...abhi chalo"

geet made a shocking O face...looking up...and then at him...thinking..."yeh lo inhe lagta hai mai taare gin rahi hu"

when maan moved closer to her...kissing her cheeks...acha I am sorry...my jaan walks faster then any other baby bas...

and she smiled delightfully..."maine kaha tha na I don't take baby steps"

"ha baba...ab chale"

"ya ya"

and they sat in his car...maan thinking that was easy...and he drove towards handa haveli...all the way geet was blabbering all sorts of thinks...and maan was just listening to her...

after some time maan literally got fed up wid her blabbering...but this was his mishty if he says anything then she will again start cribbing...

then an idea struck him...he smirked imagining her reaction after this...

"mishty you know I just love wen you talk like this"

"really"...she said chirpily...

"ha...I just feel like taking your blabbering lips into mine"...he spoke hiding his mischievous smirk by looking staright towards the road...

she just looked down shutting her mouth...gulping her next set of words...

"kya hua mishty...chup kyu ho gayi" he asked innocently...

"woh...aisehi"...she said biting her lips...

there remaining drive went in complete silence...geet kept looking out...enjoying the cool breez...and ejoyed this peace stilling glances of her...soon they reached...geet hurriedly opened her side of door...to get out as soon as possible...becoz knowing maan, she thought..."babji yeh toh kahi bhi shuru ho jayenge"...so she better thought to run for her life...after reaching a safe distance she looked behind...at maan who was standing leaning on his car...folding his hands, looking amusingly at her...

"woh aapko late ho jayega na ghar ke liye...issiliye mai jaldi utar gayi"

"acha" he spoke making a thoughtfull face...

"ha...ab jayiye aapko late ho jayega"

"hmmm...i will see you tommorow" he spoke rather faking anger...

she got scared and ran from their inside her home...and maan started laughing, shaking his head...he sat in his car...

"mad mad gal"

he reached home after some time...entered the main hall...where dadi was chitchating with NT, dev, vicky and annie...he kissed dadi on her cheeks...and sat beside her...

"kya baat hai beta...aaj bohat khush lag rahe ho aap"

before maan could say anything...dev spoke...

"woh kya hai na dadi...aaj geet aayi thi office aur bhai uske hi saath the"

maan blushed thinking of their moments...and vicky started coughing...maan looked at him with a smirk...and vicky excused himself saying he needs some water...

"kya sach mai maan...geet thi aapke saath"

"woh dadi...ha...lekin bas kuch time ke liye...aap jo soch rahi hai waisa kuch nahi hai"

"lekin beta humne kuch socha hi nahi abhi tak"

"woh dadi stop it...mai apne room mai ja raha hu"

and everybody started laughing...when NT spoke,

"dadi ab bhai aur geet ki shadi ki date bhi jaldi fix kara dijiye...i cant wait to have her as my jethani"

dev- "dadi aapko dekhana chahiye tha office mai inn dono ko saath mai...they make a cute couple"

dadi- "ok beta hum mohinder aur rano se baat karte hai"

At khurana mansion, whole family was having dinner silently...when maan spoke...

"vicky tommorow morning I want you at gym sharp at 6 am"

vicky suddenly puked the water he was drinking...coughing badly...when annie started patting his back...giving an understand sorry look...thinking..."ab tu gaya vicky"

vicky got scared..."woh bhai mujhe gym ki kya jarurat...look I have a perfect body...hai na annie"...expecting annie to agree...

and annie nodded yes...but then looked at maan's angry big, she got scared a started nodding her head in no...to which vicky made a shocked face...

"vicky you have gained lot of fat...woh kya kehte hai...ha CHARBI...he spoke pressing on that word...

vicky gulped his saliva...

dadi- "maan, vicky toh jara bhi mote nahi lag rahe"

"ha bhai dadi sahi keh rahi hai...please mujhe nahi aana"...he literally started pleading to him...

to which maan smirked giving an evil smile...

"dadi look at your grandson...dekho kitna sweat kar raha hai...its an sign of high blood pressure...jo fat ke wajah se hota hai"

"ha vicky maan is right...dekhiye aap kitna sweat kar rahe hai"

vicky rubbed his face pulling his tshirt up...

"dekhiye dadi abhi nahi hai"...trying to convince her...
"please dadi mujhe gym nahi jana"

when maan stood up...and went towards vicky...vicky gulped looking down...maan carresed his hair...holding his chin...pulling his head up..."tommorow 6 am sharp"

then moved towards stairs...and everybody gud nyt...specially to u vicky...have a sound sleep...will see u tommorow"

maan smiled luking at vicky's plight...entered his room...removed his shirt...and now was in just his track pants n black vest...he laid, closing his eyes thinking about his geet...the just thought to call her...he dialed her number...

geet was already in her dreamland...but this time with ranbir kapoor...her first ever crush...wen her cell rang...making some weird cartoon noise...

she woke up getting scared...screaming..."bachao'''kaun hai..."

then it hit her that it was her fav mickymouse ringtone...which she downloaded just now..."uffo geet tu bhi na jhalli hai"

and she picked up the call without looking at the caller...

"kotte de puttar...itni raat ko koi phone karta hai " she screamed irritating...

maan pulled his mobile away from his ear...protecting ears from getting damaged...thinking, not again...

with no reply...she got more irritated...

"ullu ke patte...phone kyu kiya...pata hai mai kitna romantic sapna dekh rahi thi woh bhi mere ranbir ka..."

"what...who is this bloody ranbir" he spoke gritting his teeth...

geet gulped her saliva sensing its maan's call...she hit her head with her mobile...scared to utter even a word more...when he spoke...

"ohh geet you are so dead..."

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Precap:- vicky...maneet😳😳😳😳😉😉😉😆😆😆😆

me done wid one more part...guys me starting a new SS very soon...may be with my next update of this FF,i will update it also...please need ur support for the same...

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love ya

varsha

Edited by mahimaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update😊
"ohh geet you are so dead..."
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Edited by KINGKHANFAN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lol I love Ranbir Kapoor too...but MSK would definitely be first for me :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
aweshhoomee part !! :)
love maaneet shoo much !! :)
such a cute and hawt couple 😳
loved it :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

me off to bed now...will reply everyone tommo...thank u gals who waited for me to update...n who hv read it n commented...really appreicate it...

n so sorry for delay...but wat to do it took me time as i was searching for appropriate pics...so pls bear wid me...will come back wid my new SS along wid next update for this FF...
LOVE YA
VARSHA
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesme update di
love it
maaneet noke joke wow
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
geet is so cute

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