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Posted: 13 years ago



Heart Of Heart
Part 21


There endless call came to an end when maan knocked on dev's room

Dev are you coming or shall we three move all alone without you

We already getting late and you

I really wonder what taking you this long to get ready...maan screamed banging hard the door

Bro just coming wait for a while'he answered back

Ok call you two afterwards now'need to go bye...miss you two'and hangs up the call'making his way out

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Dev, Annie, Dadi and Maan the four were enjoying every second of their holidays...Annie did a lots of shopping, freaking out the hell of her two brothers who use to carry the heavy bags of their little princess...dadi maa was taking a relaxing brake from the hectic schedule of office and business, mostly found in her room where the three were often out roaming the crowdy lanes of swizz, Dev was unpredictable in all this he us to shamelessly stare at the half naked girls on beech still sneaking for mobile from Maan to call his shehzadian, and sometimes all sad sad thinking, or shall I say DevDas style missing his Parro..ooppss Nt...

In all this our calm sweet, yet sizzling hot Maan was no less than a Majnu...when he is with annie dev or dadi he is in his senses but the time he is alone he you can easily find lost in himself, he used to walk alone on beaches thinking of his Mishty, sit on lonely hotel terrace dreaming her mishty, and even fantacising how she must be looking right now...he cursed himself for getting so much drunk that he couldn't even remember her face clearly...he wanted to meet her again, let it be the last time...but then chuckles at his own thoughts...as if I'll let her go after that...

The holidays were all smooth and relaxing for everyone and they were enjoying it being with one other was something they always crave in the busy life style of delhi...but what can they do...dadi alays busy with office, she worked hard to maintain business and family but at her age she was soing more than enough...dev ,Annie and Maan were mostly busy with there studies although deb being dev was mostly hanging round his shehzadian but still he sneak out time for family but this was something they needed...

So everyone was giving their best to give ample time to family...to each other

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And back to delhi...days were all same..Geet, Sam, Nt and Veer having lots of fun parties, picnics, movies, shopping and what not the poor Veer always stuck between the three, his cradits almost swiped and he was forced to beg Papa ji for his Credit as the three girls were nowhere near stopping there shopping since last 4 days no one have a meal at home...from kulcha in morning breakfast to fast food and golgappa's from street wanders in lunch and finely the posh classy dinner in hotels...even Mumma Papa ji wasn't saying anything as they knew Veer is with them and after these days Veer will be leaving for collage and Nt will be in 10TH and the other two will not get a chance to enjoy time with them...so they let them enjoy and relish this time fully

Nt cracked the nut out of Rahul, braking up and patching up every day, she still use to sneak out at nights for clubs and discs with her idiot friends parting and sometimes drinking as well... but no one came to know...Veer was all the while spending his time with his three princess...making there every wish come true and living his life with them peacefully treasuring it in his heart...Sam used to sneak a few time with her research and school works but when it come to being with her family, she will give up everything...What to say for our princess she always have something fishy in her mind to play on others...the little bomber was all bent on playing pranks and making Veer, Sam and Nt in trouble

BUT...nights...that was the most difficult time for Geet how ever strong she might have showed and spends her whole day living and loving her nights were still haunted by her prince charming, by her Maan, her silent cries, her hearty sobs, her cracked voice, those wrecked whimpers and the chocked breaths all were just for Sam to share silently each night...

She wished each night to wake up and see his face and each day to sleep with his face but nothing was there...she dreaded to wake up if she is not able to see his face, but she knew it is not possible

She prayed for the single look of his, the single breath in the same air, the feeling he gave with him around, the love she felt with his presence,, the single glance of his handsome face to glitter her dead soul...BUT NOTHING WAS THERE

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It was the day he was suppose to come...MAAN was comin...her Maan...

She was more then hapy she woke up early in the morning got ready with the ever gorgeous smile on her face...the smile she lost somewhere last few days...

Sam knew the reason of her smile...the smile she wished was there but prayed to stay forever...

Baba ji iss jhalli pe apni mehar bnaaye rakhna...always keep your hand on her...Sam prayed silently looking up to heavens

Geet puttar where you going today...I don't know that Veer has planed anything yet so where you going...Mumma asked feeding Geet who was nibbling her pranthas in hurry as if she was getting late for somewhere...

Mumma am not going with bhai today...I have an important work with pinky so need to go her home...getting late will be back by evening...Geet answer

While Sam knew where and why exactly she was going...but thought of something and asked...Geet I'll be going with you...Sam said in one go ignoring her angry glares and left for kitchen to place her plate

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Geet we standing here on airport since three hours now and swizz flight have landed since long all the passengers are out...he is not here...Sam said irritated the Nth time...

Just a few minutes more Sam please... I need to see him please

Wait lemme ask in enquiry now...Sam made her way to the counters while Geet waited restlessly for her to come back...

But least she expected Sam to gave her the most deadly news...Gudia he hasn't boarded the flight, he dint came back yet...Sam placed a hand on Geet's shoulder trying to console her

That is not possible...Geet said and ran away leaving a baffled and scared Sam behind but Sam knew she have to get out of it...she have to...and that to alone

So she gave her her space for a few time and dint ran behind her knowing where exactly she is

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switch on the song link 😊

Mahi ve


O - maahi ve, maahi ve, maahi ve, maahi ve, maahi ve...

A high volume song was lingering in a pitch dark hall...no light was even allowed to enter the hall...But someone was there, someone lost in her own Darkness...praying this darkness to engulf her within in...

Geet was in the hall dancing furiously last 2 hours, hurting herself, taking her pain out on her own self...her vigorous moves sweaty body and those teary eyes were making the dark room darker...

O - maahi ve, maahi ve, maahi ve, maahi ve, maahi ve...
Maahi ve mohabbata sachiya ne...
Maahi ve mohabbata sachiya ne mang da naseeba kuch hor hai...

She twirls round and round continuously...lost her each sanity in the pain she was bearing last 5 days...the longing she was living last few days...the feeling she was embedding inside all the while

Her each cell, each neuron was calling out for him...just for once even...may be the last time but she wanted to feel him...so true the words were for her...her love...her unconditional love for him was the biggest and the purest truth of her world...


Maahi ve mohabbata sachiya ne mang da naseeba kuch hor hai...

what else she could have wished else then the same love from him...nothing...for her if she got his love he would get everything but see the irony she can't tell this to him

she swings her hands in air freely and twists her body with the rythem

Kismat de mare asi ki kariye...

More tears flows from her hazels drenching her rosy cheeks...her closed eyelids were all socked with the uncountable tears...she shakes her body to the beats and unconsciously more tears flew down

Kismat de mare asi ki kariye...
Kismat de mare...oh asi ki kariye
Kismat te kis da zor hai
Maahi ve, maahi ve...maahi ve...maahi ve


She gestures her forehead with the beats, asking god what actually destiny holds for her, cursing her own destiny for not being able to meet her own love...but knew what can be done...She can't control this...

She twirls round and makes her face her back to glasses of the dance hall...forgetting, losing herself in the darkness...to find solace of his embrace...


Ik taraf ishq hai tanha tanha
Ik taraf husn hai rusva rusva

She smiles at her fate and leans back on the thick iron railing lifelessly...what does she really have in these dark lines engraved on her palms...smiling bitterly on her own self


Ik taraf ishq hai tanha tanha
Ik taraf husn hai rusva rusva
Dono bebas huye hai kuch aise
Kare to kise kare hum shikva
Maahi ve...

So true na her love was always lonely always aloof...she felt as if her love was dishonoured, disgraced by not being recognized and loved back the same way...she felt so helpless and sacred with her oen feelings but whom to complain...she was the one who chose it...

She was twisting and flowing with the beat of rhythm flawlessly making Angels cry for her...the rain pouring out was shedding its tears with her...


Maahi ve, shikayta sachiya ne...mang da naseeba kuch hor hai
Maahi ve mohabbata sachiya ne mang da naseeba kuch hor hai
Maahi ve...maahi ve...ve!

She knew her complains, her cries were all right but whom to complain, whom to shed these tears she dint knew...she knew her love is true but she also knew destiny hold it otherwise...what she dint knew was what actually destiny holds for her...



Dil na tootey kudha ka yeh ghar hai
Tere sajde ve mein mera yeh sar hai


She places her head on back on the glass wall with her hands accompanying there lifelessly as if a corpse was nailed to the wall brutally...feeling her thudding heart which might burst out any moment

Dil na toothey kudha da yeh ghar hai
Tere sajde ve mein mera yeh sar hai
Maut se daar nahin lagta mujhko
Sirf tumse judaai ka daar hai
Maahi ve...

She bows her head in homage of almighty not losing her beats...praying him not to brake his own home...not to shatter her heart like this...she smiles at the lyrics because that was what she ever felt...she never feared the death...but the nightmare haunts her day and night always...

She shrieks with the thought itself...forgetting she is living the same nightmare right now

Maahi ve, ey neeta sachiya ne...par mang da naseeba kuch aur hai
O - Maahi ve mohabbata sachiya ne mang da naseeba kuch aur hai

Her wishes, her prays, her each bow was from her heart but what else does this fortune want she dint knew...she dint had enough courage to know...she gets away from the glas and starts again with her track

She was hurting herself her week body, her shivering structure her sweaty clothes all were the proof of her own torture which she was giving to herself


Kismat de mare asi ki kariye
Kismat de mare...oh asi ki kariye
Kismat de mare asi ki kariye
Kismat te kis da zor hai

Her uncountable sobs, he uncontrollable heartbeat the fear she lost him, the ache to loose him...everything was taking its toll what does this damn unfortunate luck of her wants from her...this was the single question lingering in her mind and heart...

Maahi ve, maahi ve...maahi ve...maahi ve
Maaahi ve...maahi ve

She twirls round and round and round again...not in her senses...not knowing what else to do...she just was twirling when she felt dizzy, and closed her eyes to surrender herself in the darkness...

She was about to hit the floor when two manly hands hold her tight to himself...cocooning her in his safe embrace...he patted her cheeks getting worrying as an unknown far engulfed in him...when she opens her eyes

The darkness and the hair strand hinder his view of the angelic face...but her cloudy hazels caught him...he drowned in them...


Precap: will he recognize him 😉 and will they meet

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Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
update do next soon



Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet hurting herself do next soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg!they met..!i cant believe it...
beautiful one..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome Update ..you left us at cliff hanger waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update...
but you left us on cliff-hanger😡
please update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it.
thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesoome...
superb...
loved it...
thanx for d pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
pls sweety let maan and geet meet soon pls
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he will nt recognize her face bt he will definitely recognize her touch her smell...she is so mch dewani in her tender age what will happen when she will b matured...her lv will reach on to what extent...bt maan v kuch kaam nehi...when u know u lv someone bt u never see her/his face...ummm thats really a sweet feeling...

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