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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

READ THIS FF IN ONE GO AND IT WAS AWESOME

READ MAAN'S MONOLOGUE AND HIS GUILT TRIP HIS ANGUISH HIS REGRET FOR HIS BEHAVIOUR
BUT DID NOT KNOW HIS SIN WAS SO BIG
HE ONLY WANTED A WAARIS FROM HER
HE KEPT ON HAVING AFFAIRS WITHOUT A THOUGHT FOR HER FEELINGS AND POOR THING MANAGED ALL HIS AFFAIRS FOR HIM JUST TO KEEP HIM HAPPY WITH THE HOPE THAT HE WILL CHANGE
BUT WHEN HE ABORTED HIS OWN CHILD, THAT WAS TOO MUCH EVEN WITH HER SELF SACRIFICING NATURE AND SHE GAVE UP ON LIFE
MAAN DOES NOT DESERVE HER AND EVEN IF SHE GETS WELL SHE SHOULD LEAVE HIM
JUST BECAUSE HE IS REMORSEFUL NOW, IT IS DIFFICULT TO FORGET WHAT HE DID TO HER


thnxaaa a lot lot lot
fr such a lovly cmnt
n he will suffr dnt wry
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritusoni2233

maan is so cheap yr


so selfish

so dun knw wat to say grrr

he has vry rude yr

geet says he hav nly child no mhthr

plzzz geet jaldi thik ho jaye

waiting 4 next


hehehe jaana itna gussa
acha nahi 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelic_analyst

So Sorry For late comment dear
I was stuckkk




aowww no wries 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelic_analyst

Part-7
Omggg whats wrong with Maan

WHy he is acting so weird oNlyyy crying from Last 7 parts

bUt the baby, papa part was cute




hehehehehehe yaa right
u know yeh maine b nahi socha tha
i rly mad him cry since last 7 ups ROFLzzz 🤣🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelic_analyst

Part- 8
Arghhh
Finally you reveal the truth
first i was feeling bad for maan
but the way geet said all the things
HUhhh
I just hate Maan
which type of Man he is
HE deserve this lesson.
Divziii let him suffer a bit tpooo


hehehehe two post main huge trnsfration LoLzzz luvd it 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tazeen_29

GOSSSHhh!!!!!!!!! its too emotional and very frustrating for Geet and nw for Maan..awww!!!!! unconditional love of geet ..plz cont soon ,don't talk too long with ur Bhua😉...


hehehe i got it ovr aftr 2 days now 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nasioush

Ummm...such a dukh vari part...past reavealed...nd u dushti ladki...precab se mujhe dara rahi... jaldi de tushi ab


hehehehe beta abhi tere marne main tym hai
ab hrt attack le
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: yashviagarwal

wowww
kya update diya
love u
muuaahhh
plzzz hope that maan gets geet back soon
y should she suffer coz of him
let maan suffer
now geet should not giv in to maan
then he shuld suffer


shalam aa gayi 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnxuuu evryone for you love and spprt
really overwhelmed with it

divzi bow down in gratitude for everyone
hate off to evry single person here

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Posted: 13 years ago

A Life For You
Part 9

the fear of losing her

was a sudden jerk to him that he dint knew what went on and what went wrong here

he just freeze but he knew her importance

her need, her effect on him

he came to know the most vital thing of his life on this crucial moment

his love for her

know he came to knew what happens if we lose someone so close to our heart

so close'

at the verge he was about to lose her he came to know her importance

all the way he just chanted a few words

Choking with each word

mishthy'come back'please for once

Please come back jaan

he sat there crying holding baby's feet pouring his heart out

m sorry baby...it's all because of me...just me

I Love your mum baby

I really do...I LOVE HER more than myself more than anything

I JUST LUV HER

Baby tell your mumma to forgive dad and come back to him

please...tell her to come back to me...to us

i won't be able to survive if she is not there...

Please tell your mumma to forgive dad for once

I promise I will give a life to you...

A life just for you...only and only for you

A life for my love

I'll give away everything,

just for her comeback safe secure to me in my embrace again

please baby help your stupid idiot useless dad na

He cried his heart in front of that little angel of them,

of there inexperienced love for each other, the selfish unbound love of them

he cried everything out trying hard to comfort himself

but with each passing minute, second...it was becoming hard to handle anymore for him

he was shattered, broken down n the only ray of light was Geet

his wife, his Geet, his love, his mishthi


suddenly some words hit hard on his ear drums...

doctor'please come soon Mrs Khurana'her nerves are dropping'come soon

a single sentence from the nurse to doctor shook the whole world of this mere petty human

his sobs chocked his throat he felt his life is snatched away

he moved his gaze above the feet of that little angel just to see her eyes and then looked at her face and than her closed eyes

I won't let your mumma do this to us

I won't let this happen now

Not anymore'never

I cried a lot'I cried behind an extent I was suppose to

Not anymore

He wiped his tear traces and got up from the floor

Maan Singh Khurana won't let his life get away like this

Not in this birth Geet'Not in next on in any birth

You have to be mine'And you will be

MSK won't let you go Mrs Khurana

I won't leave you like this

He said in a determined tone

You know MSK gets what he desires and you are not just my desire you are my need

My need to breath'my need to survive' need of my heart to beat

The pleasure of these eyes'the blood running in these veins

I will get my life'my love back at any cost

I will get back the mother of my child back

He smirked at his determination

And bent a little to kiss the little hands of that small pink cotton ball

Dada promise you baby'I will get your mumma back

Trust your dad once baby

I won't leave your mum that easy

He said winking at the little angle with smile on her lips and a tear at the corner of her eyes

Saying so and promising in his heart he stepped out of the ICU

And made drifts towards the OT

He stood for a minute near the glass pane on the door and looked at his lifeless life lying on the bed

And traced his fingers on the window pane

He looked at the panicking doctors, tensed staff, the threatened sweating nurses and the fearing doctor standing tring there best to get her back to life

Who will tell this to him now'doctor said tensed with a sweat pearls trailing down his forehead

He'll kill us everyone

You have to come back Mrs. MSK

You know if you can fight with life to live with this MSK you are strong enough to fight with death

You will come back

He enters the ICU slowly and made his way towards her lifeless fairy and the blank line of ventilators

Mr. Khurana please you are not allowed to enter here it's not safe

Please we need you out

But maan was not in a mood to listen he just moved in his pace towards him

And slowly stood right beside her bed

Mr. Khurana are you listening please we need you to get out of here

Please


doctor orders ward boy with her eyes to take him out and Ward boy reluctantly took his arm in his hands and was about to drag him when Maan just simply took his hands away from him

And showed him his hand not even sparing a look to him

And took her hands in his

Doctor closed her eyes to gather wits and answer

Mr Khurana we lost her

That was it'he moved his furious gaze towards her

Anger, frustration, anguish, devastation, destruction, rage

Everythin was just enough to burn anyone more than the fire of hell

Doctor gulped her saliva down and again tryn make her point clear

She is no more Mr. Khurana

We lost her

please


Precap: 🤢😡 A Life For You ..!!..


Prev:Part 8 Next: Part 10


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Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago

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