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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzlingdivz


yuppp missy updying it now
LFU may be 2night bt cnt say
u know my allergies


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Posted: 13 years ago

Heart Of Heart
Part 4

wo to hai hi humara sabse pyaara pota'dadi maa kissed his cheeks

or humara kya ??? loud annoyed voice banged the hall

lo aa gaye aapke do monsters sambhalo ab inhe


monsters...annie looked annoyingly
we...dev pouted...yaa yaa ab humaari kisi ko kyaa padi hai...hum to hospital se churaaye hue hai na...humaara kyaa

nautanki...
maan murmured

haan haan ab yahi sunn na reh gaya tha...
annie faked anger

bacho...you know your maan bro again won the match...
dadi said excitedly

what...
both screamed in unison...


yippyyy...
Broo...I love you...love you...love you...
annie chirruped kissing maan's cheeks

me to...
dev hugged maan tight with his full power

aahhh...leave me you monsters I can't breath
shuuu...


Why should we...
If we love you this very much...
dev and annie answered squeezing maan more in there little arms

so...
dev started amazingly
no...maan got a little scared
we...annie continued
please not this time...I am running short of money...
he pleaded

want partyyy'...
both screamed in his ears...

Aahhh my ears...will you leave me

annie you are too young...n dev you can't even manage to come for my match now you want party
hain...
maan made a vain attempt of shrugging off this party

bro you know you were the one who never wanted to reveal your true identity...not me
if I would have came there the whole school would have got alarmed by the news that Maan Khurana is The MSK The future owner of KI...
You dint wanted to gain further attention it wasn't my decision
waise bhi aapko attention ki kya kami...abhi hi saari ladkia aap par fida hai...tab to..
.dev teased

and bro I am not asking for a pub or disc party...anyways even your young to attend them...dinner party bhi chalega...
annie said with an innocent face

you monsters...go get ready...no matter how much I try'You both gonna win...so get ready fast I'm already tired
dadi maa'You to get ready please...


Beta I am already not feeling well...you three enjoy...i trust my leader you'll take care of these two..
dadi patted his cheeks lovingly before going back to kitchen

********************

Geet putar ji...I am proud of you...you again made your papaji proud...papaji patted kissing her forehead...

Yeh le beta halwaa tera favorite...
maa filled her mouth with all the halwaa

so my little baby dolls did it...
Nt smiled at her sisters hugging them cutely
and mine well...
veer joined the hugg sweetly

maa I'm really tired am going sleep soon tonight..
.geet asked lazily

khaana to khaa le jhalli...

Nahi maa am really tired and aaj bahutt khaa lia tha shaam ko...dev bhi tha


Geet I have told you earlier even stay away from that Dev'He is good for nothing...
Nt warned a little sternly

di...aap uss se itna chidhte kyu ho...he is not that bad either...
sam protested

yaa but not good either...
Nt answered

ohkiz stop it now me going sleep...bye goodddy night to all...
she ran off followed by sam...

Me as well...am also hell tired
good night


*******

so he won again...
sam answered wearing he leather party shoes on


Yes yes yes...he won again...
geet laughed happily twirling round sam holding tight his arms

she twirls round holding herself tight...saying with all love and affection
I love him, I love him, Love him

am so sooo sooo happy you know...he was soo good
ek punch and the knocked that idiot down..then you know he fainted in one go..
She chuckles..I love him, love him, love him sooo very much

Love whom...
an authoritive voice came sending shivering down both the spines

di...
geet muttered under her breath

so whom do you love ?...
Nt asked again...

Wo...woo..haan di...I love Iron-man...
geet tried shade herself

yaa di Iron-man...wo hum dono abhi Iron-man dekh rahe the na isslie...
sam supported

ohkiz fine...be ready fast...maa papaji soo gaye hai jaldi karo...warna apne hi party main late ho jaayenge...move out...back doors opened, am waiting in car at backyard...
Nt ordered setting her hairs looking in the mirror

di veerji...
geet asked

aaj tak maa papa yaa veerji ko pata chala hai di sneekouts ke baare main...
sam winked to Nt...Today is are day...

Yiiekksss are first ever sneekout...sam sounded super thrilled

fast girls we running late for party...Rahul waiting for us...
Nt smiled wickedly
new Bf...san teased
naahhh...driver...Nt answered...fast me going now...come soon or else am leaving you both...she moved out of the room

di...waittt...we coming...
both rushed after Nt

******

hall filled with disco lights
loud music sounds thrilling the air
people going freaked off dancing
drinks, foods everything showing the lavishness of the thrilling party

and here comes the three girls
dressed ever so gorgeous...


Nt in her ever so short red dress with high flashy heals


sam in a beautiful short denims with a black tight fit top coming right above her waist with long leather shoes


and are little princess in her pink flairy frock...with glittery silver sandals...looking like a baby doll

Boys drooling over the three princesses head to heal
girls envying them, fuming with jealousy

di...aapko nahi lagta we sound a little too young in this party...sam asked in a worrying expression

di I don't think we fit into this parties...Look everyone is quite elder then us...of your age...
geet added

few are drunk and see how they dancing...
sam disgusted

di am not comfortable...please do something


stop it girls it's your first party that's why...
Nt made an annoyed frustrated face...stop being a spoil sport

anyways this for you both...so you were suppose to come now let's hurry up
nothing gonna get wrong...I am with you guys
come now...
Nt dragged both inside

flashlights turned towards the three...

and Nt announced

So guys...may have your attention please
as you all know today's party is just for my princesses
so lets here it for geet and sam

music please...


Loud music again echoed the hall darkness surrounding

dance on full rhythms lost in their own world

kash dev bhi hota na..
.geet made a baby face
usko kuch kaam tha na yaar tabhi usne refuse kia..
.sam replied cutely
yaa yaa.
.geet pouted

although geet and sam were a little uncomfortable first but then they forgot everything and started enjoying together
oblivious to everyone
maintaining a specific distance from others

and are party animal Nt got busy with her new Bf

dance, music, masty all was going on full swing

and here enters the three...



Precap: party continues...n guess who the three are😉

Prev:Part 3 Next:Part 5

My Other SS A Life For You

so here's part 3 hush...m rlyy not able to type but still i did it

spl thnxx to my idiot sisy 🤢 aouch...i hate u liz

n now so here it is...the whole school doesn't know Maan as MSK the future owner of KI not even Geet knows this little screat of Dev and Maan

will trying update Life For You as well but really cant promise

i really have severe allergy and with all the holi colors it took a Little toll this time

AND WHO ALL WANT PMz PLEASE SEND ME BUDDY REQUEST

I'LL NOT BE ABLE TO PM OTHERWISE


❤️Luv Divzi

Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update dear
her Annie and dev is happy for his bro but msk is getting out of breath only got hugs from his siblings lolz
and there he knocked out a man and won the match is he lolz
awesome yaar geet is in love with maan
and nt so mean she is thanx god she dint hear her
and the party was superb cool
lets see wat happen when this three will enter and meet
i hoping for soon update
continue soon
Edited by zohafarheen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome dr!!!!!
loved it...
waiting for more n more parts...
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love it graphics
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Posted: 13 years ago
omggg di u know ur fab
hehe LOLzzz 😆
bechara MSK
so no one knows who is MSK
or shal i say Maan

n Geet's sneeking out
i hate u...y cant u be lyk Nt...
i also wnna sneek out wid u😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

get well soon di😳


Edited by sweat_poison - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet s madly in love..
NT has got so much attitude..
loved dev-annie-maan relationship..
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Posted: 13 years ago

yummm yummm
i was reading while having ice cream...

you want some
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Posted: 13 years ago
ahh..NT is very smart di of Sam n geet...
lovely update...

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