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Atiffa

@Atiffa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#891

awesome

they are together

love the way Maan tease her

aur is shying and blushing like a new bride

Cont soon

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Mishty Shah

@MishtyShah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#892

awesome yaar fantastic...!! Kya update tha!! Can't wait for the next one!! :)

Aww...maaneet are soo cute!! And Hayyeee...Geet is soo shy!!!!! Absolutely love it! :D Continue soon!

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#893

Part 21
Geet ran to the bathroom. Maan got a little shock.He didn't accept that she would run away like that. After he overcome the shock a sweet smile fromed on his lips. His Geet was still so shy. Suddenly that smile vanished and mad place for pure disgust her rememberd, how he made her dance in those dresses, he closed his eyes in frustations. He took a deep breath and thought about Geet's words. He rememberd how she said that it has been 16 years there is no place for regret. She is right it's time for forgot only for Geet's happeniss and time to life a happy life with his Jaan. His geet.

Geet ran into the bathroom she closed the door. He heart was tudding really loudly. She fellt so shy. She thought about what just happend she felt even more shy. After a while when her heart camled dow. She took a deep breath and opened the door she walked outside. She saw Maan standing infront of the window and he was probably thinking something. He heart started racing again. Oefh yeh dil bhi na. Loses it complety when is sees Maan. She slowly walked towards maan. maan saw her coming from the window glass. When she was really close he turned around and grabbed her by her waist.

M:so Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khuarna aagi aab.

Geet's heart skipped a beat when he said Mrs. Geet Maan singh Khurana.

M:Where were we geet haan. Tum kuch keri ti that beginnes whit I
G:maan I don't know what your talking about. (stammering)
M:Hmm let me give a hint to my jaan. The sentence you wanted to say has three words. It starts with I and ends with you. Come on now be a good girl and say it.
G:Ek minute Mr.Khurana are you a mind reader
M:No
G;Phir how do you now what I wanted to say I ke saath you can make so many sentences.
M:Haan par
G:And I remeber what I wanted to say I wanted to say Maan I think you should tell me what you are thinking. But I couldn't complete because haan because I was nervous to now what you where thinking
M:Geet what you are saying doesn't amke sense
G:hawww you want to say I talk nonesense
M:No I didn't mean that
G:Then what did you mean.

Maan knew that geet would drive him crazy but wouldn't say it. So he decided another aporoach.

M:Geet forget that you didn't answer me back
G:Kis baat pe maan
M:I love you

Geet blushes she look at her hands feeling all shy.

M:Bolo na geet

Geet took all the courage she had and looked up to maan.

G:Maan your really weird
M:I am weird
G:haan
M:Forget and answer my
G:Dehka you proved me again that your weird
M:Geeet
G:Kya geet maan is it a question dad I should answer you back
M:Is what a question geet
G:What you just said
M:What did I just say geet

Geet gave him a glare she knew what he was trying to do but didn't he now how shy she was feeling. oef yeh maan he knows nothing. maan's voice bought geet back to reality.

M:boloho geet
G:Kya bolohu maan
M:what's not a question
G:Maan I forgot

maan suddenly let go off geet.She gave him a confused look. But maan just started at her in anger.

M:You forgot it huh mat bolho jao
G:Maan kaha joa
M:Geet
G:maan aab bhi na and your mood swings oef
M:Forget it

He walked out of the room feeling all frustated. he so badly wanted to hear it after 16 years or yeh geet was making fun of his condition. Fine geet nahi bolhna na hai mat bolo. I won't beg for it either maan thought angerly.

Geet's monologue
yeh to gusse mein aage can't he she how diff it is for me. Maybe I shouldn't tease him par mein kya karthi I was getting nervous and I didn want it to tease him I just wanted to save myself oef geet tum bhi na. I am sure he will be okay after a while.

After a while Maan walked inside the room. Geet looked at him all shying.(haye yeh larkhi kitna sharmathi hai😆)
Maan walked towards the bed geet was feeling all nervous she didn't now why she walked towards the sofa and sat down. Maan was getting even more irritaited. Without paying attention he layed on the bed after 15 minuts geet broke the silence.

G:Maan how did you fall in love with me

Maan sat up immidiatly when her heard her question. He felt his anger soften up.He walked over to her and sat on his knees he grabbed her hand. geet was shaking from inside.

M:Geet I guess I fell for you in the fisrt three months itself. But you now geet whenever I used to feel bad for you or would miss you I would be harder to you. I didn't get how I could care for

Geet knew it was diifecult for maan to talk about it. She didn't want to hurt him.

G:I understand.
M:You now geet these 16 years living in the guilt that meine apni geet ko maar dalha tha uss geet ko whom I loved so much but didn't dare to admitt but when I wanted to it was to late.

Tears formed in Maan's eyes. Geet carresed his hair.

G:bad maan don't say a word about the past I understand. Sorry for starting about it but trust me
M:sssh I know can I have a hug

Ohoh Geet felt suddenly really shy what was happening to her. Couple of hours back she hugged him bat now that he was asking what was happening to her even she didn't now. Geet started getting alle nervous.

G:Maan why don't you go to sleep I am just going to check on the girls.

All the anger raised again in maan hen was hell iiritaited.

Maan's monologue
What's wrong with her kab se she is acting weird. No maan is not not acting weird she just likes troubling you. Just a while back she was fighting with me why I didn't hug her back and now when I ask a hug. maan go to sleep I am goin to check the girls.

Maan stoop up all irritaited.

M:Fine

Geet's monologue
Sorry maan I know your getting angry but I don't now why I am feeling so shy.I know you will be okay after a while. (Ow are you sure geet)

Geet turned around and went to the girls room.

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Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago

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Ruchi

@ruchs

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#894

res!!!

He he ha ha ho ho…

See Me is FIRST!!!!

but will comment tomorrow!!!

In extreme hurry..

BTW… Loved the Shy Geet!!! *wink*

Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#895

HAYEE BABAJI
2 GIRLS KI MOM BANNE KE BAAD B SHE IS FLLNG SO SHY...😆
POOR MAAN 😆😆😆😆
LVLY UPDT..
AB NXT UPDT MAI MAAN KO USKE SABAR KA FAL JAROOR DENA..😆😳😉

Edited by tiakashyap - 13 years ago

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#896

oye kitni sharamati hain yaar..

geet ab bol bhi do yaar./. pati wait kar raha hain ILU ke liye..

mel awesome update

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Shraddha.sinari

@Shraddha.sinari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#897

Nice ye dono toh teen ke tarah behave kar rahe hai ek ILU bolne mein

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#898

Superb update...

Geet hug Maan when she saw him coming inside room because she was worried for him...that time another feeling was dominant on her mind...

now when they are in light mood...she is feeling shy...
because 16 yrs back only for 3 months they lived like a newly wed couple then everything changed...now after 16yrs she is feeling shy because of so many yrs gap... she is feeling like a newly wedded girl...

she will slowly open up to him...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#899

Originally posted by: ruchs
res!!!

He he ha ha ho ho'

See Me is FIRST!!!!

but will comment tomorrow!!!

In extreme hurry..

BTW' Loved the Shy Geet!!! *wink*

she is cute na
will wait for tomorrow
and congo on being first

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#900

Originally posted by: tiakashyap
HAYEE BABAJI
2 GIRLS KI MOM BANNE KE BAAD B SHE IS FLLNG SO SHY...😆
POOR MAAN 😆
LVLY UPDT..
AB NXT UPDT MAI MAAN KO USKE SABAR KA FAL JAROOR DENA..😆😳😉