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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 18mypride

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yaaron if musky is silent means we will be getting new maaneet soon...</font>[/EM]

SACHHI WOW YAAR...
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Posted: 13 years ago
iam jumping with joy...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛
👏finally u r updating...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃😃
😃muskaan can't wait more...😉😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉
😉im dying to read this ff nd do update bandeshein too...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛
nd plz update atleast 2 parts... plz plz plz... 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
uff me demanding again... 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

Dhundlae aks

PART 180
she closed her eyes.. tears shedding her mind screams it loud it could be his choice.. & her heart looks at the phone to call him atleast she could hear his voice. Sometimes this fight would never end like this endless night.. dam.. it was not even 1.15am.. !!mind trying to give logic while.. heart not wanting to believe any excuse. Why is he not here.. even on the worst days of his work he never failed her.. then...
it felt she was torn between this reflection of his & him ..himself!!! still her heart continues to cry loud yearning for him. Though.. this feeling is been an evil bliss!!!
she can't believe he actually didn't come to meet her. Crying & her own inner turmoil took a toll on her. By morning she had high fever..her eyes swollen & red.. she was still restless trying to sleep.
Latter in the morning Maan came down for a late breakfast. Typical weekend brunch at KM.
Yash ' Geet kanha hain?
Maan was not looking for her. He didn't want to meet her questioning eyes. But then..she didn't come for breakfast, he became little concerned.
Daadi ' she is not well.
Maan immediately got up taking a plate in his hand.
Yash ' wat r u doing Maan
Maan continued to serve the some paratas in the plate ' main Geet ko deken aata hoon
Daadi ' haan yeh teehk rahega, main ne poucha tho mana kar diya tha usne
Maan was not sure wat he was going to tell her abt last night, but then he had to see her, make sure she was fine.

He walked in calling for her.. his tone was already shaking in concern.. but trying his best to be normal.
Mistimia.. mistimia.. kya huwa tumhe
she slammed the bedroom door at him ' how does that matter to u?
Misti
he yelled.. in sudden respond to her slamming the door
u never care? Its always abt u or ur zidd..main tho kuch maine.. aur humara..
she looked away all this never mattered to u
main hi pata nahi kya kya
.. .. she tried not to say anything..but she was so angry & emotional.. seeing him finally after the whole nights wait
he kept the plate aside.. & tried to touch her forehead.. she pushed his hand away
don't u dare touch me
tumhe koi haaq nahi banta

got damit tumhari problem kya hain ? he held her from the arms.. squeezing her
he closed his eyes losing himself .. he could clearly see her swollen eyes & heat vibrating from her
he instantly touched her forehead ' tumhe tho high fever hain
she snapped out of his hold ' don't act as if u care
I know u don't
issen liyen u
she didn't have to complete, he himself was guilty.. but well how could he let go is big fat ego
for gods sake Geet it was just one night
she glared back at him with teary eyes
exactly.. it is just one night.. tho main ne kya kaha?
Main kaun hoti hoon aap se pocuhne wali? Where u were & why u didn't u...
waisen bhi, its ur life u can do wat ever u want
Geet!! just stop it?
She looked away like she had nothing do with him
Oh god Geet!! I was drunk last night
yah right
she mocked critically
I think u have spent more drunken nights here than in KM.. she walked away not accepting his excuse
Maan reached down & seized her wrist, tugging Geet to the her feet, shoving her against the wall, he pinned her arms on either side so that she couldn't try to push him away. He leaned in so that his mouth was right next to her ear.. our project first phase was completed yesterday..she turned her face.. like she was least interested we went to our frds place.. & then
geets heart almost stopped.. she was not sure wat she feared to listen
they had that some stupid movies.. & then drinks.. i left from there early
Geet was still not responding to him.. he angrily punched the wall.. next to her face.. she could feel it right down
misti.. his voice was so vulnerable like he was accepting some sin
I was high...
she tried to wiggle out of his grip.. like u have never been
he took a deep breath & rested his head on her forehead.. looking straight into her eyes furiously
I was high.. I was high on u.. I don't know wat I would have done to u .. agar main yanha aata
her lashes fluttered... filled with shyness with his open confession
his hands left her wrist & slowly slipped into her hair.. snaking through the curls & cupping her head
all I could remember was..u.. how it felt to feel u.. deep in u
she could feel his hardness ..against her belly.. throbbing... as he said every word
God dammit he pulled her head angrily with his hands nestled in her curls to meet her eyes
it would have been better to plead gulity, after getting high than bearing this pain to see this mistrust in ur eyes for my...
Geet gulped searching his eyes wat did he just say.. for his
Their eyes were locked their mouth only separated by a breath... she whispered for your???
he leaned closer pressing his lips mesmerized by her questioning eyes.. not sure himself wat he meant. His hands clenched hard on her waist leaving bruises in the process. His tongue met hers, wildly playing with it. His hand caressed her back.. slipping in the kurti, slowly traveling from there upwards to her curves. He pulled slightly back & frowned.
I want u.. he chuckled & pressed her harder against the wall, keeping her pinned against the wall by the force of his hips. She nervously chuckled as she felt her body shudder from his thrust.
He tried his best not to lose himself.. he just couldn't stop himself, his lips met hers passionately. She caressed his face slowly traveling down his throat still lost in his word. Her fingers slipped into his hair pulling him closer, Maan chuckled against her lips crushing her still closer to his hardness. His lips trailed from her swollen lips to her jaw, lusciously biting the tender skin. She moaned deep in her throat, pressing her mound harder against him. He nibbled his way down to her collarbone, suckling at her, leaving marks on the sensitive skin. She gasped at the sensation, closing her eyes. She felt his one hand move up, his fingertips grazing her curves.. struggling with her inners.. Geet instantly turned around feeling very shy to the extent they were moving. .. she could feel her buds grew harder craving to be blessed with his passion.
I know.. he continued to kiss her shoulders... pushing her sleeves while his other hand the snap the bra.. & freely cupped her curves. Her eyes closed with the fire that was burning in her veins. She felt his hardness pressing against her back..rubbing slowly.. she couldn't believe they were almost making love dressed!!!..ok..partly dressed. He growled, pushing her fiercely against the wall, driving his body against her back, losing all his will, Maan slowly leaned his head against the back of her neck, his breaths heavy & labored as Geet nervously swallowed hard, didn't dare to look at her puchki .. with a sweet confused smile.. did he just.. she was feeling so cutely happy.. yet embarrassed.

Maan awkwardly went into the wash room & cleaned himself up. He got himself all fixed up in the bathroom as he walked back to the room, where Geet was still standing near the wall..pink cheeks with wat just happened between them.

Precap
pay back
-PREV PART 179 NEXT LINK THREAD 29-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally u updated!!!!
lovely update
love it
update next part soon
will be waiting
Edited by 3295 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow di yu back in action!!!!!!
loved it di...
poor geet she cried whole nite...😡
high fever!!!!😕
omg maans confession was so cute...😳
they are making out half dressed😉😉
one more update di plzzz😛
missed ur update choo much😃
Edited by mayapari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
readers of this ff also feel lyk when we didn't get update...😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉😉

for muski...😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
😉
😉pyaase hain naina tarse saari raina...(for the update)

jinmein tu hai rehta...(puchki nd mistimia)

haal kyun tu jaane na... sayyaain pehchaane na haal dil ka kyun tu jaane na...

saiyaan naino ki bhasha samjhe na...-2

kuch to hai zaroor dil mera kitna majboor...-2

jaan ke bhi to jaane na...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆😆
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waiting for update listening this song again nd again... 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey for the first tym my cmnt on same page...😃😃😃

thanks for update muskaan now im reading it...😛 😛 😛 😛😛
😛will comment later...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sneha137

hey for the first tym my cmnt on same page...😃😃😃

thanks for update muskaan now im reading it...😛 😛 😛 😛😛
😛will comment later...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

me all blushing blushing..
thanks for the song



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Posted: 13 years ago
luv u darling brilliant update
waiting 4 more
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Posted: 13 years ago
y maan didnt complete his sentence...y they dont open their heart even when they r in such intense situation...

muskaan i m nw again reading ur pyar ka ehsaas...now i m in part 30...njoying my holiday
Edited by paponecon - 13 years ago

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