'Removed' - Page 23

Originally posted by: khushi1022

sneha...

for late comment...

dis part is so emotional bt i luv'd it...

d last two lines of dis update is really true bt senti types...

you r amazing writer dear...

fate had played its game wid two bst frnds...

me feeling really sad for maan n cherry...

hope two years jst pass for dem...

emotional bt amazing update...

for you...

plz plz plz...big wala plzzz...

update sooon...

ya...

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n rocking updates! Well written ..hey saw u updated n read part 6 as well.

Originally posted by: dona86

amazing

loved it...

Originally posted by: smallville

Oh no maneet separated :(
I hope they reunite soon !!
Awesome update!!

Originally posted by: mchopra

OMG me is super sad..u cant do that..

Originally posted by: billy_ritu

loved it

Originally posted by: afsh4a

loved it...awesome

Originally posted by: billy_ritu

nice but painful

maaneet will be no longer together:(

Originally posted by: maaniqra

superbbb

Originally posted by: abina03

brilliant part...

but sad one make me cry in this late night

they share a strong bond so distance never make any difference

but separation is always painful...

love you

thanks for the update&pm

Originally posted by: mishtiritu

Me loved it sooo Muchhh...!!!!!!!

Awww... Yaar Destiny played with them...!!!!

Hope they get together soon...!!!!

Me waiting for next update...!!!!!

Sorry me feeling sleppy sleepy thats why short comment...😉

Luv yaaa sooo mcuh...!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hugs & Kisses to u...!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Anu-Ananya

Awesome updates sneha di!👏

Read 3 parts together!⭐️

Omg Maan's mom died but loved how Geet consoled him and had trust that he could be strong throughout!!😊

Loved their adventure trip!😳

Awww Bungee jumping was so romantic!!! Geet trusting Maan so much and "indeed its a bliss" was too good!😳😳☺️

Oye hoyyeee sparks in both due to the touch haayyyeee!😳

loved their walk at the beach- entangled hands their intensity of love--too good!😃

loved how they didnt miss a single moment to be with each other!!!!!😳

aww they were busy but still got their own moments with each other hayyyee!😳

the father son convo was so senti!!!!!!!!!!

OMG what a game the destiny has played! Guess Fate has it all set to bring them closer again!😭

It was like the story "The Gift of the Magi" !!!!!!!!!!😭

Poor Maan had planned so much and so did Geet!

Though they put up a brave face!!!

awww both were so emotionally withdrawn!!! too sad!😕

But hope the long distance doesnt decrease their intensity of love though I would want Maan becoming more AYM and Geet more meek so that when they meet again it would really give them their "butterfly" feeling😳😳

OMG their departure and separation was so emotional

You rocked it Sneha di!👏

Loved how beautifully you portrayed their feelings!!⭐️

Loved how you explained their situation!!👍🏼🤗

cont soon!😳

Originally posted by: snehaj

<font size="5" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" color="#ff0000">Heya Abby..</font>

<font size="5" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" color="#ff0000">Oh My God..!!!</font>

<font size="5" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" color="#ff0000">wat a saddy saddy comment.. </font>

<font size="5" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" color="#ff0000">But i cant blame u</font>

<font size="5" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" color="#ff0000">i very much deserve it..</font>

<font size="5" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" color="#ff0000">I gave u all a super sad update</font>

<font size="5" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" color="#ff0000">so nw my time to get</font>

<font size="5" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" color="#ff0000">super sad comments..</font>

<font size="5" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" color="#ff0000">bt just wait for 1 more update </font>

<font size="5" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" color="#ff0000">I promise to make it up to u</font>

<font size="5" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" color="#ff0000">pakka.. 😳 </font>

Originally posted by: pinkybedi

Hi dear,

Sometimes distance helps in realisation about relationships...I hope this distance works well with them

Vry gripping story with freshness of ideas n thoughts

👏

Originally posted by: AbbyluvsMaan

Uhh... Sneha di... Dnt even think i didnt lyk dis update... It ws fabulous... It touched my heart rlly... N u knw... Only amazin things touch your heart... So dis made me cry..dat shws hw brilliantly u portrayed each n evry emotion dat it touched d chords of my heart... N i knw dat dis SS is gonna be an amzin 1... Be it happy moments or sad ones... Ur writin jz makes it beautiful...

Love you Sneha di...
Hugs n kisses...

Originally posted by: maneetlover1

Amazing update sneha and very painful endng..and ha wat u said is very true..SILENCE KEEPS A DISTANCE IN EVERY RELATION..u knw iam experiencing it..