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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
lovely ,unbelievable
awesome , thumbs up
4 this
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Posted: 13 years ago
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IMP - i hav created new account for PMS...so dose who wants to be pmed for my maneet updates, plzz add me..





Gori Teri Ankhne Kahe

[ note - link for dose..who havn't heard d song b4...


music..

d clouds blackened in pain as geet made her way towrds him wid a bunch of flowers in her hands...d water waves in d background roraed ..jumping from dere to dere..she walked towrds him..dere was emptyness in her eyes..deir was pain..dey were millions of unsheded tears..she was holding onto...her feet felt weak as she stood in front of him..she felt..she may just cruhs down any moment...

apart from d flowed..dere was sumthing in her hands..dere was a bracelet..a diamond bracelet..he had given her once...

she thupped beside him..placing d floweres on d dead house, where d funeral of maan was buried..she started motionless and lost...

gori teri ankhen kahe
me raat bhar soyi nahi

a tear rolled from d corner of her eye, as she looked at d cement strusture wid no blink...she gently carrased her fingers over d cement structure n her eyes remained d same..dere was unbearable pain in her eyes...like she didn't even know if she was dead or alive..all she could see was d last smile of her maan..

chanda dekhe chhupe kahin
aur taren jante hai sabhi

she looked around..d sun had set..but nothing made difference for her...

sitting in front of fire wid a red bride attire..she looked at him..his eyes were smiling..dat satisfaction in his eyes for her marrying her was so special..so overwelming..she couldn't explain...

she smiled in tears remembering just how beutidull life was once ...

ke kisne dil liya
kisko dil de diya

she remembered how her maan had filled her mang beautifull..his each phera taking her hand along was not only his promises..it was his love...

ye dil ka lagana
koi janta nahi

she closed her painfull red eyes..remebring d fresh morning aftr dat suhagraat..how she hav nuzzled herself lazily into his arms..not wanting to wake up..how her maan had engulfed her closely in his strong arms..showering her wid millions of kisses

he alwz loved to lick her..she smiled to herself remebering it..

gori teri ankhen kahe
me raat bhar soyi nahi

geet once again opened her eyes cuming back to reality and few more tears rolled down to her cheek..finally falling on his funeral...

she couldn't see dat tear on his funeral..
she felt her heart vil just explode in pain..she just turned around..looking away from him...not able to meet him..getting up, she just ran from dere...

music

geet jumped into his arms and maan willing picked her up..both giving a naughty pose at d camera...making funny faces...having so much of..giggling..laughing..fighting n finally landing up on making love...

dil me teri yaad basi
tu samajhega nahi

she stood into d watre..as her eyes fell on water..but she could see d clouded pictures of d memories..once deir togetherness had created...
a big wave of water came on it..and d d pictures feded away...her eyes widened as she despecrately looked here n dere for 1 glimpse of dose memories...

jo hai mera paas hai tera
mera kuchh nahi

shedding her pain in d form of tears, geet walked through d lonely road when her eyes felll on a small banch dat was holding her memory sumwhere...

geet pouted her face n looked away..maan rolled his eyes..n kissed her cheek forcefully..rubbing his stuble on her delicate cheek..she frawned n looked at him annoyed..he simply took her pouting lips into his for a bearth taking...
kiss didn't seem to finsih, and she felt sumthing cold in her wrist..she opened her eyes pulling away and noticed a beautfiull diamond bracelet in her wrist..geet got so excited n smiled widely at maan,n instead..maan once again took dose tempting lips into his mouth...

kyu ankhiyan chhupau
kyu tujhko satau

geet smiled in tears..carrasing her hand on d empty banch..she remebered how much maan used to annoy her on small small things..not living a single chance to make her lips swolen alwz..

dil tod ke tera
me kya pau

not wanting to bear dis pain..she walked away from dere..holding her bracelet tight into her hands...

she remebered how much she loved him..she remebered how much she had kissed him alwz...she loved when he licked her skin..she loved when he had bite her..she loved when he had simply kept looking at her for hrs n hrs...

bol piya bol piya bol piya bol
piya bol piya bol

not able to bear dis dooriyan anymore...

she stood on d big rock and looked at d endless water..she could see d watre..her eyes only could see him..hust once step and she vil reach him..she felt so...
she picked her 1 foot n raised it further wid determination...

sajan teri baten badi
ke me raat bhar soyi nahi

she was about to move further..when she felt a tug on her dupatta..she smiled widely..she felt her maan had hold her dupatta like he used to do alwz...she turned around in a jerk...and her smile was slowly wiped off when she noticed just when d tug was...

she kind of knew..why it happened..it was maan sumwhere..

music...

sitting in open tarrace all alone..she took d blade in her hand n looked at it fearless...d memories of deir closeness again flashed in her eyes..she carrased her delicate wrist wid d blade...

but den..she remebered once she was in kitchen and her finger had cut..he was worried sick..he had made a fuss over it..had scolded her so much..and she had only smiled at him..when he had licked d finger non stop...
she looked at d blade again n threw it away...

just den she heard sound of rain and she ran downstairs instantly...

aate jaate mausam jaise
lagte the sabhi

ohh god..its raining..thought geet..as she ran downstairs holding a spoon in her hand...rolling her eyes..she instantly started to take out d clothes dat were already drentched...

humne bhi toh manga rab se
apna bhi koi

she was about to remove another cloth..when she felt sudden pull on her hand..and she was pulled into his arms...

she rolled her eyes at him, "maan..chhodiye..dekhiye sare kapde gile ho rahe hai.."

but he didn't listen, instead taking her in his arms..he rolled both of dem on d d muddy ground wid d rain pouring on dem...
she closed her eyes as she felt his lips running on her wet skin..drinking d water from her neck..she wriggled into his embrace and he deeped his kisses as a reaction, "jaan u made me wild.." mumbled maan lost..

duniya se bachau
palko me chupau

giggling at his statement..she pushed him a bit and ran from dre..maan smiled to himself and ran behind..in no time..saw was back into him arms...
and both giggled and laughed n loved each other non stop...

dil jit ke tera
sabko batau

geet stood at 1 corner , smiling at how beautifull dere each moment was once..she smiled in tear watching her maan kissing his geet non stop..even d heavy rain even didnt' matter to him...

she was just smiling when..she saw her memory fedding away again...

sun gori sun gori sun gori sun
gori sun gori sun

she stood under d heavy rain all alone..and tear made deir ways out..trying to run wid d dose water droplets...she knew..dose memories can never be repeated..bcoz..her maan was gone..long gone...

and she stood dere..crying her heart out...she touched her each body part when he had kissed in dat rain..she cried n cried...maan...

gori teri ankhne kahen
jane anjane me kahin

she wiped her tear fulleyes..as she saw d endless sea in front of her eyes..dere was pain...determination..she wanted her maan..she knew..she simply just could stay alive without him...

she just wanted her maan...
determined at her thought..she stood up...

chanda ne bhi dekha nahi
aur taron ne bhi jana nahi

she started to walk in d watre...
she walked till d water reached her knees...
she walked till d water reached her stomach...
she walked till d water reached her shoulders...

ke tune mujhe dil diya
mera dil le liya

she stood dere for few seconds...
her eyes fell on d bracelets...
she smiled but dere were not tears now...she knew ..she was going to her maan...

mera jine ka bahana
koi aur nahi

she took out d bracelet from her hand
...submiting her bracelet in d watre..she closed her eyes...and gave up...

gori teri aa...

d clouds roared in pain...d waves jumped in unbearble ache..agony...

music...

seconds passed...
...and only d bracelet dat was left floating in d watre..as d last memory of deir LOVE !!


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MishTy

Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
yapeee me first...

😭😭😭...diil roye roye...akhomay asu aye...ferve aca lage...
payer mai do pal jina such may sukun ki maat lage...😭😭😭

There so much pain...😭😭 I cry untill the story end...
but I love it too...its like sweet pain for me...

akher Maan ki pass apni Geet chale gaye...a smile crept in my face then...😊

Realy Mishty I love this as much as I love u...😉




Edited by Mayamaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
OMg Very First thing The Song selection was Owesome Mish
than the pain in geet's heart you show it very well.
It actually made me cry very first time
and yeah one secret
I event didn't know the song when u talk about this to me
than i took it from my friend and listened and now I can i m really in love with this OS and Song
Huhhh You killed Maan
I hate u for this but that last bracelet wala part was owesome so I love you for that
Edited by Angelic_analyst - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Superbbb song. 👏 👏
I love this song.Ur story make this song more beautiful. 👍🏼
Geet ka dukh aur gane ki lines ko bhut hi ache se match kiya hai.Gr8 writing skills. 👏 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
M crying...crying n still crying
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
very very sad and emotional update

plz dont write like this its makes very heart touching about the loved ones

bye take care
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69

mishty rula diya yaar...😭😭

dat was too good

nd upar se ye song it always make me cry...

amazing update by u

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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
OMG YAAR
U MAKE ME CRY😭😭
AMAZNGGG OS
LVD IT...
U R SUPRBBB👏👏👏

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