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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Whaaattt what what what 😳

Maan is attempting to play cricket with Geet's head?! Jeez!

I think I preferred it when I thought Geet was just innocent, she was a lot nicer, I don't like this ruthless Geet & even more ruthless Maan. How is she supposed to be his mistress if she's his enemy?

I'm so confused.

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

for new thread its awsem maan turned table on his side in few minutes first geet confessed her plan and then maan love the way maan explained his full plan poor geet is in msk trap it is the first update after addng you i thaugh you left it in middle but please do next soon can't wait to read more

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

on the new thread loved it and did geet brother did do this maan found out about her and was just using her loved it your forgiven for be away for so long thanks for the pm

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

oh god from this twist came dear

maan knew everything about geet dear

and even though he played with her

ossum dear

do they really loved eachother anytime...

ossum one

and what the hell dear maan had played with bat and did he hurt her dear

do maan can do that

and that for his geet dear

pls dear

dont kill maaneet dear

we want love in them pls

upddate one more soon dear cant wait to see what happens next pls dear

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Congrats on your new thread...
really an amazing update dear...
geet played the game very well ... but with MSK...
tables turned so quickly ? he knows every thing before😲...
please update soon dear...

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

I want to give u an idea u should writing a dairy on ur daily activies on ff bcoz ur daily life activities r more funny n interesting

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awesomepooja

@awesomepooja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Amazing part.
Will he really hit her?
Bitting my nails.
Update soon.

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hindu4lyf

@hindu4lyf

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

HOLY CRAP! What the hell just happened there?! :O

So basically, you disappear from the face of earth for err something like 3/4 months and when you're back you torture us with THIS?! Ok no seriously, amazing twist! Totally did not see that coming but I think this chapter gave a lot more substance to Geet's character than a girl who is going gaga over a gangster with good looks. I should've guessed that Maan is too smart to fall for something like this..him being the King of the Underworld and what not! Beautifully written!

Oh and I loved the 'boom baby' bit!😛

But I'm warning you madam, no sad ending OK? (please, pretty please? :D)

P.S. Your dried pepper story had me laughing like mad!🤣

P.P.S. I refuse to wait another few months before you update again so PLEASEE update soon? and lastly, get well soon!🤗

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samidsamid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Cngrtz on new thrd n Okeii...finaly u updtd wid ur lots of excses ;)...oh gd wat an updt cmpltly shking n thriling...n last sntns tk ma brth away...nw plz dnt thrw any tantrm n gve us nxt updt...;) hpfly its psbl 2 u;)...updt soon dear...