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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dhundlae aks

sorry for the delays me still down with my health will take some time
before i get more regular


PART 154


He closed his eyes as ache deep & low in his ' began to throb. He pushed her away & ran into the wash room. He opened the shower & stood under it... until the whole scene was over.. she sat out on the floor cuddled up.

Almost after an hr Maan came out dripping ' soaked in cold water. Geet gave him the towel silently.. he snatched it from her hand whispering dor raho mujhe se
she pouted cutely cribbing issen meri kya galti hain
he wiped his hair .. she gave him a t-shirt
he snapped it from her hand & looked at the shirt..yeh tho meri

she made puppy face trying to escape...he held her wrist.. she blushed trying to free her hand
mera sab kuch tho chora ke tum kanha ja rahi ho...
he came around & tucked her from behind. Current went down her spine, feeling his cold soaked chest sealed her back. She curled her hands together close to her thudding chest.
His fingers softly tucked strand of hair behind her ear... umm
he said in low & sensuously.
He lifted her hair & gently bit the side of her neck. She closed her eyes feeling she would melt any time. Suddenly, he whirled her roughly to face him. She stared up at him. She was surprised, but not frightened... she was shy..turning cherry red as his hands pulled her to him strongly.
He sighed resting on her shoulders when they heard Dev ' nt start all over again
Maan groaned ' again?
Geet giggled.. 3rd time
he rolled his eyes & went in the wash room taking her.
They both sat in the bath tub cuddled, sunk in the water with her dress all soaked..only thing separating their glued skin. She rested her head on his chest, her legs between his.. his arms wrapped around her waist.
His fingers occasionally tucked her strands behind her ears giving his luscious lips free access to her neck.
Geet giggled thinking abt the whole situation since morning
Maan shook his head - Uff bhai bhi na ..
she chuckled ' issme kya hain, they love each other
they have the wedding in 4 days
he retorted
wohi tho; kal se rasme shoru hojayengi
tho
she turned cutely to face him.. still in his embrace ' u really don't un derstand anything,
they won't be able to meet na
bhai wait nahi kar sakten, I mean why our place
aur kanha jayegen, Nt ke ghar main
Maan rolled his eyes
hotel wagera main...chi chi... kisi ne dehk liya tho.. yash sir bahut gussa karenge
aur yanha kisi ne dehka tho
yanha kaun hain
.. then she looked at him suspiciously.. aap kisi se mat kahna
tum pagal ho.. thats my bhai & bhabhi romancing their
... then he taunted tum mat kahna
she pushed him away angrily... they have been together for years now.. main ne kisi se kuch kaha
Maan eyes popped out... years???
she crossed her arms & moved to the other end of the tub.
He very curiously inquired ' u think its ok..
she looked at him from corner of her eyes ' ok wat??
he cleared his throat - I mean ok,
ok to
he cleared his throat again
ok to '
she rolled her eyes ' offcourse they both love each other
Dev proposed to her & she said yes
she emphasized.. proposed!!!!
she cribbed making all kind of faces propose tho dor ki baat hain..
chaddo
inse kuch nahi ho sakta
he was looking cutely at her .. totally confused.
She twisted her lips - they r in a relationship.. ok..
so its ok to..
she looked away
Maan immediately said hum bhi tho married hain na
she looked at him shock... her heart suddenly stopped
does he know abt the marriage certificate!!!..wat did he mean??
he immediately looked away from her questioning eyes.. mera matlab hain almost
she looked at him blankly still not able to understand wat did she just see in his eyes, or was it just her!!!
he restlessly pushed his hair behind tu pagal ho gaya hain Maan... yeh ladki tujhe kacha kha jayegi
he immediately changed the topic ' main mazak kar raha tha
she fluttered her lashes
he splashed water on her face.. she made a cute angry face & splashed it back at him
they continued to play making bubbles in the water tub with the soap & blowing it in the air. They were so lost in their own world they never realized when Dev & Nt left. They came out & changed. Geet put his cloths in the drier.. while they had their late lunch..in tracks & t-shirt.

Next 2days was hectic with wedding ceremony preparation. The love birds could hardly meet since Maan was stuck with Dev & Geet with Nt. But offcourse nothing could stop the majnu with his gende ka phool bit. He would still make it a point to wake her up with yellow flower... in his most unromantic style.

HALIDI DAY
Maan came to geets place with gende a phool. Even that seemed romantic now to her. He halfheartedly dropped her in Nt's place.
Geet ' aaj haldi hain, aap aisen moo phoolyen kyun ghoom rahen ho
he was already pissed off not getting enough time with her & worse she doesn't even care
tum khush ho na he gritted his teeth
she didn't know why he was angry now...she cutely said.. haan meri best friend ki shaadi hain offcourse main khush hoon
teehk hain khush raho.. bye

she tried to think of a reason for his anger... but nothing made sense.. well that is puchki..bematlab ka gussa.. she went in her vibrant yellow top with her jeans.. all the ladies surrounded Nt & began teasing her. Nt dragged Geet & went in the room while the ladies continued with music & dholak.
Geet giggled ' kya huwa
nt ' mujhe abhi haldi nahi lagana
Geet ' kyun
nt ' wo...
she looked here & there..
Geet smiled trying to understand... then told Geet to look down the window
Geet jumped in horror Dev!!! wat is he doing here?
nt begged Geet ' plz kisi bhi tarah unhe idhar le aana
Geet scratched her head ' lekin
kyun
I mean kaisen
nt made one of those cute little face that Geet just can't refuse.
Geet some how managed to get Dev to her room.. followed this choten nawab cribbing like usual
Geet ' aap yanha kya kar rahen ho
Maan frowned ' remember Dev mera bhai hain
while nt & Dev hugged & kissed... & kuchi koo..
Geet cribbed to babaji.. itni cute se romantic momemnt bhi inka moo bana huwa hain
Dev sweetly applied haldi on nt.. & she applied on his cheek...
Geet held maans arms & chuckled how romantic na
he pulled his hand away ' wat is so romantic in that
she waked him ' aapko tho romance R bhi atta
chadoo
he looked angrily ' how do u know mujhe pata hain yah nahi


she bit back ' aur kisi pata hoga
he scooped some haldi from the bowl & applied on her cheek...


yeh kya kiya aap ne.. yeh shagun ki haldi hain
tho
uff ho puchki
he took some more & applied more on her cheeks... she warned him.. he didn't seem to stop...
she took some more & applied on his face.. their fingers like knew their way around.. softly caressing he cupped her face sensuously.. her grip on his cheek tighten in anticipation... they were inches away..

Dev screamed seeing them.. applying haldi on each other like holi colors ' yeh kya rahe ho
nt ' yeh haldi hain.. holi nahi
Geet pulled her hand away... Maan straighten himself
Maan conveniently blamed her ' bhai issne phelne haldi dali
Dev ' mujhe sab pata hain, tu ghar chal
Geet showed her tongue
Maan winked.. with a glint in his eyes.
Precap
mehendi & wedding
-PREV PART 153 NEXT PART 155-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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em first one to Commentsee em Jumping with JOYyou see my hair is also happy and jumping like me


Maan said to stay away from herand then held her wrist and ask where she was goingUFFF yeh Puchki bhi na ek dum pagal haiDev-NT 3rd time NT was not aware of Geet's presence but Dev ko tu pata thaPhir bhi KANWARI kuri k ghar Poor Geet trying hard to explain her DUMBO PatiWhat is this all about Maan was so much trying to ask her views "ITS OK TO..."
bechari GEET dosti k liye kiya kuch karna par raha haik os ka apna HUBBY is all angry and Ghooming with LADDOO faceaapko tho romance R bhi atta chadoo They were playing with Haldi like Holi wah wah Kiya Romantic JODI hai


I Love You for such a Rocking Update and I hate You for updating on the same thread i was spamming with so much dedication then i realize i am 1st one to comment Tu GUSSA just flay away

Edited by Speechless - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Speechless

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PRINCE...THE ONE N ONLY THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA ,NOONE IS CARVED TO THIS PERFECTION:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
yaar...muski

pata nahi kay kahoon...

majnu toh kehne se raha,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,aur laila samajne se rahi😡🤢

kais yeh pyaar hai?????????????????????
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow superb
maaneet are so cute
aww mera unromantic confused majnu maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww...shadi toh kar li...chalo...abb sab rituals bhi karlo...sab reverse gear mein ja rahe hai...
Cute haldi scene di...!! Hayye...!!!
waha waha ramji... Jodi kya banai!!
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Loved all the 3 parts, awesome.
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geet's house is now OUR house to maan
not bad majnu ji lage raho 😆



Edited by -memorable- - 13 years ago
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ha ha loved it
the way maan is getting unromantic day by day
n geet frustrated by him
n phele pani se aur ab haldi se next mehendi n then phool se kya ek dusre ko nihar ne wale hai yeh dono????

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