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Pls update t next part soon...eagerly waiting
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PART 16


Manmeet & their family was taken abt to be taken then Manmeet & his family announced that Geet isn't matured physically in front of society.Taayji tried to close this news but Manmeet showed the proof to the whole village that she's immatured physically showing some hospital records which were in the name of Geet.Now Geet came to know that what r periods which come to girls.


Geet had heard her friends talking abt periods but she didn't had any ideas abt that but when Geet came to know abt her health then she was broken down.Geet confronted her family,"Aap logon ne iske baare mein kyun nahin bataaya mujhe...????"Taayji said softly,"Geet beta...hum tumhe pareshan nahin karna chaahthe the...dekho ab tum poori tarah se theek ho chuki ho...doctor ne bhi kaha hai ki bus kuch din aur aur result aane waali hai...!!!!!!"


Taayji was trying to take Geet from the grief becoz she had first shock when she came to know abt Manmeet & now she came to know that she's an immatured girl physically.Geet's eyes welled up & tears started to pour from those almond eyes which bothered Maan very much.


Maan said try to make her come out of the grief,"Geet...woh Manmeet tumhaara laayak nahin tha...isiliye uski asli rang sabke saamne waapas aagayi...aur tumhe uske baare mein sochne ki koi zaroorat nahin...!!!!!!"Geet didn't say anything & she sat there just like a statue without blinking her eyes.Maan saw her state & called a doctor immediately.


Doctor came & checked her up & said that she's in shock & someone wil have to be with her always or else her health can upset.Both Maan and Meera came forward to be with her always.Doctor said to them that she've to eat very soon or else she'll be very weak.Meera tried to make Geet to eat but Geet didn't eat anything still she sat there completely blank.


Maan tried to do all the things but didn't work with Geet becoz still she sat there completely blank.Then Maan thought of something & prepared gol gappas for her from his own hands.When she smells the gol gappe then she fidgets & takes snatches it from Maan & eats it in top speed.When she eats it then she puts the too much of gol gappas into her mouth which makes her spicy & she coughs.


When she coughs then Maan makes her drink some water & she swallows the gol gappes with some water.While Geet eating she smeares some of the spices to her lips & she eats the gol gappas but Maan wipes the spices from her mouth from his hands.When he wipes it then his fingers comes under contact to her soft petal like lips from which he feels like a current run down his spine.


Geet also feels like him but she composes herself & she finishes her gol gappa cutely.Maan saw her when she ate the gol gappas then she was looking adorable.Geet's eyes widened with excitement & she forgot everything which went in previous day but still she had so many complaints with her family & most importantly with Maan.


When she finished her gol gappas then Maan took the plate to dump it for washing then Geet asked,"Kyun us din aapne mujhe par shak kiya??????"Maan was caught off guard but he asked innocently,"Geet...tum kis baare mein baat kar rahi ho?????"And he was abt to go but Geet held his elbow & turned towards her & asked directly,"Aapke college ke farewell party agle din...?????"


Maan said immediately,"Geet...mein haath dho kar aata hoon...!!!!!!"Geet's anger was going to its peak but still she controlled herself & asked sternly,"Mere sawaal ka jawaab deejiye...!!!!!!!!"


Maan tried to avoid her but Geet's anger went to its peak & shouted at him,"KYUN KIYA AAPNE AISA...US DIN MUJH PAR SHAK KAR DIYA KI MEIN AAPKE PAISON KE PEECHE PADI HOON...AUR KAL KYUN MUJHE BACHAAYA...MEIN TOH AAPKE ZINDAGI SE DOOR JAA RAHI THI NA...KYUN BACHAAYA MUJHE US DHOKE BAAZ SE...AAPKE LIYE TOH MEIN OBSTACLE THI NA...PRACHI AUR AAPKE BEECH MEIN...MEIN DEEWAAR BAN GAYI THI NA...KYUN MUJHE BACHAAYA?????BATAAYIYE MAAN AAPSE TOH MEIN DOOR HI JAA RAHI THI NA...??????"


Maan said politely,"Geet mein tumhaara dost hoon aur mein us hessiyat se tumhe bachaaya...!!!!!!"Geet laughed maniacally & asked,"Aap mere dost hai...???????Mujhe toh pata hi nahin tha...ki aap mere dost hai...mujhe toh laga tha ki aap woh dost hai...jinhe dosti ki ya pyaar ki koi ehmiyat hi nahin hai...toh bataayiye meine aisa kya kar diya hai ki aapki meherbaani mujhe mili hai...??????"


Maan's heart had a slight pang while Geet's eyes welled up & tears poured down from those almond eyes.Maan was bothered becoz of tears & said,"Tum ro kyun rahi ho...tumhe maaloom haina ki mujhe tumhaari aankhon mein aasoon achche nahin lagthe...!!!!!!"Geet still laughed sarcastically & said,"Aap mere aankhon mein aasoon nahin dekh sakthe...waah what a joke...sahi hai...dard bhi aap denge aur rone ki permission bhi aap denge...mein toh aapki katputli hoon...jab aap kahenge tab mujhe hasna chaahiye...jab aap rone ke liye kahenge tab mujhe rona chaahiye...!!!!!!!!"


Maan couldn't tolerate her sad words & said holding her shoulder,"Geet...hosh mein aavo...tum kyun aisi behki behki baate kar rahi ho...!!!!!!"Geet asked painfully,"Mein aapse pooch rahi hoon ki aapne mujhe kyun bachaaya us Manmeet se...kyun kya kartha woh maar daaltha...yahi toh huva hai mujhe har baar...mein jab bhi kuch dil se chaahthi hoon...woh kabhi mujhe nahin mili hai...!!!!!!!"


Maan said with shock,"Geet...!!!!!!!"Geet asked,"Kyun aap mere zindagi mein aaye...aur aapne mujhe kyun bachaaya...!!!!!!"After sometime thinking she said,"Oh toh ab samjhi...taaki aap mujhe par phir se shak karde ki mein aapke paison ke peeche padi hoon aisa inzaam lagaane ke liye haina??????"Maan said immediately,"Geet...!!!!!!!!Mein nahin chaahtha ki tum us Manmeet ke chakkar mein phase...aur woh tumhe maarna chaahtha tha...tumhaari property mil jaane ke baad...mein toh tumhe us khooni se bachaya hai...!!!!!!!!!"


Geet shouted angrily,"TOH AAP MUJHE MAR JAANE DIYA HOTA...AAPNE MUJHE KYUN BACHAAYA...!!!!!!!"Maan's heart was paining seeing her grief...her sad words...her pain...and he hugged her immediately.




When he hugged her then her heart started throbbing faster.Geet didn't reciprocate the hug but still she felt contented for her pain.Maan felt her reluctance & said,"Am sorry Geet...mein us din tumse bahut buri tarah se pesh aaya...mujhe maaf kardo...pls mein us din ki harkat ke liye sharminda hoon...pls mujhe maaf kardo...!!!!!!"Geet didn't say anything & she pulled herself from his embrace & went from there still feeling low & sad.


Maan sighed & said to himself,"Mein tumhe asli Geet banaakar rahoonga...mein tumhe kabhi akela nahi chodoonga Geet...i promise...!!!!!!!!"Here Taayji decided to take her family & Khuranas to the Amritsar.Maan,dadimaa,Nikhila were staying seeing the situation to give moral support to Handas in this bad phase.Brij got friendly with Maan & very much liked his behaviour.Brij wanted Maan to marry Geet but he can't say that when they know the truth of Geet but Brij still had hope from babaji.


Geet on the other hand still was hating Maan for that day incident & was ignoring Maan completely.Maan was disturbed becoz of Geet's behaviour.Maan couldn't tolerate her ignorance & wanted to be her attention forever.Maan tried to distract her to him then Geet would shout at him hoarsely.Now Maan's hot temper had transferred to Geet.Geet hated his appearence powerfully but still her eyes searched for him only which Nikhila noticed.


Precap-Maaneet married in Amritsar in golden temple.😃




Previous Part 15-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2923708/do-sapne-thread-01?pn=45

Teaser 01-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2923708/do-sapne-thread-01?pn=53

Next Part 17-
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2923708/do-sapne-thread-01?pn=56
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem update geet outburst on maan maan trying to make her lively again



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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update 😊Maan making gol gappe & Geet couldn't resist 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg.. cant wait for t next epi.. pls update soon. i know its a bit greedy 😉😉😉😉😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
good one...so i guess now the story will move to present...
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Posted: 13 years ago
bechari bahut confused ho rahi hai maan ko lekar
not surprising since even maan is confused about his feelings for geet
but it all works out for them thankfully
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update geet and maan talk superb golgappy i love tooo
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Posted: 13 years ago
poor geet has to suffer so much
her outburst on maan just reflects her state of mind
superb updt
depictd geets emotnal state beautifully!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
UPDATE SOON PLS WAITING EAGERLY

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