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Part 27
When maan left from there ...she woke up and ran towards washroom...she was blushing profusely...she looked at herself in mirror and touched her lips ,her red cheeks ,removing her kurti from her shoulders which was unzipped...she shivered... lingering her fingers below she rubbed the love bite on her mound and flinched with a smile...she was breathing heavily with her eyes closed thinking about the night...she loved every bit of what maan did to her,this physical closeness was something unknown to her...she moved her fingers on her belly and shrugged looking away from mirror..
What maan did to her exactly...??she even felt shy loking at herself in mirror...Her sensitivity was again throbbing ..she tried standing straight as her legs were giving up going numb badly... she stood below shower... calming her senses..she flushed remembering how she kissed his bare chest and the way he entered her mouth with his toungue...She never knew this side of their relation...She came out wrapped in a towel and fell staright on bed hugging her pillow...He filled her completely with sheer pleasure and she was feeling so delighted and contended...she couldnt express...she was missing him .. she had goosebumps .. She changed and went downstairs after checking heself for the nth time in mirror...
Khurana mansion:
Arbaaz: tumhe pata bhi hai maan aaj kal kissey milta hai...kaha jata hai...kya karta hai..
Early morning malaika was pouring her glass with wine...least bothered ,she replied
Malaika : who cares...
Arbaaz: apne nashe ki halat se bahar aao...dammit I am not earning for your daily doses...
Malaika turned her face away from him and concentrated on her drink...her low self esteem and lack of confidence after she was continuously being rejected as a model ,she was in depression and drugs took a toll on her.Lately even arbaaz didnt helped her coz she was ruining his repo badly wherever she went, by her arrogance.
Malaika: ab kya kiya hai maan ne...she gave a sarcastic laugh...
Arbaaz: I'd hired a detective to trace him ...and you wont believe...He still meets that village girl!!!!!!!!!!
Malaika: which girl
Arbaaz: THAT VILLAGE GIRL ..GEET!!!!
Malaika freezed with her glass half way ...it was the last thing she could think about ...
malaika: what...that hoshiarpur girl...arbaaz are you sure???...Maan ab bhi us ladki sey...u mean wo usey bhoola nahi ab tak...Now what???
Arbaaz was smirking this time confusing malaika..
Arbaaz: maine sab soch liya hai...Maan wahi karega jo mai chahta hu...
Malaika: come on arbaaz ...jitna mai usey janti hu...ab hamari us par koi zor zabardasti nahi chalne wali...all thanks to mummy ji...gurrr!!!
Arbaaz: well...I have a trump card and thats GEET'S DARJI...as i got to know from my detective that maan and geet are sneakingly meeting...aur agar yahi baat mai geet k ghar walo ko bata du...then you very well know how village people react..unke liye ye kitni badi baat hogi ...if ill threaten them...unkey liye apni izzat se bad kar kuch nahi hota...
Malaika: Bingo! Phirr to hume kuch karna he nahi padega...wo khud geet ko maan se door kardenge...
Arbaaz: hmmm...Par ab mujhe maan se jyada tumhe sambhalna mushkil lagta hai...u know half of my time goes to handle the mess you do with ppl around...
Arbaaz left to execute his plan hurriedly...
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There maan was in no mood to leave hoshiarpur,he felt so alive there,his happiness knew no bounds,he wanted to take his geet away from this world...all for him...He moved in his usual lodge ,took a nap full of last night glimpses...he freshend up,had his breakfast in the lodge itself... his every cell was bursting with geet's feel...he very well knew that geet must be equally restless,but he wanted to hear from her that she loved everything between them ,he wanted her to admit she loved it and was dying for her call ...
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geet was marching left to right ,not knowing how to call him...she knew he is in hoshiarpur...she so badly wanted to hear his voice...she never felt this shy calling him...but today her accelerated heartbeats were not helping at all...but then it ws her need ,to hear him,she grabbed her cell ,shiver ran down her spine just with the hold of it...she connected him closing her eyes holding the phone as tight as possible ...everything was happening so naturally...
his cell buzzed!!!
Though maan was waiting for her call ,his body temperature went down awaiting his mishti's response today...
Maan : --------(breaths)
Geet:--------(heavy breaths)
They were quite for sometime...the feel of their breaths for each other was far more heavenly than their words ...maan was trying to feel every turn of her on bed as with every turn her jhumkas,anklets and bracelets were producing the mesmerizing sound for maan...geet was feeling so restless to hear his voice that she was twisting and turning every time hearing maan's breath on the other end and breathing harder everytime...this was enough for him to realize how geet was feeling...he was blessed today..he thanked god innumerable time for making an angel for him...
Maan: nahi jaunga is baar tumhe liye bina...
Maan broke the silence ...tightly closed his eyes and blurted out his strongest desire
Her cheeks were blood red listening his words but soon she got up immediately and sat straight on bed biting her nails ,getting worried...
Maan shook his head knowing Geet is getting worried...He knew he has to keep himself calm as his mishty gets scared easily ,and he needs to keep a check on his anger and stubborn self coz mishty is very sensitive when it comes to her parents...
Geet has never in her to deny anything Maan said... its not that she will ever disobey him, ,she is not only physically but soulfully an integral part of his life...
Maan: achcha baba ,jab tak tum na chaho ...he added
Geet :mmaine kkab mmana kkiyaa...
Maan was smiling listening to her words .. geet can never say "No" to him
Maan: acha..
Geet nodded her head..
Maan: theek hai mai aa raha hu tumhe lene...
Geet shook and still nodded,though helplessly...she want to cry her heart out ,that she wants to be with him evry second of her life ...may be even more than him...but she had her duties her limits as a daughter...she had tears in her eyes ,,,only she knows how she controls herself everyday as she knew her one "YES" cannot stop maan to take her away...but then like her ,maan was equally keen and responsible for maa and baba..and their love was not mean if anything else...he never asks geet such questions but his strength which was holding him away from geet was weakening every day...
Maan: jaan...maa baba ko bata dete hai...
Geet hissed hearing his words,she knew they ll get scared if she ll declare that she still hasn't forgotten maan which according to maa baba was nothing but insanity...she wanted to clear things very slowly and timely so that they could realize that its not her madness...its was not one sided...but they both love each other..and this realization to them will never come this sudden...they might still misunderstanf them...and this time she ll not backout...she also belongs to maan...
They were talking for sometime now when somebody banged on geet's door really hard...
Daarji: geeet...darwaza khol ...
Daarji was banging her door like a maniac...
Geet went numb hearing darjis's loud voice...
Geet: maan...daarji hai bahar
Daarji: darwaza kholti hai ki nahi...
Maan: geet ...ghabrao mat...darwaza kholo and don't disconnect
Geet: maan...she left the phone without disconnecting and rushed to open the door
As soon as daarji entered he slapped geet very hard ...
Maan: geeet...maan madly ran along with his phone towards her home ...he was yelling on phone ..he had no idea daarji could stoop this low..else he wud hav never asked her to open the door...he was burning in anger
Daarji slapped her one more time
Maan:don't u dare touch herr...u bas***d...geeet...
Geet lost her balance ...still managed to stand...looking at daarji speechless...she backed towards the wall not knowing why daarji hitting her...
Daarji: besharam...mai janta tha ki tum ladkiya khandan ka naam mitti mey milane k alawa kuch nhai kar sakti
Supriya came running and was shocked looking at daarji behaving like this...some unknown person was standing right beside them ...brij ,sachin and vinod were not at home...she rushed inside and tried stopping daarji but daarji pushed her badly
Daarji: kaha tha maine...isey padne mat bhejo...shaadi karwado iski ...aaj ye din nahi dekhna padta
Supriya was not geeting a word of what daarji was blurting out...she ran to call sachin before it gets too late and there maan was moving in air towards handa haveli...
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