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Ruchi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#411

Glad to see all is quite back to normal in here…

My dear old Nisha, Ananya and Sara are back!!!😳

Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#412

Originally posted by: Anu-Ananya
Hey babaji yeh sunne se pehle mujhe upar utha liya hota!
Dost ka dhokhe ka dard toh nahin hota *sob*!!

Oh zip it drama queen

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#413

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
and here is my sweet sara
thinking way to kick you out

Khwab De Ke Jhoote Moote,
Batiya Banaye Kaise
Nishu Anari Baiman😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#414

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

*Wiping my tears* aww thank you Nishu!!

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#415

Yeah Sara, Nishu and Ananya are found. But Mel angry you guys didn't help😡.
Me gonna be harder on you guys when it comes to fill the quote. The deal it at the and of the update. Read it if you want a update ladies

Part 15
Maan walked into geet's place. he looked at rehna.

M;Rehna where is Nishu
R:Baby went to sleep way back
M:Oh really how are you so sure about it
R:Woh baby went to bed a while ago
M:Did you check on her
R: no
M:Then how can you be sure she is still there
R:wo I will check right now
M:Leave it but check on them from tomorrow onwards understand
R:ij Saab

Maan went to his room he didn't trust Rehna with his girls. If you hadn't seen Nishu sneaking out God forbid what would have happened. Maan made some calls. He arranged securty around his grils and when geet was back his men would also keep a eye on her. But they would never now. Maan went to Nishu's room. He saw Nishu sitting there blankly. He tapped her shoulder. She looked up.

M:Come to geet's room

Nishu stood up and went directly to Geet's room.Maan sat on the bed

N:Wo there is still blood on your head let me get a firts aid box
M:Sit

Nishu sat down.

N:I am so s
M:Chup bilkul chup. Just answer mu questions.

Nishu nodded, she was too scared and feeling to guilty to say something.

M:Who was that guy, what the hell where you wearing and why where you sneaking out like that.

N:Wo I met him on Uni he is a first year architect student.
M:How old is he
N:18
M:Hmm continue
N:We became friends two moths ago and we started dating a month ago but I didn't let him touch me. I told him I would tell mom first about us before taking any step.He told me to tell mom nothing yet he would come and ask my hand. I told him whatever it was I should tell mom first. We had a fight In the month we dated we never went out or anything and when we talked we just frighted about all these issues. But I really loved him and I didn't want to lose him

Nishu was crying by now. Maan put a hand on her shoulder.

N:He called me today. he said that I don't love him and I lying and if I do I have to prove it to where that dress he gave me and come to address he texted me. We argued very long I never where such a dress I swear. (Between sobs)
M:Shh calm down I believe you
N:I was scared I would lose him so that's why I wore the dress and went to him. I thought once I would do that he wouldn't fight with me and everything would be alright and he would be ashamed of himself and then I could tell mom everything. But instead He tried to touch me but again I didn't let him that's why he become so violent that he tried to ( between hiccups)

Maan side hugged her.Maan felt like going back and hitting him again.

M:Bas Nishu it's okay nothing would ever happen to you since you dad is alive even when I am not there remember, still I will protect and take care of you.

Nishu nodded.

M:Nishu
N:Yes
M:Remember when you like a guy tell your mom, before telling the guy. So we can do a background check and get you engaged. No dating

Nishu nodded.

M:And always remember when a guys tries to touch, before your married or he asked you to wear revealing dress he doesn't love you.
N:Yes I will . I am so sorry fo
M:Shh it's okay you don't need to say sorry.

Nishu looked up to Maan. She totally forgot his wound.She freed her out of maan's hug and stood up.

M:What happened.
N:Your wound let me get a firts aid box
M:Nishu I am fine
N:Please let me clean it up
M:Fine

Nishu got a first aid box and cleaned Maan's wound. After that she laid down on Maan's lap and closed her eyes. Maan caressed her hair. She fell a sleep. Maan picked her up and put her in her bed.

Geet was sitting in her hotal room nothing felt right. She couldn't close a eye she kept thinking about Maan's hand and they way he looked at her with pain in his eyes. She stood up and walked to the balcony.

Geet's monologue
Why does you eyes keep hunting me. What do I care if your hurt, I hate you. But why is hurting me then, why am I feeling so restless. Why does everything feel wrong Was I to hard on you should I give you another chance. But why should if I hate you. And even If I don't hate you what if you would hurt me again. I am not alone this time, now I've got two girls whom I have to take care off. No you can never change I need to stop thinking about those face emotions of yours. We both now what a great actor you are. You proved it the first three months of marriage.

The next morning Maan stood up and went to the kitchen. He started cooking.Nishu came into the kitchen.

N:Good morning. How are you scars do they hurt

Maan turned around.

M:Good Morning Nishu. No I am fine. How are you feeling now
N:I am scared
M:Scared fro what
N:What if he comes again and tries to hurt me
M:He won't he is behind bars and as I told you jab tak your dad is alive nothing will happen to you
N:Thank you
M:Nishu whether you liked it or not I am your dad it's my duty to take care of you so please don't make me feel small by saying thank you
N:No I didn't mean it like that sorry If I hurt you feelings
M:I told you before no need to say sorry it's okay. Sit down I made cheese omelet
N:Yummy I am starving

Nishu tried to be nice to maan she was feeling really guilty she promised herself she would make sure everyone would forgive and love maan again. Ruchi walked into the kitchen. She saw Maan and got iiritaied.

M:Good morning Ruchi will you have a cheese omlet.
R:No thank you I am have breakfast with Sara. I am leaving. rani aunty can come to pick me up any moment. Nishu are you coming.
N:Eh
M:Nishu why don't go have fun

Maan gave Nishu a assuring smile. Ruchi gave maan a weird look. How cared what he thought or wanted Ruchi thought. The bell rang.

N: That must be aunty. Ruchi you go I am coming, just need to grab my bag.
R:Okay

Ruchi left. Nishu walked over to maan.

N:Eh I know you don't want me to thank you but thanks for making me feel bettter and trusting me

Maan smiled and patted on her head.

M:Now go Ruchi must be waiting
N:Eh wo the dress you bought me can I have it.

Maan smiled.

M:of course. It's in the car. Why don't go now. I will give it to you when you back.

Nishu nodded. maan walked with her to the door.

M:Good morning Rani. Thx for picking the girls up. But I will pick them up from your place at 6
R:Theek hai and mention not

Nishu and Ruchi enterd Sara's place.Sara ran towards them and hugged them.

S:Why are you looking sop disturbed Nishu
N:Nothing yaar
S;are you sure
R:It's just maan I think it's bothering her
S:Hmm maybe we should teach him a lesson
N:Please stop leave my dad
R&S:DAD??!

Precap:maan is gone and will Nishu tell what happend???

Next update: guys sara is a special but my kamini friend who has high fever. I want you guys to give her a small message it can be anything from a song to a dhamki to a poem to just a simple sentence. And everyone to do it or else I will pm you to do it and won't update and mel is hell serious.

next:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2943244/dirty-revenge-2-page-1-link-to-thread-3?pn=93

Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago

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504887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#416

Originally posted by: mel420

I thought yeh sirf maan kah right tah😡😆😉

Past isnt present Mel:P

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#417

Originally posted by: Anu-Ananya

Past isnt present Mel:P

😲 playing with words the class did you good🤣

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Ruchi

@ruchs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#418

Aaaye Haaye my Double Update Queen!!!😉

Absolutely amazing update…😃

Loving Maan-Nisha's progress in relationship…😃

Me got sooo happy seeing how Maan handled Nisha so sweetly and maturely…😳

Specially arranging all the security stuff..😳

Maan Dad is really trying verrry hard to make amends…😳

OMG Me talked so rudely with dad…😭

Me must have hurt him sooo much…😭

Glad Geet mom still loves Dad so much!!😳

LOved how Nisha claimed Maan to be her dad!!😳

Awesome update Mel…👏

Love you sooo much… Ummmah...😳

Me thinking what to do for my dear Sara.. Will post soon...😳

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504887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#419

Eh lo yeh toh pura role reversal ho gaya!
Get well soon Sara !!
@ruchs: sorry dear I really forgot! Are you okay now????

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ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#420

awesome update Mel

Sara - Get well soon dear and come back before Mel stops updating...

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