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Posted: 13 years ago
love can do ny magic...during some worst situations only loved one can erase all th pains...n in this situation only maan can do this to geet...hope that geet will sn forget all those bitter memories...n maan will have patience to bring back his mishty from a wild geet...
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Posted: 13 years ago
dear...😛
4 Pming me dear..Tongue.
ur updates r just .⭐️..
me just .😳...
keep the job up dear..👏..





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Posted: 13 years ago
that was a wonderful update...

blissful moment after their separation of 5 years...

loved it completely
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey divz!!!!
me blushing...
no words... well this was hot...
interesting precap...
me waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago



Break Away

Part 12


he moved his face a little down planting a sweet kiss over her shoulder and whispered...Good Morning Misthy...when she smiled at him murmuring...Good Night Maan...

He smiled at her gesture, she haven't changed a bit, in these years, even hid distance couldn't help her move on neither was he enough capable to do that, their Love was never bound to be with each other, neither bound to this distance between them, it always have this incredible capability to grow with passing time...with each second it doubled and tripled increasing its effect on each other making them vulnerable to each other...he looked at her and slowly turned her round to face him, she smiled sweetly in her sleep hugging his torso gliding her soft hands over his bare chest, hiding her face in his chest, while he snacked his hands round her waist gluing her more to him, and groaned when she packed his chest sensuously rubbing her soft cheek over his clean shaved chest and warned...don't do that else you know...

She giggled looking at her effect on him and his desperation to have her close and snorted back...What have I done, you forgot am sleeping...she said in an innocent voice as if she haven't done anything, he smirked at her and smiled fishily...acha ji, then let me teach this sleeping beauty of mine a sweet lesson...and in a fit of second he pinned her down to the mattress and made his move placing himself over her, pressing her petite structure under him and took her lips in his while she gave in wiling still with closed eyes letting him devour her mouth, he took her upper lip in his hot desirable mouth, sucking and biting making him go wild in pleasure, forcing her to respond back to him with equal fervor and he opened his mouth slightly and she took a chance undertaking the whole charge and kissed him with all her will pulling him closer to her more and more holding his vest in her fists and kissed him senseless, sucking his lower lip, biting and licking the copper taste oozing out from the corner was making both insane, she plunged in her long silky touch tasting his each crevices where he was just enjoying his dominance over him, letting her do whatever she want and need...breaking all the thoughts and there was no backing off from now and both were aware of it the only thing which they both now need was the confrontation and the confessions...

Maan's closeness was making her vulnerable now, and the thought what they actually need to talk was making her week, Maan moved from her lips to her neck, she arched her back in desperation when he nipped her skin and her eyes brimmed with a few tears she held onto the bed sheet tight in his fist crushing the creased cotton in her hands when he rubbed his skin with hers, making her quiver with fear and pleasure, an unknown feeling enveloping her heart and mind where she dint knew what to think or do...he nuzzled closer to her holding her waist pulling her closer and closer where she was starting feeling restless with the thoughts of what she need to confront him, the flashes of that horrendous night flashing in front of her eyes and she closed her eyes shut not willing to let them over power her before she talk to him, before she make him understand not to come close to her when she is not in her senses, not be there, she might hurt him...the thought was enough to make her tremble, hurting him, hurting her love...she wanted to voice out to him to let go now...he should leave but nothing came in her throat...

Maan please go to washroom, freshen up, I'll make some breakfast, A will be coming soon as well...She managed to say, trying to shove him away not willing to hurt him

Geet can I ask you something...he said nuzzling close to her neck

Hmm...that was all she could say lost in some unknown fear over powering her

Do you know him...??? he said kissing her forehead with closed eyes while her eyes shot open her breath got rugged she was about to shove him off but something stopped her hands and she looked at his serene face closing her eyes yet again trying hard to control her bursting emotions she just managed to mutter...no...

Have you ever seen him before...he asked another question but she was finding it difficult to hold her own self, her conscious now

Do I know him, have you ever seen him before...he asked again but no response yet again she knew she was losing it again but trying hard to control not at least in front of him, please no...NO...DONT MAKE ME DO THIS...Please God don't make me harm the only person I love more than my own life...that's what she was praying all the while

Can you recognize him...he was getting restless now hearing no response from her, he came close to her eyes feeling her shaking self when he finally looked at her and the scene in front of him was enough to shook his entire being...she was lying numb with her eyes closed, her body was turning cold, her face was having those sweat beads following their paths down her bony cheeks, hands clutching the sheet tight in there fist, her breath was getting rugged with each passing minute and her heartbeat was raising frantically making him engulf in a fear of something worst he never sort for...he looked at her as if he wasn't able to come up with a thought what exactly was happening, or what shall he do in such a condition, he knew she might be facing her trauma or something related to her health only, but he dint knew how to cope up...how to feel when such a condition arise, or when she is having her fit attack, he wasn't prepared for it, he moved himself from her top and slides to her side, still holding her smoothly in his hands, coming a little above to face her he patted her cheeks slightly calling out her name...Geet...Mishty you ok...open your eyes Jaan...he called out for her desperately but she dint reacted she dint budged may be still finding her wits to control her emotions not to harm her love...

He called out for her but her lack of response was making him restless now and he came over her and pecked her forehead calling her name yet again but to his utter dismay she pushed him off so hard that his back pierced the corner pulling the side curtains down with him and letting the table lamp fall in process...he was startled at her sudden behavior not able to make it up what and how it happened forgetting about the immense pain in his back he was more worried for his Jaan, he looked up to her she was crawling over her knees, curling up in a ball on the side of bed hiding herself behind the curtains as if protecting herself from something, he dint knew what happened all he knew was her safety and her calmness, he tried to go near her but she backed off, confused and utterly shocked he pulled on the boxers and shorts looking at her keenly, he slowly made his way back to her, she still backed off and hit the bed back, when he came close to her and held her arms slightly, she jerked it away, not letting him touch her, he closed his eyes in pain to see his Mishty like that but he knew she was not in her full conscious and was doing all this in sub-consciousness of hers, he took a slow step towards her yet again and tried to touch her but she again jerked off his hand...Leave me...her voice was hoarse, filled with pain making him go numb with the fear in her cold voice...closing his eyes to calm the surge of emotions filling in him he opened his eyes again with a week smile and called out for her again

Geet please jaan...he said helplessly when he tried yet again but she shoved off his hand again...I said leave me...there was a certain pitch in her voice making him tremble with her sharpness, he have never in his life heard such a voice of hers, but today he was facing something worst, may be just a beginning of his suffering with hers, his fight to get her back from her own self...he determinedly pulled her to himself holding her arms a little tighter making her look at him, but she was in no mood to listen, he jerked her look at him but she dint budged trying to get out of his hold, prey him off he started frantically hit him everywhere and anywhere...he roared in sheer helplessness...Geet listen to me...

I said leave me...she hit his chest while he held her elbow blocking her movements but she was insane, the adrenaline rushing in her body was giving her an incredible power which was getting difficult for him to handle...you'll regret

And what if I don't...

Maan won't leave you...get your hands off me...he'll kill you...she said smiling cockishly to him while he just stared at her in disbelieve, what could he say when his own love was getting scared of him, hurting him and at the same time defending him saying he'll save her, save her from what, from himself...he dint knew what to think what to do, but tightening his hold over her encircling her legs with his blocking her movements he tried to calm her down, but her continuous wriggling, biting to free herself was making his body sore with teeth and nail marks, but he cared less, and he knew he can't leave her else she may hurt herself...but then she banged her head hard with him he was shocked with the sudden force, the attack was totally over his thoughts his head swinged in a clockwise direction and then h looked at her, she was feeling dizzy, with such a strong hit over her head she felt her head getting heavy and she was drifting off into her unconscious state when he held her

Mishty...he said with all his love and care and she just looked into his eyes, lost in those dark eyes, feeling her a little calm he took her in his arms cocooning her, trying to calm her down, he pulled her in his lap letting her rest over her shoulder while her hands hung sideways lifelessly, rocking her to and fro making sweet melody in his chocking voice, with tears brimming his lashes he tried to calm her down, feeling her calm heartbeats and soothed breaths he thought maybe she is asleep now, he managed to somehow calm her down a little pulling the duvet over her, covering her till her chest and made his was out to dial Armaan's number and told him about this all...

Armaan I don't know what happened to her she is behaving all wild and weird, somehow I manged her down till now...she is asleep now but, please tell me what shall I do...

Calm down Maan, don't panic, she have her medicines kept in her left side drawer pull them out and inject her, am just on my way please 5 minutes handle her, I'll be there soon...

But

But what Maan...he screamed in anger

I don't know how to give injection, I never...but before he can say anything they heard a loud noise of glass being broken in several pieces making Maan, Armaan and Ridhz all jump up in horror...it took a second for all to get it that the noise if from Geet's room may be she is hurting herself

Maan don't go near her, keep a safe distance...Maan...Maan...God demit Maan...Armaan screamed over the phone but Maan threw the phone off and ran for his life inside the room looking at her in horror she was having her hand oozing out of blood from the glass she have broken a while ago from the dressing table, and having a sharp edged in her naked palms, piercing the soft skin more...

He was startled with the scene dint knew what else to do when he looked at her approaching him with the same glass in her hands ready to kill in there and then, he dint got the chance to defend himself when the sharp edge pierced his chest and he looked at his black vest getting wet and torn, he looked up to her and there she was again ready to attack him but this time he was fast enough to save his stomach from getting pierced directly but in a swift moment he got his arm scratched...

I'll kill you, you will try to harm my Maan, I will kill you before that...she was screaming frantically swaying her arms like an untamed wounded lioness ready to kill the prey in front of her...I am your Maan, see here...your Maan is here with you...Maan tried to tell her but she was not in a mood to listen...no you not...and she screamed yet again pulling her hand up right and swayed trying to pierce Maan's heart directly with the sharp edge of glass piece...aaahhh...but Maan was fast enough to hold her hand right above his heart, just bruising a little scratching his skin making a little blood come out of his skin, he winced in pain but it had no effect over her, she was nowhere to feel her own love's pain, his hurt, she was not feeling anything... she struggled tried to cut open hi already bleeding wound while he just kept her hand intact looking at her dangerous structure in front of his eyes, the time when she couldn't even hurt a single insect and here she was ready to kill her own love, what have God gone and done with its most delicate and innocent creation, the person who can never harm anyone, who couldn't even see a single tear drop in far strangers eye because of her, now here she was slitting her own love's heart, what have they ever done to deserve it, were they that bad, have they done any sin for which they are cursed to go through this scorching hell living their lives, what happened to their small paradise which now look no less than a hell...his heart bleed to look at her like this, to look at his love going though so much, the pain his soul was feeling right now was much more than the external pain his skin was feeling right now...his life was shattered, scattered in millions of pieces ready to pierce his soul one by one, what could he do now, when he was not there to save her from drowning in this hell all alone all these years, his guilt, his anger, his aggression on self was growing more and more passing each second and trail, where his life, she was oblivious to all this lost in her own self, in her anger, in frustration, in helplessness, in love for her Maan...she dint knew what she was doing, hurting her own Maan, she was there stabbing her Maan in her lost mind

Looking at her intently he forgot when his hold loosened and she was once again about to stab him with her own bleeding, wounded hand right above his heart, strongly this time when a screamed echoed in the room falling on deaf ears lost in their own oblivion...

Maaannn...Amy screamed in vain to a deaf Maan looking at his mishty lost, and caught hold on Geet's hand right on time when she again managed to bruise his heart slightly, pulling Geet away from Maan when Ridhz entered the scattered room, looking at the scattered glass pieces and blood all over the floor and then at shattered soul of Maan looking with his misty tearful eyes at his Jaan...Maan...Ridhzi whispered jolting him out of his traumic condition he looked up to Ridhz and then back to Geet who was aimlessly, mercilessly trying to prey off Amy's grip, throwing her lega and hands in air screaming in pain, when Amy managed to drag her on her knees to the couch holding her arms tight

Dr. Ridhima, Injection...Amy screamed and Maan looked at Ridhz how nodded to Armaan and then blinked her eye lashes to Maan in a comforting way telling him she'll be fine now, they here, they'll take care, nothing will happen to her...and moved outside preparing injection for her

But what have he seen, what have he gone through in just half an hour no one can wonder, no one can think about his situation, it's just he who knows how he survived this half an hour looking at her in such a vulnerable condition such a pathetic helplessness of hers, such wildness of her anger, he knew how he survived with this chocked breath all the while till now...he looked at Amraan who was trying hard to calm her down holding her arms while she was screaming, crying in extreme pain, in anger, with blood rushing down each inch of her skin, her screams, her pleads, her pain was killing him, rotting him inside now...he took a few steps back, in helplessness, in anger on self, in agonization, looking her in such a condition was never his wildest of dream as well, and here his nightmare was turning real and he dint knew what to think or what to do, banging with the wall hard with his back plastered with the wall, he thumped down the ground lifeless

What have they done to deserve this, his mishty was the purest of the souls living on this damn earth then why she, why they have to go through all this, what have they ever done to deserve this, the person who always believed in you, in her thick and thin who never left her unbound faith on you why is she going through all this, why is she having so much pain, why is she enduring this hurt in her soul that she is not able to live in peace of this world, when she always bowed down in her happiness thanking you, smiled at her defeat saying it was your gift...why...why you gave so much pain to her...just simply why...he asked questioning that almighty, her baba ji for her...

He pulled his knees closer to his chest encircling his hands round pulling them closer to him, to stop his bleeding heart, he rocked to and fro calming his own pain looking at her like this keeping his chin over his knees with tears rolling down his chiseled face, telling the pain his brown eyes were enduring looking at his love, his life, his mishty like this...he looked at Ridhz without a blink when she gave her injection, her flinch at the slight pain while slitting the skin during injecting her dint go unnoticed by his trained sharp eyes, he looked at her continuously with all his love and affection, his helplessness, and pain, his anger and frustration and she slowly and steadily drifting off to sleep, with pain reflecting clearly on her tear stricken face...tracing her angelic face telling her misery...

He silently preyed to her baba ji, asking him to give all her pain to him and relieve her from this agonization...

Precap: Geet looked up to witness the most serene scene of her life

'A' with her Dadda!!

PS : Dint have time and capability to sit for more on lappy so dint got the time to check as well, bear with me and mistakes showie in advance

Hope am successful in portraying their pain, actually to be true I wasn't satisfied with myself writing this but I dint have the power to check it again so whatever it went, I wrote it in one go

So Jhell lo mereko!!


Can you guys help me out finding

Maan's little beast Aahana Singh Khurana

our 'A'

please am confused now!!

give me options for A 5 year old baby girl


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Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

no words to describe the update..

it was so... so.. so... painful.. i mean in her attack she does not even kinow tat its maan whom she is piercing with the glass..
but m confuse here now.. tat does she know who tat person was.. is there some hidden truth in this,,,
Edited by sdlife19 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
what can i say about this update speachless
first of all i hate this rape thing which happened here
and who is the person who did tjis is known to maan i think
he might be maan's enemy or his cousin or someone known to him
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Posted: 13 years ago
my god!!!!totally awesome and mind numbing update!!the story is gettng soo much intense with each part.can't wait for the culprit to come out,i'm guessing tht was rather a revenge crime than a random one.only u know wht u are planning to show in future bt nonetheless i hope they can leave the pain and win with their love to enjoy the bliss of love together.
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Posted: 13 years ago
fantabulous sweety loved geet's pain how she changed immediately when d part of her horror night came into her mind vision.and do take care of u shona.awesome update sweety👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan asking about culprit geet wild maan hurt



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