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Sanjana!
I have said it once and I will say it again with no hesitation whatsoever. This is by far the best story that I have read on this forum. Your use of language and then the appropriate scenes to convey those words, honestly, leaves me astounded.
This might sound weird but I'm very obsessive when it comes to language...I'm the kind of person who will correct sentences in my head when I'm reading them😆 because it irritates me to read them wrong. So to read something that has been written with such skill just plasters a huge smile of my face.
And then to top all that was the originality of your ideas, your story was different...in a very appealing way and I loved that about it.
This was beauty at its best and indeed the most entertaining transgression of limits I've seen in a long while.
Congratulations on writing something this beautiful, heart warming and perfect. You deserve all the appreciation you can get for this!👏
Love you loads, Cheers
-Marvee🤗
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