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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shristi1

Loved it.

Feeling bad 4 maan .
Update soon.



Yep updating nowww!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 5









Beena was highly upset with this diagnosis😭.. Least did she expect Maan would end up in such a situation.. She felt so cursed in life, a broken mother who had never d ability to ponder love over her kids😡.. she still remembered d mistakes of her life nd regretted being her. It was 4 yrs back wen she was expecting a kid.. Was damn happy wen Dr had told she'll be delivering twinss😭. She was on cloud nine... later during her course of pregnancy some complications had arised nd d Dr had told her tat oly 1 fetus grew nd d other lay dead or dormant.🤢.. Beena was dead with this news.. She was carrying 2 kids one alive nd other dead beacuse her system could not cater to 2 fetus🤢.. Nature had chosen one over d other nd she delivered a BABY... a BABY BOY... She was crying wen she delivered nd hated d baby to d power of inifinity.. she had delivered a boy nd nature had killed her girl to save d baby boy...😡


Beena always fanataside over Girls😉... She loved Girls nd wen she had delivered this boy she only could do was hate him😭... She never touched d baby nd carried him once daily to feed😡... never looked at him even wen d baby used to cry😡.. she just behaved tat d little baby never existed for her😭... It was almost 6 mnths after d delivery tat maan's dadima had finally chosen to spk to her abt d injustice of her to avoid a new born baby nd punish him for no reason... She had explained to her abt motherhood nd mothership nd tought her d mother's touch in a gentle polite way d day wen Beena Realised how wrong she was nd d biggest sin of her lifwe which kept her son devoid of mother's touch nd love for d 1st 6 months of his life🥱... Beena had vowed tat she'll compensate for it by unconditional live for him & her guilt grew too large tat only thing she would do is admire d little prince nd shower every little joy she had👏... She vowed never to harm him nd never to say no to his wishes😉.. her cute baby she fell in love with DEV... DEV SINGH KHURANA her tiny charming prince :P😉


It was 3 yrs later wen DEV started his schooling nd Beena had delivered a baby GIRL!!!😳 Anni... ANWESHA SINGH KHURANA😳... Her tiny princess.. Beena who was so excited abt d baby had hardly any time to be with her baby wen she had developed post birth complications😆.. nd within weeks it was found tat she was pregnant again😉.. Inspite of her weakness she choose to carry on with her pregnancy she never wanted to terminate this kid her guilt would kill her😕.. After d loss of a baby nd a never showering love for kid she could not carry more weight in her hearts...😭

Maan was delivered at 7 month a pre term baby nd required constatnt vigilance😉... D pregnancy tenure had been filled with complications tat Beena never took care of Anni😭.. She had handed over Anni to Rano to look after😳.. Rano brought up Anni with full love care nd affection tat any mother could give... 😉


Even after Maan's birth due to his weakness Beena had been completely involved with him ndnever found time for Anni😕... Once Rano was married off nd Anni was left with hardly any care.😭.. Now again fate had turned sour for Beena😭... She cried all nights praying for Maan to see him Run like before around Geet nd grow up like a normal child...😭

After series of tests nd medications finnaly 2 weeks later Maan was discharged... Maan was still not back to normal😭.. D Dr had advised complete rest for 1 full yr😡... D baby was not allowed to walk or stand or sit down🤢... he had advised tat Maan should not use his legs or rest his legs in a posture tat would put his body's weight over it😭... Beena had decided to walk back to Rathore Mansion to stay with Mummyjii who she held on as her mother nd this crucial period she wanted to stay with Mummyjii for moral support😊.. Khurana's had shifted to Rathore Mansion... Kunal did weekly visits to them... Dev had started his schooling😕.. A silent shy guy who hardly spoke well focussed nd hard working a perfect son as per Beena... Anni had been jollying around house day nd nihgt nd enjoyed d new house..😕. Maan was under constatnt care by Beena nd mummijii.. Never let him stand sit or walk... Always carried him nd made him at comfort... Maan kept cribbing with all his babyish attitude he hated this entire thing but was helpness🥱... Nano too loved baby Maan nd sat beside him nd tell stories at night nd took him for gardening at evening...😲


Geet wen she was almost 2 mnths hold had been taken back to Handa Haveli at Jalandher..😡. Rano missed her home but Dadimaa always took gr8 care of Rano nd Baby Geet...😳 Mohinder used to always stay at Delhi for his business work nd Rano had single handedly taken charge of Geet... 😉


*So this is d foundation for d story line- from d first 5 parts u can make out d character sketch of d pl who will appear in this story* List :

Geet Handa - Mohinder Handa & Rano Handa ( Born Rathore) 😳
Maan Singh Khurana - Kunal Singh Khurana & Beena Singh Khurana ( Born Rathore) 😳

Rano nd Beena were neighbours nd from Royal Family of Rathore in Hoshiyarpur...😉

Mohinder Handa was from Jalandher - Prince of Jalandher...😊

Kunal Singh Khurana was d crowned prince of Hoshiyarpur...😊


Nano && Mummyijii were parents of Rano...😆

Kunal Singh Khurana stayed with his parents at Khurana Mansion at Hoshiyarpur...😆

Mohinder Handa stayed with his mom at Jalandher.. his father passed away even before his marriage...🤢

Beena & Kunal had 3 kids - DEV ANWESHA nd MAAN...😳

Rano & Mohinder had only GEET...😳

Other small family caharacters will spring up in story as nd wen required!!!🤣


but to keep u all aware Rano had 2 sisters nd a brother...
Beena had 2 sisters..


Tats it for now!!! 😉


PART 6



Edited by ainaGURTI - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
mali thank u thank u...
if u had made maan handicap na i would really get angry dear..
muahhh...
Beena had to suffer so much yaar.. poor maan feels so helpless and attitude wah.. tats cool...
update was just awesome dear
Edited by sdlife19 - 13 years ago
ainaGURTI thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sdlife19

mali thank u thank u...

if u had made maan handicap na i would really get angry dear.. Maan is still not welll i never wrote he got cured!!!!!
muahhh...
Beena had to suffer so much yaar.. poor maan feels so helpless and attitude wah.. tats cool...
update was just awesome dear


will update nxt 2 parts tmrw!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wah ji doctor abhi writer ban gayi😛

Congrats on your first FF sweety . . Will go thru the parts really soon but I'm so sure its gonna be awesome 😃 you are writing it, Maneet in it😳

Loads of love🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ainaGURTI


will update nxt 2 parts tmrw!!!!!

dear i know you will not do tat... and dont evn do... cant see yaar maan like tat..
doctor hain kuch tgo karo...
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Posted: 13 years ago
yet to start reading this...
will read and comment dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

yet to start reading this...
will read and comment dear...


naanum padichuttu comment panren
ainaGURTI thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sia.k_1

Wah ji doctor abhi writer ban gayi😛


Congrats on your first FF sweety . . Will go thru the parts really soon but I'm so sure its gonna be awesome 😃 you are writing it, Maneet in it😳

Loads of love🤗


Sia Darling... *i always was a writer but never wrote much in virtual world... 😭



i just hope its GOOD!!!!! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sdlife19

dear i know you will not do tat... and dont evn do... cant see yaar maan like tat..
doctor hain kuch tgo karo...



Haaan shobha... LL do justice to wat fate has done for maaneet... 😳

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