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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow... So its Geet's Birthday...

hhmm lets c if Maan comes to knw abt this...
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Posted: 13 years ago

read out all d parts in one go

really m loving it😉

waiting for next update

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome update 😃
hope maan comes on her B'day & wish her 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome n lovely update
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Posted: 13 years ago
I have a feeling Maan will do something :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh poor Geet imagine her first birthday after marriage and her hubby is not even aware of it. So it looks like even her in-laws don't know it's her birthday.
And Maan still in denial, but for how long I wonder
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Posted: 13 years ago

mee too mee too waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi Friends,

Thanks for your wonderful comments.

Some of you have raised questions on why Maan was not called for party by her family and how Khuranas not know about it.

Well this was not a surprise party. Geet knew and had asked her family to arrange for it in afternoon. So, they expected her to come with Maan which she did not do.

Also, Khurana's know about her birthday but they have forgotten about it. They are not used to celebrating this day and have purely missed it. It actually happened to one of my cousin and it is a different story that my jiju still suffers for that day (even after more than 8 yrs of marriage) as my sis doesn't let him forget. 😆

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Chapter 21

Geet gave a side hug to her mom – "You are the best mumma and you bake the best cakes"

Rahul laughed – "Woh hum sab ko pata hai ab jaldi kaat hum sab ko khana bhi hai"

[We all know that, now cut the cake quickly so that we all can eat also]

Geet made a baby face and cut the cake. Everyone showered her with wishes, gifts, slaps on the bum and cake pieces in and on the face.

After getting facial done with almost one quarter of the cake, Geet went to bathroom for washing her face. She came down to notice that the room was all dark. A spotlight fell on her as she walked down the stairs.

You tube link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=For7OSMFpOs

My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl, Girl Girl Girl Girl……

She saw both her brother and dad come to her and held her each hand. They escorted her to the middle of the living room where all her family and friends started to dance as Rahul sang

Jhoomka Girade, Jo Mila Le Agar Woh Nazar Se Nazar Mitade

Rahul took her in his arms with a jerk mimicking the lines with his hand.

Nachke Dikhade, Sabki Dhadhkan Bhi Kadam Se Kadam Milade

Geet pushed him away and tried to move away but Mohinder held her hand and started dancing with her and not letting her go so easily.

Lehron Se Chal Ke Jaal Bicha Ke,Dil Ko Ye Behaal Banade

Saare Deewane Maane, Na Dekhi Koi Aisi Girl

Rahul faced her at front and Mohinder at back…they both danced with her carrying her to the dining table and making her stand on top of it

Dekhi Lakh Lakh Pardesi Girl, Ain't Nobody Like My Desi Girl

Dekhi Lakh Lakh Pardesi Girl, Sab Toh Soni N Saadi Desi Girl

Who's The Hottest Girl In The World, My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl

Thumka Lagaike She'll Rock Your World, My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl

Geet danced showing off her figure and agreeing with her family as they all continued dancing away merrily

My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl, Girl Girl Girl Girl……

Pade Kamar Pe Jo Nazar, Saare Saapnon Mein Rang Bhar Jaaye

Jo Tham Le Woh Haath Toh, Haske Hi Aashiq Mar Jaayein

Dhoondon Jahan Mein Chahe Kahin, Na Tumko Milegi Koi Aisi Girl

By now Geet was in full flow. She danced with her cousins and friends with her being centre of attention

My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl, Girl Girl Girl Girl……

Jahan Jahan Bhi Jau Main, Saari Nazrein Toh Peche Peche Aiye

Ruku Zara Mein Jo Yahan, Thandi Thandi Saari Saase Tham Jaye

Sabki Nigahon Ne Hai Kaha, Ke Khwaabon Mein Hai Dekhi, Meri Jaisi Girl

Rahul whistled loudly as Geet danced provocatively trying to prove her point

My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl, Girl Girl Girl Girl……

After dancing, all settled for lunch amidst light banter and loads of laughter and later Geet sat down for opening her gifts.

First she un-wrapped a beautiful jewelry set gifted by Rano and Mohinder. Next was a new i-Pad gifted by Rahul. Everyone spent time admitting the sleek new design and apps. After some more, gifts Geet try to open the present from Nisha (cousin) when she stopped her and requested it to open in last. In the end, Nisha shooed away all men on one pretext or another. Geet was very perplexed as she opened a satin covered package.

Her eyes popped out at the see thru baby doll negligee with a matching thong. It was deep red in color and entire chemise was made out of lace.

She turned bright red as she whacked Nisha as all women laughed, teased and giggled at her. "Nisha ki bachi yeh kya hai"

"Oh come on jaan..this is something special to manaofy your hot husband if he gets angry"

"Without getting angry only he is like a volcano pata nahi jab gussa karenge toh kya hoga….yeh baby doll se zayda shayad ice ice baby ki zaroorat hogi" Geet kept the hand on her mouth as she realized what she has blabbered as all the cousins almost jumped on her to get the details. Geet shook her head and thanked Babaji that they had no idea what she was talking about.

Later Geet changed back to her casual dress and Rahul offered her a ride on bike as it had been long since they went together. Geet leapt at the idea and went on a long drive. Rahul took her to their usual secluded spot in conserved forest area at outskirts of Delhi. They zoomed at almost empty roads lined with Gulmohar trees. Sweet smell of flowers tingled their senses as flowers were in bloom and a slight breeze ruffled their hair. Rahul stopped near a lake and they sat together silently gazing at the natural beauty around them.

Rahul – "Pata hai Geet main tujhe kuch aur gift dena chahta tha but I could not arrange for it. But I will keep on trying"

Geet smiled – "Still no house available in the entire area"

Rahul nodded – "Hmmm…I tried so hard lekin no sellers. Tujhe bhi toh chunke jagah pasand aayi hai"

Geet pouted "Ab main kya karoon….us jagah ki baat hi kuch aur hai….scenic views, river in the backyard, trees and foliage….unspoiled gem….I have never seen more beautiful farmhouses before. I have so many dreams associated with it. But don't worry. Tu dekhna ek din I will own a place there"

Rahul – "Jaanta hu"

Geet had gone to Naldhera (near Shimla) for family holiday. While walking she had chanced on a serene area which was on banks of a small riverlet. There were some cottages built around the riverlet and she was smitten by the charm of that place. Since that day she had dreamt of owning a house there.

Rahul – "Geet tu khush hai na….shaadi ke baad waise toh we talk everyday but phir bhi I miss you yaar….roz milta nahi hoon toh aisa lagta hai jaise something is missing"

Geet hugged Rahul as he took her in his embrace. "Yaad hai tune hi kaha tha ki, have no regrets…I don't have any…I also miss you."

Suddenly she sprang up - "You know what!!!! I think you should also get married"

Rahul rolled his eyes "Le ab ismein meri shaadi ki baat kahan se aayi"

Geet grinned "Nahin Nahin I am serious"

Rahul shrugged his shoulders – "What serious…Oh Hello…shaadi ke liye ladki chaiye…woh kya aise hi milti hai"

Geet smiled – "Kya pata chalta hai Rahul…maine bhi kahan socha tha….lekin ek pal mein hi zindagi badal gayi. Before meeting Maan I never thought I will get a guy like that but before I could even blink, my heart found it's partner"

Rahul cupped her face – "You are right sweety. I promise that when that blink happens for me you will be the first to know"

Their talks were disturbed by a passing motorist. Suddenly Geet saw time and exclaimed "OMG…7:00 baj gaye Rahul…chal yaar nahi toh I will be very late"

"Ok..ok…let's go. Tut oh aise dar rahi hai jaise hostel wapis nahi pahunchi toh warden ne punishment deni ho"

[Ok..ok…let's go. You are getting tensed as if you have to go to a hostel and if you don't reach in time, you will get punishment from warden]

Geet whacked him – "Shut up and let's go."

Rahul drove her back home. Rano had already packed some of her favorite dishes and cake for her to take home along with her gifts.

Geet left the cake saying that she had too much of it. She stuffed the gifts in boot so that she can take it inside later.

It was 8:30 by the time she reached KM. Vicky ran to her as she entered "Tayiji…aap kahan chali gayi thi…I did my homework also and mummy forced me to have dinner….I don't like it"

Geet sat down on her knees and hugged Vicky – "Sorry bacha….I got late. My bro took me out and I got late…sorry na"

Vicky smiled and gave her a kiss.

Geet walked to Daadima – "Sorry Daadima thoda late ho gaya"

Daadima smiled – "Are beta aap sorry kyon keh rahi hain…Vicky ko toh aise hi complain kar raha hai…just to get your attention. Chaliye ab aap aa gayi hain toh let's start dinner"

[Arre beta, why are you saying sorry…. Vicky is saying just like that…just to get your attention. Let's go, now you have come so let's start dinner]

Geet handed over the packages in her hand "Woh mummy ne kuch daal makhani aur dahi bade pack kiye hain. She makes them very nicely so I got it for everyone."

Vicky sat at the dining table – "Mujhe bhi dahi bade khane hain"

[I also want to eat dahi bade]

Meera shook her head at his antics as everyone settled for dinner including Maan.

Geet looked at him to find his eyes on her. She raised her eyebrows in question but he just looked away. Geet could not understand but she was sure he was thinking something.

Maan had his dinner silently brooding over his thoughts – "Maan tu pagal ho gaya hai. You always had your coffee alone and kya hua if one day she did not call you to tell you that she will be late.

But, shaadi ke baad pehli baar she left me alone like this. I mean I had my coffee alone.

So…are you Vicky that you will also complain? She went to meet her parents…thoda late ho gaya.

But she could have at least called me na. She didn't even tell me she will be going.

Tuh toh aaj kal use baat bhi nahi karta thik se. Why should she call you….hmmm.

I know. I guess it is my fault. I am letting my insecurities and inner turmoil spoil any chance of success of our relationship. I should not have ignored her like that and should try harder. Waise bhi it is no big deal. I am just thinking too much. I am behaving as if I missed her…I did not miss her…it was just…I am just used to having coffee with her. Yes…that's it….it is just a habit"

Precap – Oops we missed her Birthday
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Posted: 13 years ago
yipee me second.. moi was stalking this thread for the update di..but see no Maaneet again and tat too on her B'day😭

They really dint knw its her b'day...

this maan na will never suderofy..soon
Edited by --aarthi-- - 13 years ago

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